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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ilardi

yagya!!!! wat an update👏👏👏!tune sabko rulaane ka theka liya hai kya!😳

Thanks a lot, dear!! Already sabko rulaa dala maine!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjana_JA

Loved it Yagya!!!...best part was Paarth lashing Kunti and Yudi,like ASR!!!😎😆...they deserved it!!!!😈

Now time to overcome all pain and unite these eternal souls!!!😳

ASR Style!! Asli ka mera style bhi hai!! Thode apne arya ko de diya, Sanju!!! Haan, time is nearing!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

i wanna see more of ASR paarth!!!
uff... tiger mode on!!

i loved Dhris Yagya bond...
you portray emotions too well... each and every word hits the heard dear... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
you penned it really well.. hats well honey!! 👏

Utne romantic bhi hoga, Di!! ASR Style abhi poora nahi hua!!
@ Non-Bold...Aww...Thanks a lot, Di!! Means a lot to me!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila11

What to say about this chapter, Jiji 😭 both are in so much pain 😭 I can understand Arjun's heart, otherwise my obedient devarji never talked like this to his elders I wish if I could console him Yagya has her loving brother to soothe her pain, but my devarji too need a person to whom he can open his heart! Yes yes I know Maadhav is there for him, but I have a duty too. Would I not be able to do anything for him, being his bhabishri? 😭
Loved the part where Arjun is thinking that Yagya shed more blood than his tears 👏 what a portrayal of feelings 👍🏼 carry on Jiji! & update soon!

Ab kalyug ka parivartan to pratyaksha to hona chahiye naa, Devika!! Peedha ko kab tak chahenge Aryaputra Arjun!! Shighr ab ko bhi apni bhoomika nibhani hogai, priye!! aapke hriday ko chune waali shabdho ke liye Dhanyavad!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 40:

Their eyes met but the hearts asked for the painful distance. Their hearts were beating for each other but the rhythm created was of pain. The greatest pain in love is knowing your love loves you but you have to maintain the distance. And who knew this better than Yagya and Arjun. Awkwardness was in air for them and their silence was just intensifying it.

Subhi or Kanha didn't want to intervene in it unless it was very much important as they knew that in this play of destiny, they both have to play their roles to become one, once again forever. Subhi decided she will keep herself from both Paarth and Yagya and acted upon it by taking a far off seat from them. But she was unknown of the fact that soon light of justice would enter her life along with the new entry in the college.

The whole college was drooling at the guy who had joined in the mid-term. His gorgeous face, muscular build and deep pool like orbs were surely attracting the girls. But little did they know that their was fire of passion and births in those eyes. He was Yadav Shresth, Satyaki reborn as Satya Jhadav.

He was confused right now where he was to go but soon his batchmate, Subhi came to her savior's rescue. He stopped her and that one touch of him on her shoulder was enough to bring flashes of their past to both of them. Being a determined and skilled warrior, it didn't take much time for Satya to recognize Subhadra, the Yadav Princess. The time halted for them as the gust of sacrifice, fire of pain and stream of love evolved in their hearts.

Kanha was happy for his priya behen who was going through so much, would finally find her solace. But these painful love stories had lot more to offer and he was sure that his dear ones are capable enough to remain composed and make others composed during the hard times.

On the other hand, Haima who was doing her Hotel Management Course joined Bheem's chain of hotels as an Intern. Those eyelocks and brushing of fingers during work were bringing them ahead to face the bitter truth. Haima who had been separated from her husband through out her life, yet was devoted to him always was finally falling or shall I say accepting her love towards her lover.

Yagya was called by the Dean to his room to discuss an important matter and Yagya rushed to his room immediately. She knocked the door to earn a soft, ' Come in' while she felt a cold wind brushing her hair, making her feel his presence. She went in to see Paarth standing in front of the Dean in a serious face which was scaring Yagya about the possible matters which Dean could discuss.

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TBC
I know this is not my best part but still...Hope you liked it!!
And I didn't get any demands lately so no one wanted the update?
Please comment and like!!
Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yes me first di 😆
Waking up in the morning sure is fruitful sometime 😆
The update was Kya kahu ? Subhi akhir kohi mil hi Gaya or Bheem aur heema ek hone wale hai 😊 and what bout u and Jeeju di ? Why deans office ? Have u done something naughty ? 😈 Or did they dean see u romancing with our jeeju in the class ? 🤣
Edited by Texie-Shady - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

Yes me first di 😆

Waking up in the morning sure is fruitful sometime 😆
The update was Kya kahu ? Subhi akhir kohi mil hi Gaya or Bheem aur heema ek hone wale hai 😊 and what bout u and Jeeju di ? Why deans office ? Have u done something naughty ? 😈 Or did they dean see u romancing with our jeeju in the class ? 🤣

Comment this early!!! Hosh ud gaye!! Naughty aur romantic main aur tere jeeju naa ho to kon ho!! But we were never caught as we were the heads of discipline ourselves, in real!! Here, what can we do, sam?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Comment this early!!! Hosh ud gaye!! Naughty aur romantic main aur tere jeeju naa ho to kon ho!! But we were never caught as we were the heads of discipline ourselves, in real!! Here, what can we do, sam?

yes too early right I hate this yaar I always get up to study but u all always disturb me with your updates . First Niva di then last time it was Krishna di now this time u . 😉 Heads of discipline and naughty too 😆 but I understand di faced the same .
Oh here what told do ? Nothing much di just change the story line 😉😆 that is what is good about fan fiction right ? Change the past , present and future whenever u like . 😆 By the ways who is SATYAKA or someone who is now for subhadra ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊 Nice to see subhi find someone
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing Update Yagya 🤗
Feeling very happy that sweet Subhi finally got someone special in her life 😳.
Satyaki... nice choice... so my assumption came true for a new character in the story 😆
Now what's up in the Dean's room that too with Arjun in a serious mood ?? 😕
Will be waiting for your next update 😛

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