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daydreamers

@daydreamers

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

Cmn soon...😛

kimat pe thi mein pareshaan
kya mere itne bhi maayne nahi
kharch karte tum mujhpe
dil ka haal bigad gaya itna
ki aakhir puch liya maine tumse
phir samajh aaya wakai bura laga mujhe
tumhara tohfa pehen nahi paayi mein
agle pal laga accha yehi soch k
agar pehla pehla pehen leti
toh dusra kaise milta?😉
dusra tohfa tumne pehnaya
pehla nahi pehna sakte the tum
accha hi hua jo pehla nahi pehna maine
tumhare haaton me mera haath
ehsaas hi alag h
tohfa pehnakar sauda pakka kiya tumne
ek janam ka nahi
saat janam ka
tum puchte ho
nibhaungi kya yeh rishta iss janam?
par jaanti hu soch kya rahe ho tum
iss janam ka nahi saat janam ka puch rahe ho tum
iss janam ruhi k kaaran mili hu tumse main
par tum karte ho mujhse...
keh doon????
nahi nahi kahungi
saare sawaalon ka jawaab de diya tumhe maine
abki baar tumse main puchungi
aankhon se
jawaab toh de paoge na?
ateet k changul se bahaar toh aa paoge na?
apne darr ko rok toh paoge na?
tum kuch bhi keh lo, kuch bhi kar lo
me saath nahi chodungi tumhara
life long commitment kehte ho na
aise mat dekho
ruhi baithi h saamne
aj main bhi apne jazbaaton ki katputli hu
jitna chahu rok nahi pa rahi khud ko
meri aankhein padh lo tum
shaayad zubaan se keh na pau
jo chahti hu mein
apna bana lo mujhe
apni zindagi ka atoot hissa bana lo
me bhi uss pyaar ki gehraayi me doobna chahti hu
tum jaante ho kya
tumse behtar pyaar ko koi samajhta nahi
tum jaante ho mujhe kya chahiye
yun hi nahi jhaank rahe ho tum
par tum bhi jaante ho
ruhi hain yaha
hum sirf aankhon se baat kar sakte hain
par tanhaayi mein
kamre k chaar deewari me
kahoge na tum mujhse
jo sun na chahti hu mein kab se
maine pehla kadam badhaya hain aj
bina kuch kahe
tum jaante ho yeh
agla kadam tum uthao
bahut kuch keh k
jaise ring di tumne
par jawaab maine diye tumhe
maine sawaal puche h aankhon se
tum jaante ho kya hain wo
me kahungi nahi zor se
ruhi baithi hain saamne...

welcome to the legally wedded life of raman kumar bhalla and ishita raman bhalla...

welcome to the ocean of passion, desparation and yearning of both...

ur thots r precious...😊

pic credit- gandhari...

gan sorry didn't ask u for d pic dis tym... i thot u'll thrash me this tym..😆

isliye used it directly...😊

NOTE: if u want the pm of my updates kindly send a buddy request...

n yes at least one comment is essential on my works.. yup i am rude and completely blunt wid this..

my selfish reasons...😉

Edited by daydreamers - 10 years ago

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Remya

@remya1990

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

wonderful verses DD...

After reading the verses, a smile remains, that is the ability of a writer, to take the readers into his world and make them feel the emotions...

" Gestures in love are incomparably more attractive, effective and valuable than words"

Why should they say that i love you to each other. Everything they does show their love,and the other without any fail gets the hint correctly.They expressed their love by gifting. Saw the love in each other's eyes. Their silence speak loudly about their love. Even the quarrels resonate their love. Now, is there any significance in uttering the three words to each other. I doubt...

His eyes searched for her answers in her eyes, she gave the answers through her eyes. All was about love. Their daughter saw the love in her parents' eyes. After all, who can hide love, even the Good God couldn't; then how can we. Their daugher said," pyaar dikhta hai na", and today she saw the love.

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Bhuvana

@Ohgod!

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

Ab ispe kya likhoon jo tumne already nahi likh diya!!! 😳

Beautiful poem Janu!! 👏👏👏 it takes talent of a different kind to come up with such beautiful lines!! And to put it in perspective! Is simply WOW!!

Love is what needs to be felt more than told! And these two have felt it for a long time now! They have even conveyed through their eyes and actions! Bas kena reh gaya hai.. Aaj nahi ya kal wo bhi hojaayega! So best is to sit back and take in each of these beautiful moments and savour them! 😳

Edited by Ohgod! - 10 years ago

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KK2926

@KK2926

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome DD. i dont have any words to describe what u wrote.

Brilliant!!!

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ANU

@banksii

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

BRILLIANT DD...BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN...👏👏👏

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Res :)

Sorry sorry. My pm dabba is overloading now. So sorry

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shidin0117

@shidin0117

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

tumhara tohfa pehen nahi paayi mein
agle pal laga accha yehi soch k
agar pehla pehla pehen leti
toh dusra kaise milta?😉
dusra tohfa tumne pehnaya
pehla nahi pehna sakte the tum
accha hi hua jo pehla nahi pehna maine
tumhare haaton me mera haath
ehsaas hi alag h
tohfa pehnakar sauda pakka kiya tumne
ek janam ka nahi
saat janam ka
tum puchte ho
nibhaungi kya yeh rishta iss janam?
par jaanti hu soch kya rahe ho tum
iss janam ka nahi saat janam ka puch rahe ho tum

oye DD loved these lines, thodi lambi thi but achhi thi,

waqt lag yeh samaj ne me kis thofe ke baat kar rahi ho , lekin baad mei samaj gayi,

thanks for the PM, mujmeh itna talent nahi ki res.. karke kuch liku, par appreciate tho kar sakti hoon tei talent ka...

Thanks DD

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Bombaytola

@Bombaytola

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

I am mostly a silent reader very few on this forum have evoked me into replying. But since u were so blunt😉 Jokes apart very beautiful kavita . After a long time i have read something so good in hindi keep up the good work!!!!

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Bhuvana

@Ohgod!

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

edited on page 1 ma'am 😊

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