Ashlok SS: Angel in Disguise Chapter 17 Pg. 70 17/11 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: mayabharathi


the start is so interesting I know I will enjoy this one too. By the way you have one more story to complete waiting for you to update it



Thank you im glad you loved it, don't worry i havnt forget my captain and his sweet and spicy cabin boy, im currently writing its next update ill post soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehare

Brilliant start of the story waiting for its update pls soon update it 🤗



Thank you dear, ill update soon.
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Originally posted by: srilotus

Interesting prologue...

update soon😃



Thnks dear will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you dear. Keep reading



Thank you dear. Keep reading.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you dear.



Thank you dear

Originally posted by: whitelily

interesting prologue 👍🏼



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fimiramak

Very interesting start. Can't wait to read more.

Do continue soon, please!



Thank you dear. Im glad you loved it, will update soon.
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Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Wow...crime and mAfia..the daggers and dungeons...is this arrow...oliver story by any chance...thrilling ...nice...update soon...




Thanks dear. No, its not arrow oliver story, it came from my mind 😆 ..if it resembled then its only coincidence 😊 ..anyway will update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Wow how interest! !!

I wonder why they abducted shlok and where is aastha in this stoey? Maybe she is one of those six girls who they plan to sell?
Continue soon



Thanks dear. You will get to know where astha is in the story and why was shlok abducted as the story progressed. Will update soon just wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept...
nice prologue...
continue soon..
also pm me wen u update it..
plz.plz.plz

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Chapter 1

Ankush came out again, alone this time, Shlok wondered in what state will be those girls.

"Tie him up and make sure he's gagged tightly, don't want him making noises while I talk to his old dog."

Ankush laughed then walked to the door, he shouted few names and asked them to bring some ropes. After few moments, three brawny looking men entered the room, each of them holding a rope.

"Be a good chap and allow us to tie you, can you manage that?" Ankush asked Shlok with a wide grin on his face.

Shlok raised a brow then replied "Never thought you guys are polite enough to ask, anyway, the answer to your question is no."

"You got guts, boy, I admire that but just a reminder don't get carried away. Ever." The man said.

"You're warned so keep that in mind always. We won't hurt you unless you don't trouble us. Now let us tie you up so no one gets hurt."

"You can hurt me as much as you like but you will never make me follow you. I swear, once I'm out of here, you guys will pay back double, most of all you black dog!" Shlok said furiously as he looked at the man.

Ankush pursed his lips in anger, he thrust his arm in the cell and grabbed Shlok by his collar then brushed his hard knuckles against his cheek, didn't gave Shlok time to recover, then aimed for his mid-section.

"Enough!" The man shouted.

Ankush signaled his companion, two men grabbed Shlok's arm, spread them wide enough then tied it on iron bar with ropes while one of them stick his legs together and tied them.

Shlok's cheek stung, it was a solid punch, he has fist as hard as rocks, he barely got a chance to pull himself together, that in less than a minute he was already tied up, which added more fuel to his building anger. He had never been in such a desperate situation before, where he would feel helpless, his pride was more bruised than his body.

Shlok scowled at Ankush while struggling from the hold.

"No one dare insult my friend in front of me." Ankush said menacingly then gagged Shlok's mouth.

"Thank you. Finally I can call." The man said.

Ankush dismissed those three then grinned at the man and replied "Go ahead, I'm dying to hear from him."

The man dailed Niranjan's number and put it on the loud speaker. It was answered on the first ring.

"Hello!"

"Wow! You answered at the first ring, Mr. Niranjan Agnihotri." The man said.

"Where's my son?" He asked angrily.

Shlok felt happy by hearing his father's voice, he must have been so worried for him, he can't tell him that he is fine. The man looked at him and replied to his father "Your son is quite gutsy, that's why he's getting hurt."

"Don't do anything to him!"

"Who do you think you're ordering?"

"Please I'll give you anything, any amount to give me back my son!"

"Oh! You're begging?"

"Please, how much do you want?"

"I have more money than you. I don't need your money."

"Then what do you want?"

"Your destruction!"

"Why?"

"Told you, it's too soon, besides, I already told you, that was the last time you will ever see your son, you won't see him again."

"What are you going to do?"

"I'll kill him. He'll die. I'll make you realize the pain of losing some one dear." The man said and cut the call.

Shlok went still, as the words kept replying on his mind.

"I'll kill him. He'll die."

Is he really going to die? Is this his end, end of his life? His heart drummed wildly against his chest, he don't want to die, no, he can't die. The fear was rapidly engulfing his heart, he couldn't feel anything except fear and his heartbeat. Then he felt pair of hands untying his hands, he looked at Ankush, still paralyzed with fear of his imminent death. He also noticed the other man had already removed his mask but was facing his back to him, which was why Shlok couldn't see his face.

"You aren't going to die, told you before we won't hurt unless you don't trouble us." He heard Ankush saying.

A wave of relief washed over him, he really thought he was going to die but then can he really trust them.

He removed the gag and asked "How can I believe you? I know you are bad guys!"

Ankush chuckled "I should've remember that. Well, it's your choice to believe."

After removing the ropes, he went out of the room. Shlok rubbed his sore wrists, then looked at the man.

"What did my father do to you?" Shlok asked him.

No Answer.

"Maybe you're mistaken, my father don't seek badly for others much less hurt them. Who are you?"

Still no answer.

Shlok gripped the iron bars and shouted "Answer me dammit!"

He turned at him, Shlok sucked in his breath, his jaw dropped down and eyes widened with shock.

After long minutes of disbelief, he managed to say only one sentence.

"YOU WERE DEAD!"

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