Chaand ki sohbat mein

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi All
First time poster here... Something I wrote after watching the last episode . hope y'all like it, they are just individual ramblings, no real continuity in the verses 😳

Haathon ki lakeeron se mil gaye aise zakhm
Na lakeeron ke mitne ki ummeed hain,
na zakhmon ko mitaane ki chaah

Woh masoom kehte hain ki chaand khoobsoorat hai
Koi humse pooche, chaand ke daag ka
humaare ghaav se rishta kya hai


Woh be-gham hain, zindagi ke malaal pe bhi muskuraate hain
Hum be-dard hain, har khushi ko alvidaa kehte hain


Unki nazarein kar rahe hain humse mushkil sawaal
In masoom nigaahon se hum kya kahein,
yeh maahtab bhi ho gayi hai la-jaawaab


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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏 very wll written and even though this your first post
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Whoa this is awesome dear 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I imagined the whole moon staring scene b/w aarzo and sahir while reading your poetry, I love it,so beautifully written.

Mallu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugarDaddy

👏 very wll written and even though this your first post


Thank You so much 😊
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Thanks 😊
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Really really beautiful. Had a lump in my throat while reading it. 😭
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Originally posted by: --Sia--

very nice Lucky ...😳


Thanks Sia 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ecrivain



Whoa this is awesome dear 👏


Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: prettypri

Beautifully written👏


Thank You 😊

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