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hi all thanks for liking previous part šŸ¤—

this is pooja concept n i write this if she get time she also write on this story

waiting for your response please coment n like
well evry one know my English so dont mind n avoide gramer mistake

advance sorry

PART 5

here in geet parents sat on dinning table waitng for Asad to coming

GEET mother : how much time he is taking , he has to go for job interveiw ... she said looking for him

GEET father : dont worry he will caming soon

Asad came greet his father n move toward exist he avoid his mother
Shreen : asad where are u going have BF

ASAd : i am getting late , will eat later he said ignore his mother

Sheeren : asad i am talking with you answer me , why you behaving like this ... she said with anger

HAyat khan ; asad your mother said some thing answer her n why you avoid her what happen he asked

Asad sighed : yeh ap poch rehhey hai k kiya howa hai he said looking in his eyes with pain

HAytat khna stop to see his son , he felt guilty so did not say any thing but sheeren said

Sheeren : asey kon say pahad ( mountain ) toot gya hai jo tum asey batein kar rahein ho huh ,,,,, she shout

Asad : i dont want to talk about that please

he said n moving from ther but shrren held his hand stop him

Shreen ; asad bus bhoot hogya kal say ap ki batameezi
bardasht kar rhey hai hai ab aur nahi Ap ase behave kar rehe hai k geet say sirf apka rishta hai hum toh unk kuch lagtey nahi she shout at him

HAYat : sheeen bus chup hojjao subha subha yeh acha nahi lagta , aur asad beta BF kar k ghar say jana cheye , bina kuch eat kiya jana acha nahi betho ,,, he said stoping the argument between mtoher n son

Sheeren want to say some thing but stop by hayat khan , asad come n sat he ate little n get up with out giving any ear to sheern talk he move from there

Sheeren : dekha iski harkatey ap nai , kuch zayda he sir par chud gya hai she said with anger

HAyat ; galti tumahri hai sheeren tum nai but he cut by his wife

Sheeren : ha ha sari galtiya toh mei n hi karti hoo ap baap bety to kuch galat nahi kartey hai na

hayat : mei ase nahi kha sheeren par tum nai jhoot bol kar geet ki shadi karwai hai tum nai yeh bath hum sab say chupai k Maan ki pehli BIWI zinda hai q sheeren tum janti hoo is sab say geet ki zindagi par kiya asar par sakta hai kase rahe ge woh us ghar mein kiya asan hoga us k liya yeh sab , tum nai geet k sath bhut galat kiya ek Maa ho kar tum

Sheeren : boliya ek maa ho kar kiya ha chup q hogye jo bol rehey they woh boliya k mein achi Maa nahi muje geet ki parwa nahi hai na yehi bol na chety hai na ap , hai bola mein nai jhoot tu geet ki bhalai thi is mein , aur kiya kharabi hai MAan k sath shadi mein sub kuch hai uskey pass , ghar hai izzat hai society mein acha khndan aur kiya chaiye she said dedense herslef
HAayt ; sheeren acha khandan dolat izzat sub hai uskey paas lakin kiya woh humri geet ko apni pehli biwi ki tarah izzat aur pyar dega , kiya uski biwi geet ko accept karge ,
Sheern : q nahi kare gi aur wase bhi MAriyam je khud aye thi rishta le kar mein nahi gye thi apni beti ka rista le kar k humri beti k sath shadi kar lo

HAyat : tum bath q nahi samj rahi hoo , maan geet k liya sahi fasela nahi tha , maan pehley say hi sahdi shoda hai

Sheeren : tu kiya chatey hai ap k apni beti ki shadi mein ap k bahi k lai howi ristey say kar deti , kardeti uski shadi ek 40 saal k admi say boliya na bhut khush hoty ap sab tub yeh mat bholiya asad k abu k ap baap beto ki waja say hi humri geet ko ase shadi karni par rhi hai ek toh is ghar k fenancial prob uper say bina drowry k koi shadi nahi karta aur sab say bari bat jis ladki ka ek bar Barat bina nikkah k looth chuki hai us k liya rishta milna kitna muskil hai boliya asan hai ? she shout this time remmebering what happen in they life in past


HAyat khan did not said , he deep his head down knowing he had at fault not much but he had if there financial problem was stable or his one wrong decision made geet life on stake

flash back of geet next part mein

( on demand on reader )

in other side geet sat on her bed she was realy upset with anie words

GEet st ; unhon nai asey q bola mana k hum nai aj say pehley woh ajeeb ajeeb si dishes nahi dekhi aur eat ki iska yeh matlab to nahi na k woh humai tunt kar zarori toh nhai na k sab ko sub kuch mil balkey hum tuh kush they apni choti sa ghar mein yeh gahr yeha tu map lekar chalna hota hoga Allah kitna bra hai aur khney k liya phely soch kiya eat karna hai , kon say ghar mein humri shadi karwad i Ami nai ,,,,,,,, she said to herlself n cribing

MAAN came to take his file saw her lost he thought that his rud behaviour hurt her

MAAN st : maan tu apne gussa par control nahi kar sakta kya jab dekho gussa karta hai ab uska pehla din hai nahi pata hoga usey k woh hor ki jaga thi par tuje asey behave nahi karna chiye tha she said to himself n curse his gussa ( me chalo deir aye dorast aye )

MAAn clear his throth to get her attention , geet saw him n get alert at once get up from bed start noting her dupatta on her finger in nervisnouse , maan saw this
MAAn st : ye muje dekh inta dar q jati hai meri face toh thek hai , he look himself in mirror šŸ˜†

GEET st : yeh kuch bol q nahi rahe

MAAN st ; kiya bolo

GEET st : nicey BF par kitna bol rahey they ap kiya inki zaban (tongue) ko rat nai kha liya ( hai itna bola k humrey readerjutey mar rahe they isko😔 )

MAAN st : yeh kuch bol q nahi rahi Allah kitna muskil hai yeh sab kase bath karo ( ley muh say bol )

MAAN chup fariya let me concentrate ( ohhh 😭😭 mein pooja ko bol dungi k mujko nahi write karna mera ko chup bola mumy )
MAAN : Ya ALLAh ap nai asey master peice banai hai

Me ; nahi bolti jao ab khud bolo mein chali 😔 🄺

MAAn : shukar hai gyeee šŸ¤”

GEET : yeh pagal hai ap nai ap say bth kar rahe hai she thought

she came clsoe slowly n stand infront of him ( thoda dor ok )
they look in to each other eyes mahi mahi

MAAN : woh mein khe rha tha k

GEET: chalo boley toh kuch she said to her self

MAAN : matlab nichey Bf par jo bhi ,,,,,,,,, his phne satrt ringing he stop n look his phone n attent the call

Geet : khoti call jab bhi yeh bath shuro karty hai yeh ajai hai i hate you fariya
me ; mein kiya kiya ???????????? 😲


maan end his call look at her standing qiute

MAAn : BF table par jo bhi howa usko dil say mat lena mere woh sab kehna ka matlab nahi tha

GEET : nahi koi bath nahi humai nahi pata tha k woh horam ji ki chair thi

MAAN : tum mera matlab Ap

GEET : Ap humain tum keh saktey hai she said mumer to herlf mein itni budhi nahi hoo

MAAN : huh

GEET : nahi kuch nahi

MAAn : tum nai BF kiya nah sahi say he said satrt a conversation

GEET : ji , she said looking other side playing with her dupata

MAAN : woh agar tumai kisi bhi cheez ki zarort hoo toh tum
bol saktiho mein office ja raha hoo kuch chiye tumai to lado
ga he said shit maan kiya bol raha hai tu... said to himself

GEET : nahi mujko kuch nahi chaiye , she repley
MAAN ; tu mein chalta huh he said n turn to go

GEET ; woh suniya

MAAN stop

GEET : woh , she was nervouse how to say

MAAN : kuch kena hai he asked

She node her head

MAAN : tu khao

GEET : woh ap bura toh nahi manao gey she asked

MAAN noye his brrows 😳 and asked asye kiya bath hai he thoghut she will asked about hor

MAAN pocho nahi mano ga

GEET ; woh apki TIE CLOTH SAY MATCH NAHI KAR RAHI she said at once closing her eyse not want to get sclod first day from him

MAAN : huh😲 kiya he get shock n realise what she said
he look himself in mirior

MAAN st : bol toh sahi rahi hai tie match nahi horahi
he look at her she standing with close eyes , he smile to see her scaring face move to cupbaord so change his tie

geet open her one eye to see y he not scold her she did not find him n open her both eyes to look where he go
saw him chosing tie she smile

GEET st : chalo bch gye help karo kiya unki he quetion herslef kar hi deti ho warna late hoga

she move toward him

GEET : mein help karo she asked

MAAn saw her node his head give her space so that she chose his tie

geet took matching tie n give him , he take it n remove his tie n come infront of miror
she was stand behind him maan wore tie n turn toword geet give her small kiss on her forehead in ternece n went from ther e
here geet was shock 😲

geet st unho nia humai hse was sooo shy shy cover her face ā˜ŗļø



to be continue

here is part five hope you all like this part too finger cross
sarey romantic writer please give me tuition mujko romance ka r bhi nahi ata hope mein nai garbar nahi ki hai maaneet sceene mein

NOTE : sorry for delay next part

NOte PM will be send by pooojaaa





Edited by maankijann - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part blushy
asad is upset wit his mom coz she made geet 2 marry maan nd hided dat maan' 1st wife is alive 😔
if geet wasnt married 2 maan den she was forcd 2 marry 40yr old uncle
maan is findng difficult 2 talk wit geet bechari meri blushy ko daata šŸ˜†
geet selectd maan's tie nd in return he gave kiss 😳
aise hi maaneet ke scene daal na waitng 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
tu hamesha romantic scene me comedy kyu daalti hai šŸ˜”šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


Agar maan ne geet ko Horam samajh k kiss kiya hoga na... toh I will kill u 😔😔
Edited by Pooooooooooooja - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Poooja

tu hamesha romantic scene me comedy kyu daalti hai šŸ˜”šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


Agar maan ne geet ko Horam samajh k kiss kiya hoga na... toh I will kill u 😔😔


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtypie


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