Pocket full of soul - Nov 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A pocket full of soul


The torture that has been unleashed in the form of this post is due to GanBarunFan and Swathibalan. I am pressed for time so I wrote whatever came to my mind when I saw Ishita holding Raman's hand, that moment touched me so this short post. I am in the world Justin Timberlake and his song Mirrors is a perfect love ballad for Ishra at this juncture in their life.

Thanks G for letting me use this picture, this is moment spoke to me so I am shamelessly posting it here.


Cause with your hand in my hand and a pocket full of soul
I can tell you there's no place we couldn't go
Just put your hand on the glass, I'm trying to pull you through
You just gotta be strong

Ishita a wife so in love with her man that she can't see him dejected by his own son, so she does what any person in love would do. She takes away his pain by holding his hand and dancing to the tunes of their love. She tells him, with his hand in her hand, and their pocket full of soul, she will break the glass of his past and pull him through, he just needs to follow the lead of love and be strong!


Aren't you somethin', an original
'Cause it doesn't seem merely a sample
And I can't help but stare, 'cause
I see truth somewhere in your eyes
I can't ever change without you
You reflect me, I love that about you
And if I could, I would look at us all the time

Raman knows Ishita is unlike any other woman, a woman so selfless, full of love, resilient and pious. She is an original his Jhansi Ki Rani'. Ishita knows there is only man who can love and adorn her and he is unlike any other man, a man with a tender soul of a baby, a man with heart full of passion and eyes full of love, he is an original her Ravan Kumar'.

When their souls danced today to the beats of their heart, they saw their reflection in each other, like a lock and key incomplete without each other. Raman a man rejected in love saw his reflection in his wife's acceptance, and Ishita, a women scorned by love saw her reflection in her husband's healing soul. Raman revived Ishita's dead soul by making her a mother, and Ishita revived Raman's dead soul by making him a husband. Every lock has it's key, Ishita's lock found Raman's key of love and it was a matter of time before they would open the doors of music into their lives so they can sway to the songs of life.

Now you're the inspiration for this precious song
And I just wanna see your face light up since you put me on
So now I say goodbye to the old me, it's already gone
And I can't wait wait wait wait wait to get you home
Just to let you know, you are

You are you are the love of my life

Today when their eyes danced without missing a sight of each other, telling each other the story of their future. The precious song of life that they now start to sing while they say goodbye to their old self to welcome the melody of togetherness. With their hand intertwined together, and their eyes piercing through their souls, who needed words for love when these two danced in togetherness.



Sorry for this short and botched write-up, I couldn't do justice to the beauty of their feelings today as I only had 15 minutes to write this up. You guys know who to blame for this atrocity.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its just amazing
the way you have explained all the emotions in it is just superb
It just reflected the feelings between Raman and Ishita
thank you so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I just realized I hadnt unressed yet😛
I knew this would be a beautiful and mesmerizing read.. Cause G and I pushed you into writing something.
So please keep putting up such "atrocious" posts, and spare us from giving you too much Bhav😛

Beautiful song..and the way you have used it in your post is brilliant

Loved these lines specifically-

When their souls danced today to the beats of their heart, they saw their reflection in each other, like a lock and key incomplete without each other

Every lock has it's key, Ishita's lock found Raman's key of love and it was a matter of time before they would open the doors of music into their lives so they can sway to the songs of life.
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Now please put them up at earthly times for me to get some heavenly sleep in a sappy mood
You must be thinking I sound demanding. You are right😉😛
Edited by swathibalan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beauuttiful Doc...😳😳❤️ ...If this is botched up.. then I dunno what to say..!😛
"Raman a man rejected in love saw his reflection in his wife's acceptance, and Ishita, a women scorned by love saw her reflection in her husband's healing soul. Raman revived Ishita's dead soul by making her a mother, and Ishita revived Raman's dead soul by making him a husband." - Beautifully summarizes their journey...😳😳

PS: I shouldnt have reserved the post.. I can't do justice to your writing...😊 And you added another song and helped me refresh my playlist!😛
Edited by janu12345 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And the forumwasis can thank Swaths and I for this piece ...and I'll take that thanks! 😃As we're both right...

I needed something to overcome my anger at the editors today and that handhold gave me that...that's why it was the thing I posted 1st...such a poignant moment of healing touch for a man who has just been humiliated by another love of his life, his son...
and your words do so much justice to that little split second scene...
"Raman revived Ishita's dead soul by making her a mother, and Ishita revived Raman's dead soul by making him a husband. Every lock has it's key, Ishita's lock found Raman's key of love and it was a matter of time before they would open the doors of music into their lives so they can sway to the songs of life. "
if we watched poetry of love in the dance...this is one of expression of the crux...sublime! 👏
Edited by GanBarunFan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Your writing is like poetry 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sulochana90

Its just amazing

the way you have explained all the emotions in it is just superb
It just reflected the feelings between Raman and Ishita
thank you so much


Thank you sulochana! I am glad you felt that this reflected Ishita and Raman's feelings 😊. Please don't thank me, all the thanks belong to you for taking out the time for reading and giving feedback. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

And the forumwasis can thank Swaths and I for this piece ...and I'll take that thanks! 😃As we're both right...

I needed something to overcome my anger at the editors today and that handhold gave me that...that's why it was the thing I posted 1st...such a poignant moment of healing touch for a man who has just been humiliated by another love of his life, his son...
and your words do so much justice to that little split second scene...
"Raman revived Ishita's dead soul by making her a mother, and Ishita revived Raman's dead soul by making him a husband. Every lock has it's key, Ishita's lock found Raman's key of love and it was a matter of time before they would open the doors of music into their lives so they can sway to the songs of life. "
if we watched poetry of love in the dance...this is one of expression of the crux...sublime! 👏


G that handhold did me in! I couldn't focus on anything else 😊 and enough with the praise, I am just happy you enjoy reading my gibberish 😆

So true Raman got rejected by his progeny but accepted by his life! What a dichotomy and KP was just so brilliant, puttar is driving me berserk in fangirling

"if we watched poetry of love in the dance...this is one of expression of the crux...sublime! 👏" Wah ji wah! Hamari toh bolti band ho gayi!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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If that "botched" write up is what you could produce in a mere 15 minutes, then I urge you to keep giving us "botched" writeups in the future as well. 😉

Before I go any further, I am just informing you that I have been studying (and dreaming) all about the glycolytic pathway and Krebs cycle along with the intricacies of electron transport chain complexes over the past few days for my biochemistry exam (thankfully I just took my test earlier this evening!), so I may be just a bit sleep deprived and in my "sciency" mode as I write this.

Your post was absolutely poetic today. The analogy of the lock and key that you brought in...my oh my how spot on it was!

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

When their souls danced today to the beats of their heart, they saw their reflection in each other, like a lock and key incomplete without each other.


And now I'm going to go and ruin these poetic words with my scientific analysis, but what can I do? Reading the words lock and key together while studying a multitude of enzyme mechanisms made me automatically connect the two together (that's just how my crazy brain works!). 😛😆

For the non-science bunch here, enzymes are biological molecules that catalyze specific chemical reactions. A really popular mechanism that teachers use to explain how enzymes work is the "lock and key" model, where the lock is the enzyme and the key is the substrate. Essentially, only the correct key (substrate) fits into the lock (enzyme) to catalyze a particular chemical reaction. So you can see now why I automatically thought this way when I read the original post.

Now for the YHM connection, Ishra's heartbeat (the substrate) fits seamlessly into Ishra's soul (the active site of the enzyme) to catalyze Ishra's relationship (the chemical reaction). The result of all this smoking biochemistry is what we see on screen everyday.

I hope that made sense; if not, just think of it as the ramblings of a sleep-deprived biochemistry major. 😳 Anyways that all I have for today; now I'm off to catch up on some very needed zzz's 🥱
Edited by nividances - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏Such awesome words and perfectly picked moment and thanks to G for pushing u!!!😉 I look forward to ur ladies' posts as much as the episodes. U ladies have such a lovely perspective to relations. Simply wonderful.

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