Rishabla TS : Quench of Love [Part 2 - Page 11] 19/11/14 COMPLETED - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
hope madhu is nt his imagination
awesome story😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
awesome start...
is madhu for real or not????
hope she is for real n not his imagination. .
waiting for revelation..
Thnx for d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb start dear
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept Azra!
I am so confused! Here RK's mother is meera, so i think Madhu is real & RK's family are playing some game with RK for his property & trying to prove that he is mentally unstable! OR Madhu is RK's imagination & he will be meet her afterwords! OR its his re-birth & he remembering some past memories! Uff kitna confusion hai! Eagerly waiting to reveal this suspense!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi everyone 😃
I am back with a the part 2 and thank you for liking and commenting ... it means alot !!!😃😃😃
I have read all the comments but couldnt reply and I am sorry for that as i have already told you all that I am very busy with my college work !!!
So here is the update... Hope you all like it *fingers crossed* 😉




PART 2 (last part)

"Hello bittuji" "Hello chief" "How are you??"rk was trying to sound very normal "I am fine chief anything important you called ??" "Bittuji do you know where Madhu is??" "Who Madhu??" "My wife Madhu" "Chief when did you marry? You didn't tell me" "Bittuji are you gone mad you were present at my n Madhu's marriage" "Sorry I don't know what you are talking about. Chief did you take your medicines" "Bittuji ye I have taken my medicines. Can you come to my home for sometime" "Okay chief I am coming" After an hour Bittuji came to Rk's House "Chief what happened ?" "Bittuji I am not able to find madhu anywhere" "Who madhu??" "Bittuji madhu my wife" "Chief i never knew that you were married" "Bittuji please , dont you remember you were the one who did all the arrangement" "No chief" "Remember I made a friend at the book store , then we started meeting and I liked her. Bittuji remember we even bought the ring with which i was going to propose her madhu but before i could madhu's bua died" "What??" "Remember we both were at the hospital with madhu when her bus was in the ICU then she died next day leaving madhu all alone. At that time i decided to marry her. You were the one who did all the arrangements at the mandir, mom and sikky were out of town. Only bhabhi could attend my wedding at the temple" "Chief I dont remember anything you are telling me. Chief i think its your imagination i remember once aunty said me about your health when i asked her the reason about your medication" "No bittuji now you also dont start please . I know my madhu is real and I will prove it soon. If you help me it will be good or else i can find my madhu by myself" "Chief if she was real i would have helped you but she isn't" "Bittuji you can go now" "Chief ..." "Bituji GOOO!!"rk shouted. Bittuji went out of the room and Rk started doing his office work.

It was 5 in the evening when Rk completed his work , he decided to go to the office for few hours. Sikky was shocked to see Rk at the office "Bhai why did you come?? Mom asked you to take rest" "I know sikky but i came for few hours" "Okay bhai". Rk went to his cabin he had his and madhu's photo in his drawer he checked it but it was also gone like every other thing related to madhu. Then Rk saw a flower vase kept on the table he remembered that it was gifted by madhu to him , rk felt very happy seeing it. He was sure that madhu was real but this was the first thing which he found related to madhu but Rk again thought was his mind really playing games with him. Rk completed his work at office and was going back home , he was waiting at a traffic signal near the market. He was casually seeing out of the window and then his eyes stopped at a particular girl. Rk could not see her face but he could only see her back which resembled madhu. Rk took a U turn and parked his car and entered the market but the place he saw the girl was occupied my someone else he started searching for madhu but he wasn't able to there were so many people , he sadly went back home but a question was disturbing him "Was his mind playing games with him???"

Everyone had their dinner silently now one spoke a word until Meera asked "Rk how was your day??" "My day was Okay nothing special" rk replied. Meera was very worried , Rk was not her son but her elder sister Radha's son but after radhs's death her family made her marry Mohan as Rishab was very small. After dinner Rk was going back to his room when he heard Deeplai talking to someone on phone "YOu better leave from here as soon as possible and please take care of her" deepali said rk got confused listening to her talk , he was going back to his room when he again heard deeplai saying "No bittuji it wont be easy for her to travel in bus you did right by waiting for 1 day and please I am again telling you take care of her. We have no idea what she must be going through" rk got shocked hearing Deepali was talking to bittuji but about whom?? And why she was insisting again and again to take care about someone?? Were they talking about madhu?? Was biituji with madhu?? rk was thinking when deepali again said "Ok bittuji. Keep in touch with me and by the way did you tell Rk that you were leaving the job??" after few seconds again deepali said "Thats a very nice idea, Rk will believe it easily.Bye" after hearing this Rk went to his room. There were few things which were clear to him now , Bittuji was going somewhere with someone and was hiding that from him but some where Rk was thinking that it could be madhu , it was just a guess but Rk dint want to leave any stone unturned. Rk thought to call bittuji and ask him and then he thought bittuji was hiding it from him and wont tell anything he decided to go to Bittuji's house directly.He took his keys and slowly sneaked out of the house.

Rk went to bittuji's house but there was a lock on it he got worried did bittuji leave ?? He dint know why he was feeling that the girl with him was madhu. Rk called bittuji " Hello Bittuji" "He..ll..oo Ch..ief " "Bittuji what happened ??" "Nothing!!" "Okay where are you??" "I am at my home" "No you are not as I am standing infront of your door" "That .. I... i" "Where are you and with whom?" "Chief why are you .. asking .. like .. that !! Bhabhiji .. is not .. there with me" rk got shocked hearing bittuji tell bhabhji because he dint ask him if madhu was with him but he indirectly confessed. "Okay bittuji, Bye" "Bye take care chief" Rk cut the call when he was talking to bittuji he heard train noise from behind from which he guessed that he must be at the railway station , he was sure that madhu was with bittuji but why???

Rk reached the railway station there was a lot of rush there Rk started searching for bittuji for almost 15 mins after that he found bittuji at a stall buying something he decided to wait and follow bittuji silently. There were lot of questions in his mind but he had to wait to get the answers. Bittuji started going somewhere and rk started fllowing him bittuji stopped near a bench where madhu was sitting, seeing her there Rk sighed in relief.On the other side madhu took the water bottle from bittuji and suddenly she felt a change in air her heart could feel rk , madhu started seeing here and there and her search came to end when she saw him standing , her heart skipped a beat "Rk" she murmured. The other second she got worried with her eyes fixed on Rk she called Bittuji and pointed towards Rk. Bittuji turned to see what madhu was pointing at and the packets in his slipped seeing Rk.Rk came nearer to them and sat on the bench beside madhu , madhu could feel gosebumps on her body "So bittuji you dont know madhu??" "Chief... I... that" "I am hallucinating" "No" "I was never married" "Chief ... i .." "What tell me bittuji" "Chief i was asked to say that all that" "Why?? Who said you ??" rk asked .Madhu sat silently and was hearing everything rk casually sat beside her , he dint ask her anything yet but she knew her turn was next and she was worried for bittuji now , he was helping her but rk was shooting him with his questions "Chief I can't tell you who asked me to do hide the truth from you but please believe i never wanted to. You and bhabhji are my family. I was helpless but i did what all i could and even now i am helping bhabhiji" "By taking her away from me . Is this the way you help me ??? I never expected this from you bittuji" rk said bittuji bend his head. Madhu could not see this she was grateful to bittuji for helping her but here rk was blaming him. She knew , she had to speak now "Rk please dont get angry , its not bittuji's mistake" rk turned towards madhu "MAdhu you please let it be. I am not talking with you" "Rk ... please " "There is nothing left to talk" "Rk please dont tell like that" "Why madhu ???? You left like veryother person i have loved. First maa then dad now you. Madhu you dint think about me once before taking this decision I thought we were happy , very happy but you decided to leave and everyone is telling me that i am mad . I am psycho you thought i would believe all that , my love was not that weak madhu" rk said , he felt bad seeing madhu her eyes were swollen she looked pale and now also she was crying but she had to know what he was feeling "Why are you doing this madhu ?? Where the 7 vows fake ?? was everything fake ??? You never loved me madhu ... you never did. Everyone is right I am mad , I am mad to trust you" rk said and got up from the bench he could hear madhu sobs he wanted to console her but no she had hurt him.

Bittuji couldn't see rk accusing madhu , If rk was his best friend Madhu was like a sister to him. "Bhabhiji why dont you tell him the truth ?? Why are you quiet??" rk stopped and turned back "What truth ?? What is that you both are hiding??" "Chief that ..." madhu interrupted "No Bittuji" "Why bhabhiji?? Whya re you supposed to suffer alone and take all the blame" "Tell me bittuji" rk said "Chief auntyji is the one behind all this. Bhabhiji never wanted to leave you, she was forced" "What !! Why dont you tell me madhu" rk asked turning towards madhu , madhu got up from the bench and said "I had no option" "Madhu tell me what happened from the start" "Rk your mom never accepted me wholeheartedly. all the problems we have faced in the last 3 months after our marriage were because of her" "This cant be true" "It is Rk , I was also shocked like you but you have to trust me. From last few days i was not feeling well and i had morning sickness and was feeling dizzy also and i also realized that i have missed my periods so i decided to go to the doctor. After the checkup the doctor confirmed my doubts I was pregnant that was the best of my life which was going to turn the worst day of my life but i dint knew that I happily went home , I decided to give you a surprise at night as i wanted to see your reaction when i give you the news. I went to mom and said her that she was going to become a grandmom and she reacted oppositely to what i expected. First she was shocked then she asked me to leave you and go, i got shock and asked her the reason she said that she never wanted you to get married and now the baby. She asked me to leave the house and go. I said no , i couldnt leave you Rk you are my life. I said her that you are happy with me I tried alot but then she said she dint care about your happiness she wanted to seprate us but she was not able to so she wanted me to leave u now.She blackmailed me that she will get you killed if i dont leave you, She said she never accepted you as her son until dad was alive she acted but after his death she wanted to kick you out of the house but was not able to as dad has given you all his property and she wanted it by hook or crook !! And according to her this was the perfect chance to prove you mad and get all the property. I had no option other than agreeing to her that day when you came home she mixed sleeping pills in your tea and you slept very early because of the effect of it. She throwed me out and then cleared all my things from everywhere . I had no where to go Rk , I wanted to die but i couldn't I was carrying the symbol of our love i decided to live for our baby. I was confused about where to go your mom has asked me to leave the city i was in my thoughts when bittuji found me , deepali bhabhi has called him and told what all happened so bittuji came for my rescue. As i have promised to leave the city bittuji decided to take me to his home town so we are here at the railway station waiting for the train. Now you tell me Rk Where was my mistake why should i suffer ??? Why Rk , why am i forced to leave my husband ?? madhu caught his collar with tears flowing from she continued questioning him "Why Rk ?? Why do I have to face all this ?? Where was mistake ?? and you are blaming me ... " madhu kept her head on Rk's chest and started crying loudly. Rk was stunned he dint know what to answer and the revelation has caught him off guard. The fate has played a cruel game with them but he was happy that everything was saved in time.He hugged madhu tight and said " Everything will be alright madhu !!" "Rk i dont want to lose you and our baby" At that moment realization hit Rk , he was going to be a father his happiness knew no bounds "I promise you madhu nothing can separate us now. Our baby will be the luckiest in the world" saying this he kissed madhu on her forehead.

1 Year Later

Rk came home very tired from the office he walked in the house only to be greeted by the beautiful of sight of madhu playing with their daughter there laughter was echoing in the house. Pari kundra that is what they have named her she actually came like a angel in their life's. Now they all were living happily together "Hi Rk , When did you come ???" "Just now, looks like mother and daughter were having fun" "Yes but we both were missing you" "Okay now give pari to me" rk said at the same time sikky entered and said "Bhabhi give pari to me as she was missing her chachu more" "What !! no sikky , I will taker her first she is my daughter" "No bhabhi , give her to me first" "Madhu I came first" rk said. Madhu chuckled seeing both of them fight but pari dint seem much happy with it and she started crying at that deepali came and took pari from madhu and said "You both keep fighting , I am taking pari to the garden as pari loves her chachi the most" "What ... No !!! I am coming with you" saying this sikky followed deepali. "This is not fair" rk pouted and said to madhu , madhu gave him a peck and said "Let them enjoy with pari. Our daughter is very lucky to have them" "Indeed she is" "Rk you can you ask Sikky to go and meet maa. Today a call came from old age home she is not well" " Madhu i dont think he will agree to meet her. What she did was not forgivable , she said everyone that you left me and went but she was the one who forced you. It was a great shock for Sikky like us" " Rk but ..." "Madhu everyone doesn't have a big heart like you. She is in old age home because you insisted or else we wouldn't have cared about her" " I know but she was the one who raised you .." "For her selfish reasons" "Rk ..." "I will try to talk to him" "Thank you" "Thank you madhu for coming in my life and making it worth living" "I love you Rk" "I love you to madhu" rk replied.


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I know it was super long and I hope you all haven't slept in the middle !!!! As you have come till here like button is below and comment box is at the end 😆
and forgot to tell I loved reading all your guesses 😉
And if you dont like the update you can throw tomatoes at Suru 😆😉😉
Do like and comment 😃
Buddy me for PM's😉


Edited by AzraZaidi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
RES 😉

A BIG THANKS!!! 🤗
coming to story sooo I was knowing all and this bad update credit goes to me as u said throw tomatoes on meee!!!! very bad huhhh!!! see everyone loved it a lots I told u it's awesomeee but u were as always MY Nervous Soul!!! 😉 🤣
so story was awesome!!! brilliant nd different concept!!! happy that RK found madhu on right time nd came to know real face of meera!!!!
first time dips in gud role important to mention haan 🤣 but I love her vamp role more when RK would insult her my personal liking 😛
aftr 1 yr RISHBALA bless with Angel was cuteee!!!!
I loved it alll!!!!
LOVE YOU MY LOVIEST SOUL!!!!
lastly I m first to comment!!!! 🤣
Edited by My_VivJaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
res 🤗thanks (u know why🤣🤣)
unres🤣 😆
So Madhu is true
I knew that u will give madhu real as I love rishbala😳
Meera is behind all this
awww poor rk he faced a lot 😭
awsmmm work👏👏👏 azru love u sis❤️❤️
A perfect bday gift with perfect end with Rishbala and their kid☺️
U should write more lyk this😃
btw aab toh bata who guess the about Madhu???


Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres
awesome update dear..
omg meera...i wnt to kill her hw cn she...dipali is so swt😊 1st time i loved her...
waiting for till the end update😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res

Unres

Me 3rd, as per sudha's count, suru doesn't come in our count.

u took a diff concept and proceeded with it til the end, couldn't suspect meera, even when u said, she was married to mohan after radha.

Good ts, thanks for pm.
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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tata bye bye😆
I'm to lazy to omit the words above. 😆 Long, long day. 😆 Scratch that...it's night. Given the sun is only up for about 6,7 hours.😆 And it will get worse.
Wow. Who could have guessed it was Meera's plan.🤣 Actually I thought it was Meera AND Deepali. Hey her name is Deepali. 😆 But I was halfright.😆
And they tried to make RK insane just so she could get his property. Shocking...NOT!😲🤣
To be honest this was my prediction, but I didn't write it last time due to having no time.😆 No do I have now to comment much.😆 So I'll keep it short.
Thanks for the second and final part of the TS and the PM.
And I'm number 4.🤣 Guess that movie.🤣 Okay, Suru doesn't count. We already know that. Much like when you come first to her updates.😆 By the way I love the comment you gave at the end. If we don't like the update that we should throw tomatoes on Suru.😆 Well we like the update and no throwing tomatoes on Suru will be done.😆
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago

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