Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #5 OS 8 1~7 Link to #6: Pg 1

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neha2013g

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Posted: 11 years ago

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superb start to the new story... 😊

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Visitor123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#652

Please update we are low on Arshi dose 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#653

That was interesting... loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice start with interesting and different encounter. Lets see how they meet next. Waiting for next part. Thanks.

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purple_hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

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welcome back...im loving it already... who does'nt ASR ? 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 11 years ago

#659

Smita, I love your Arnav! I like the love at first sight concept of your stories, there's a magic in shows, in the first scene where the protagonists meet, that they capture on screen, but you manage to do it on paper, with words, sometimes even better than the shows!

Pyaar hua, Ikraar hua has been playing in my head ever since I read the last update. I am glad Arnav and Khushi's brains are as hell bent as mine on that song.

Is he going to track her down? He doesn't know her name but he knows where she lives! Or is she going to be the one tracking him down?

Edited by BlueMystique - 11 years ago