Nanhi Pari...

Hello Everyone,

Its been a while since I penned some lines , having been caught in finishing up my stories and my articles...

Neetu aka DC, did request me to pen some lines and so have I attempted here.. yet again...

This one is dedicated to Neetu aka desi chic...!

I do believe that this aint my best or even close to it.. but it is an honest attempt at capturing the feelings of a Father for his little daughter... that I felt I could relate to Shiv and his daughter Shaanti...

Do let me know your thoughts..Criticism awaited...😊

Palkon pe apne
Sapne nanhe se
Hai wo sajaathi...
Duniya meri wo...
Yunhi hai sajaathi...

Goonjhti har or..
Aahat uske ..
Nanhe kadmon ki..
Khaamshiyon ko..
Cheerti..
Kilkaariyaan uski...

Thaamthi mujhe...
Nanhe haathon se
Apne...
Baaton se apni...
Dil mera hai ...
Behlaati...

Pukaar thi mujhe
pyaari si boli ..
Mein apni..
Dil ko choo jaati
Totli si boli uski..

Baahon mein mere
Mehfuz khud ko paati...
Nanhi si bacchi meri..

Baahon mein liye
Apni jaan nanhi si..
Bhoolon mein
Saari udaasi apni...

Kaabhi hasaati
Kabhi rulaati,
Kabhi behlaati
Kabhi sambhaalti
Meri hi apni
Nanhi parchaayi...
Meri Nanhi Pari...

-Sareeta

👏 The lines are nice. It's another matter I don't quite really understand the feelings. kids give me high BP 😆

Originally posted by: sourav1

👏 The lines are nice. It's another matter I don't quite really understand the feelings. kids give me high BP 😆

Aww, thanks for commenting. Yeah I do agree.. some kids do give the parents a high BP... !! 😉

sareeetaaaa.....

brilliant babes. a beautiful relationship expressed in such lovely words. considering im daddy's girl i totally identify with the poem. my dad calls me his pari too...hehe...beautiful. 👏

sareeta dii
its really good 👏 👏
beautifully you showed father's feelings for his daughter

That was really sweet and well written... 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: apapap

sareeetaaaa.....

brilliant babes. a beautiful relationship expressed in such lovely words. considering im daddy's girl i totally identify with the poem. my dad calls me his pari too...hehe...beautiful. 👏

Hey Thanks Priya!!! I know the being Daddy's girl feeling! 😆 But I had never written anything from the perspective of a father to his daughter and wanted to try once..

Glad you liked it so much! Thank you! *bows humbly to applause*

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

sareeta dii
its really good 👏 👏
beautifully you showed father's feelings for his daughter

Aww, thanks Roop! So glad you liked it! *bows humbly*

Originally posted by: Saregama_fan

That was really sweet and well written... 👏 👏 👏

Awww, Chandni, thank you sooooo much! Yeah I wanted it to be kept simple and straight from the heart and so it was...

So glad you liked it ! *bows to the applause humbly*

Elegantly to the point and sweet.. Just like u dammit! Loved the last stanza.. 👏 👏

Cheers,
Sana~