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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Hey awesome update continue soon eagerly waiting for the next part😃


i will soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyugracy27

wow nice update update ASAP


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

wonderful update di👍🏼


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Amazing update:-):)
Its high time that she should take a stand and break up with that stupid Karan...
Gud to c sandhir equatin...
Thnx for pm...
Runs to read ur othr ss...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mrdodokk

Hey Amazing update:-):)
Its high time that she should take a stand and break up with that stupid Karan...
Gud to c sandhir equatin...
Thnx for pm...
Runs to read ur othr ss...


thnku so much for ur comment ...

i will post soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

" FINALLY ITS OVER " - PART 5 :


It was karan's birthday n randhir n me had planned a surprise party for him. N in all this, me n randhir came more close to each other, we started sharing an awesome bond. This unexplained feeling was driving me crazy.


party ni8


It was really a huge party, almost everyone from modelling industry was there. It was rather a page 3 party but karan, was sad. He looked lost in the whole party.


He held my wrist n pulled me towards him, showing some pics. It was me with randhir, that hug that office kiss, those beautiful moments tha made me feel alive but how could he get those pics, I thought


'What's ths?? Ajtk to baaki ldke the but ab mere best frnd k sath b, you bloody s**t.. You should just mark a price tag on u.. Bloody hell.. Uh ditched,me cheater girl' he said raising his voice really high ..


Everyone in the party was,looking at us but he didn't care n was, about to slap,me hard but a strong pair of hands stopped him


Randhir stopped karanbahut ho gya mr. karan srivastav. Ajtk main sanyu ki wajah se chup rha but ab aur nhi.


Jab tumne mujhe sanyu ka character test krne k liye uske close bheja tbhi mujhe rok dena chahiye tha, but mne tumhari baat mani coz I trusted you, kyunki us wqt main sanyu ko tumhari nazar se janta tha. Tumne mujhe uske sath tym spend krne ko kaha coz uh wanted to test if she loves you or not.


Tum khandala bhi isiliye gye so that main sanyu k close ja sku. Uh himself pushed me to be close to sanyu n now u r showing these pic, wo kiss b isiliye thi so that I could test her loyality for you, but let me tell you mr. karan srivastav, she passed her test but u failed it.


She always loved you that's why she handled you n ur tortures, she nevr said anything to u coz she loved you, coz she was always loyal.. I know what u did with random girls, I know ur late ni8 works always end up sleeping with a random girl.


You know what mujhe tumhe apna friend kehte hue be sharam aa rhi h.Sanyu k sath close aane ka natk krte krte I really fell in lv with her n today I m accepting my feelings for sanyu in front of every1' he left every1 shocked especially memiss sanyukta aggrawal, will you be mine for rest of my life? Will you be my girlfriend for 2 years n after that wife for a life tym?? I know main tumhe utni facilities nhi de skta jitni karan ne di but I promise I ll make ur heart happy, I ll make u feel alive again.


Tumpr hath uthane se pehle I ll kill myself, I swear' he said sitting on his knees with a bouquet of red roses in his hands.


Randhir was waiting for my replyI held his shoulder nmade him stand.'mr. Randhir singh shekhawat, what do u think of urself??? How could u play with my feelings?? How dare you??? Karan ko to main bahut achhe se janti hu but randhir, I didn't expected, this from you. I loved you really, I thought we both were just too perfect, ur frst sentence made me fall for u..!!!


First tym I got some1 who really cared for me, who made me feel alive again, who explored the old sanyu in me, every moment I spent with u was a beautiful memory for me..


I failed the test, I m not loyal 'coz I hate you mr. karan srivastav n now uh too mr. randhir singh shrlhawat.. How could I expect karan's best frnd to be unlike him. U r really like him.. Bloody desperate guys,ajtk chup thi m kyunki mujhe lga I love karan thn I realised I love randhir but no, I hate you both.


Aj I wna tell u both everything ... Karan, I was nevr behind ur money, my parents have so much money that I can buy 100 models like u. So mind it.


N rhi baat pyar ki to do baar pyar krke dekh lia dono baar dhokha mila. I don't trst love now. I don't trst anything..'i was really angry n was also crying...


I held randhir's collar..'how could u randhir? How could u break my trst' but just thn I realised that I have to be strong so I pushed both of them hard.. ,


Made my way out of the party wiping out my tears, walking with confidence... Randhir was just looking at me with tears in his eyes but I didn't care at that tym.''Sanyu was back with a bang''


(POV of sanyukta)

I was in my apartment after long 3 years of living in that hell. I was lying on the bed thinking about all the things, that happened in party n suddenly I remembered randhir's words.. N my anger bursted out.. I hv always been a stubborn angry girl but I lost myself in last 3 years... But as I said, old me was back ... I was punching on the punching bag while thinking about everything...'randhir, I loved you, I always loved u.. From 'mne board thodi lga rkha h that I m hia frnd' to 'yes u r special', from our frst eyelock to that kiss.. I loved u.. I loved u bcoz u cared for me but u never did, u were just being that bloody karan's secrt detective, u fool moron, how could u do this.


I knw you were bound in frndship but u should hv told me once, I knw u really love me but u should hv confessed the truth ri8 before me, after that i'd hv left that karan n be with u for a life tym but u betrayed me mr. randhir singh shekhawat n I ll not spare u for that' he n his thoughts were making me more, angry n sad..


I didn't know, which emotion to show n which emotion to hide... I was crying n punching the bag at the same tym..


Three hearts were broken,

mine bcoz I was betrayed, randhir's coz he didn't get his love, n karan's coz

he lost his best frnd n his girl frnd at the same tym. I knew all three of us

had our life revolving around each other n I knew karan would came to get me

back. All these thoughts were getting on my nerves, I didn't want myself to be

weak again. I closed my eyes in fear n dozed off with trail of thoughts in my mind


AFTER A WEEK

I was still not able to get over with it but I had to. I decided to go to office for diverting my mind. But I hv to face them in the office too. But I decided to ignore. 2 weeks passed like this. But to my surprise they didn't even try to talk to me.

ye card?? Ye card kisne bheja??' I wondered looking at a greeting card outside the door


I LOVE YOU- your secret admirer' was written on the card


I smiled after about a month. I was sure it was not karan or randhur coz they never tried to convince me.. I just hoped that secret admirer is not a stalker. Now I had a new topic to think about- my secrt admirer


Daily, when I woke up I used to get a rose n note outside my house.. that note always read two lines of a poem written on me. After a month I read the whole poem..


It just explained me, my ways my lifestyle everything but in this one mnth, he never tried to make me feel awkward. It has now become a routine for me to get that rose n a note..

I was used to of those things, sometyms I got a bouquet of orchids in my office.. he also gifted me a pen n on 30th day, I got a camera lens, a limited edition one which I always wanted but couldn't get.. it was the best camera lens in this whole word... But on 31st day I didn't get anything.. no rose no note.. nthng at all I was really worried about that...


kya hua hoga? Aj wo secrt admirer ka rose kyu nhi mila? Pta nhi kya hua hoga?'

I was going through new thoughts..

Whole day, I was thinking about him.. next day I got a note saying FRIENDS? Write your answer in a note n put it in the under the mat outside

your house..' I was really impressed with that giuy. I wanted to give it a try.. I wrote yes' n put it under the mat. N our conversations started evry day he used to wish me with a good morning note n thn ask me a ques n I always answer it putting note under the door mat.

N yeah in all this, I didn't even think about karan or randhir... it was finally over. I was finally over with those bas***ds,... All I could think about was my secrt admirer.. I started liking him.. it was a blind love from my side but I didn't want to.. I started ignoring that guy, I didn't answer him..


N then one day, I got a note outside my house.

I know why u r ignoring me.. u don't wna fall in lv with me.. ri8? But u hv already fallen for me. I promise I ll not betray u like others..' no I don't love u' I shouted n went inside my house.


but I hv really started liking his way.. no sanyu, u can't.. forget it... you should give him a chance sanyu, please give him a chance' my heart n mind were all set for battle. My mind wanted me to forget it n my heart wanted me to give

him a chance... But then I heard my doorbell, I got a bouquet of red roses n a gift outside my house.. when I opened the gift it was a dress of my favorite designer, my favorite color, purple. N that dress was really stunning.. doorbell rang again..


this tym it was a bouquet of orchids with a gift n that gift was a pair of purple stilettos .. so awesome.. there was a note saying.. meet me at ur fav restaurant wearing this dress n stilettos.. I know u ll come.


This would be the last time I'd disturb u.. promise'I desperately wanted to know about that guy so I decided to go to restaurant..


It was a blind date for me but that unknown person seemed so known to me. I was getting ready. N everything had tgo be the best. I wanted my secrt admirer to know that I m really worth of all this..


I went to meet him but I forgot to read the tym of meeting.. I read the note again meet me at ur fav restaurant wearing this dress n stilettos.. I know u ll come. This'd be the last tym I'd distrb u.. don't forget. Your fav restaurant sharp at 9'

It was already 9 n it takes about an hour to reach that restaurant.

I reached there at 10 n was really amazed to see the whole restaurant empty, it was the best restaurant in the city n it is difficult to get even one table there but it was empty n lights too off..


I moved inside n suddenly a clap n lights on

Whole restaurant was beautifully decorated with flowers, balloons n candles.. there was just 1 round table with two chairs . I couldn't blv that he booked the whole restaurant just for me. I felt special, once again


There was a note on the table. please don't remove my mask. First let's eat dinner together, thn I ll tell you who I m..

I rose my head up n saw a guy dressed in white shirt n blue jean with a black jacket n a mask on his face..


We had our dinner, all my favorite dishes, everything I loved. How did he knw that m a big foody. He didn't utter any word during the whole dinner .he didn't even eat anything, his sweet little brown eyes were watching me all the tym


When I looked into his eyes, I remembered some1 no, how could he be that?' I thought to myself After dinner he removed his mask n he was RANDHIR, MR. RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT.


this is you. How could u? ek baar betray krke mza nhi aaya jo dobara chle aaye meri life mein?' I held his collar n pushed him. I was about to go out when he held my wrist n pulled me towards him.


I knw tum mujhse bahut gussa ho but please sirf ek baar meri baat sunlo. Agr abhi b maaf na krna ho to I ll not say anything to u, but please I just need one chance. But sbse pehle see this.He removed a curtain n there was a projector n screen behind that curtain.


He showed me our pics, that rain in beach, that hug in car, kiss, all those moments when I really felt special.


I controlled my tears... I knw u loved me. I know mne glt kia but I loved you too. Jb main frst tym tumhare ghr aaya tha n tumne mujhe andr tk nhi aane dia tha us din hi m smjh gya tha ki tum kitni loyal ho n mne ye sb karan ko btaya b tha but he forced me to test u, trust me main sirf friendship k liye ye sb kr rha tha..


you know us din jb hm late ni8 tk baatein kr rhe the n tum jakr so gyi thi tb karan ko ek call aaya tha n kyunki uske phone m call record ho jati h to mne sb sun lia tha uske sone k baad


FLASHBACK :

Karan gets a call n after he sleep, randhir checks his phone n listens the recordingThere was a girl on other side

Girl- kaam ho gya?

Karan- haan baby bs ho hi gya smjho.

Girl- I want her to be insulted in front of every1. Mind it every1 utherwise you ll hv to forgt me.

Karan- don't worry trisha randhir will help us n I ll insult her on my b'day party... she ll regrt messing with you. Bye baby I love you

Girl- love u too


Flashback ends


After that I found out about trisha that she is also a photographer but u were so good that u destroyed her career by ur talent. She worked at ur place in that company 5 years back on the same post where u wrk n b'coz of u she had was bound to leave the job.I thn decided to insult karan in the same party where she wanted to inslt u...


Then he opend another curtain n behind that was a big sorry written with red roses n a collage of my pics...

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Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for pm
Awesome update👏
Karan is such a jerk😡
Loved randhir's way of asking forgiveness from sanyu😊
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waooo rd is amazing kya style hai yar
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey it was just awesome loved reading it 😊
And I think u should turn this ss into an ff!!!!!!!!
Edited by Thriller123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
The update was awsme yr
So much hppnd

Sandhir planned surprise party for karan
He tried to insult sanyu bt rd he was her side

Everything came in front of sanyu
Rd did all this to test sanyu loyalty

Sanyu hell angry
She left both of them

Then secret admirer
Sanyu strted living again
She was so happy

Secret admirer rd
He was trying to apologize
N make it up to her

Cnt wait for her reaction

Update soon
Keep smiling

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