New SS And then he came...teaser, pg 39, 2/12 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
read all 5 parts together...every part scene just me shocked surprised n cried..well written...wtng fr nxt
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hope you ll continue very sooon
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Maan. Her voice was more like a pleading when she looked at the man standing in her door step. He was wet from the heavy downpour. In his hand he held Mannan, rolled completely in a spread which was also wet. But what stunned her was the look in his eyes. It was filled with so much of emotions which Geet couldn't read quickly. She had never seen him like this. There was anger which was evident but there was also guilt, embarrassment and hesitation. She dint like them. Anger she could take but the other three she dint know how to deal with it.

Without a word he walked inside the house, gently pushing a stunned Geet from the door. As he climbed up the stairs Geet came out of her frozen state by his voice

Geet mujhe book lagi hai. Kuch khane keliye doge?? He asked his voice shaking as he spoke.

She managed to nod her head and watched as he moved into their room. Geet quickly made her way into the kitchen and started preparing food for them. Her heart was both happy and guilty. Happy that he was back home and guilty at the way he looked. Her Maan was embarrassed and hesitant. How could she put him in such a situation? She was his wife. For him to feel like this made her disappointed in herself. She had spent enough time with her parents to know that the relationship between a husband and wife should never have embarrassment or hesitation in it. She was such a horrible wife. No wonder he had left before. She deserves this life of loneliness she thought bitterly. Just then she heard a cough and turned around to see Maan sitting in the table looking down. She bit her lips trying to control the tears. He refused to even look at her? She thought sadly. How much have I hurt him? She wondered as she quickly placed the items and the plate in front of him.

She stood next to him and tried to serve him.

Me kar doonga. He said taking the dish from her hand. Kya tum Mannan ke pas rahogi? Till I finish? Maan asked hesitating a bit.

Geet nodded her head unable to say anything. She quickly turned around and ran to their room.

She entered the room and walked towards the cradle. Her Mannu was asleep. She touched his forehead and felt for temperature. She bent down and kissed the baby and smiled. He was alright.

App kaha gaye they mujhe chod kar?? She asked softly to the sleeping baby.

Pata hai mumma kitni parishan thi? Mene baby ko kitna miss kiya malum hai? Aur kya mere Mannu ne miss kiya mujhe? She asked painfully.

Kya papa ne miss kiya mumma ko? Geet asked, her voice cracking as she tried to stop crying but this time she couldn't stop the tears sliding from her eyes. It was too painful the thought of losing both of them, the thought of them not loving her as she did. That is when she understood something, the pain she felt the misery she lived when she realised he dint respect or love her the reason why she blasted at him she now understood. She was in love with Maan. She loved him and with her words she was about to lose him and Mannu forever.

Babaji... she whispered as realisation dawned to her and along with it came the pain of knowing that he did not love her. He did not even respect her. Why was her fate so cruel on her? Why was she always left only with a taste of sunshine but never to fully enjoy it? She fell to her feet and cried bitterly. Why was she so ill fated? She cried and cried till she heard the door knock she quickly wiped her face and turned around to see Maan come in. His face was blank as he came inside.

Unable to control herself she ran to him and hugged him.

Maan.. I'm I'm very sorry. Pata nahi kya hua tha mujhe I just.. I don't know... please forgive me. Mujhse esi gunah fir nahi hogi. Please don't leave me and go... she cried still clinging to him. Maan stood there like rock. The only thing she felt was his breathing.

Please Maan. Forgive me. Me pagal hun. I swear fir se esa nahi hoga. Mene bogoth khoya hai Maan I cannot lose you and our child please Maan. She cried desperately.

Aap chahe tho mujhe mariye petia par chodke math jayiyega please. I'll die if you leave me. Please Maan she begged as her tears wet his shirt.

You can punish me however you want. Chahe tho me puri rath bahar so jao? I'll not disturb you. Ghar me ek servant ki tarah rahungi but don't leave me... I'll never ask you anything Maan. Jo mera hai wo sab aapka bhi hai. Please I'm sorry.. forgive me... she cried and cried not know what else to say to him how else to beg him to forgive her.

She felt Maan's hands on her shoulder as he pushed her a bit away from himself. Fear filled her mind. He would leave her was the only thought clouding her.

Geet.. she heard him call her but her mind dint register it.

Nahi Maan.. Please consider. Me manthi hun I have done a mistake please don't punish me by leaving me.. she begged.

Chahe tho.. saying she grabbed his hand and slapped herself Marlena.. but don't... before she finished the sentence, Maan had grabbed her and kissed her.

First she was shocked but then his warm lips made her melt to his touch as always. After sometime he left her.

Maan.. she whispered as she looked into his intense brown eyes with her watery hazels.

Please don't leave me.. she told him as she tip toed and kissed him again. Her hands wrapped around his neck and pulled him close... she needed to tell him she was sorry and was only his now and always. She needed to remove all his doubts regarding her. She needed to tell him she loved him and only him.

Her hands moved unbuttoning his shirt and she started kissing him from his neck. She felt him stiffen but the minute she opened his pant buckle and touch his arousal, she heard him groan. Maan pulled Geet by her hair and kissed her harshly. He lifted her up, making her legs wind themselves around his hip. He rushed to the bed and threw her on it and climbed on her.

This was the first time she had ever taken the initiative. This was not just lust it was her passion, her surrender and her love that she showered on him as they touched and caressed ever part of their body and unknowingly their souls.

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That is all for now..

Will give next one next week whenever possible.

Do check out my other Maaneet stories.

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My life's mistakes

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

read all 5 parts together...every part scene just me shocked surprised n cried..well written...wtng fr nxt

Thank you yaar😳
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Originally posted by: honeygrape

hope you ll continue very sooon

faster than you think dear😉
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maan came back with mannu and poor geet blaming herself and now seeing maan in guilt wo aur bhi guilty feel horahi hai. its was very emotional scene when geet was begging not to leave her😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional nd painful...u write osm,,,o sanam bekhabar bhi updtt karo na,,,,😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh i feel terrible for geet...maan is such a mystery...why is he soo bad?? looking forward to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional ud
geet begging maan
but maan didn't reply
she realized she loved him
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh god!! I feel terrible for geet...She begged him when she is not at fault...& maan ...well I don't care about him...I just know he needed some emotional fool for survival...He knows that he & his baby has become geet's weakness...& he is taking that advantage...😡

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