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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Ipsita_Ipu
I m just speechless😭
Actually I m not able to describe my feelings after reading it but yaa itz ur best update I have ever read
Hats off👏
Plzz update it soon😊

Was waiting for someone to say this, dear!! Thanks a lot, dear!! Hope to change your opinion on my best in the future!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik
ver emotional update but i'm confused why draupadi want arjun to hate her but i just hope their misunderstanding gets cleared soon .
nd thanks for updating nd SORRY for the irritation i did by telling u to update but what to do i really love ur story nd plz plz plz plz i request u to update fast next prt nd longgg one waiting...

Thanks a lot, dear!! she wants distance between them!!! No, dear!! I have no problem in my readers demanding updates cause once I had 2 full pages of demands on one of my FFs and i love it!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: AikaSheikh
Yagyaaa~ I'm late again 😭😭😭
This is beautiful, Dear! Really heart touching. Hatch off to you! 👏👏
The last part make me 😭😭
I cant bear to see them like this...
Do update soo, Dear. And please, make them together 😊

Thanks a lot, dear!! I will have to disappoint you in this case!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: lnidhi30
Very nicely written yagyaseni... but make ardi patch up soon I can't see them in so much pain write some nice romantic patch up where Drau wants to be pampered like a child by her parth😉

Abhi, I didn't even give a full-fledged painful update,yaar!! I will make you all cry with update for sure!! Sorry for this but this is necessary and my name is Yagya

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: ayu_8
hello jiji!!😳😳
first of all congrats on new thread!! i luvd this banner yaar it very beautiful!!!!!
ParYa dance ... ohh how i wish we all cud see that!!
jiji u hv written sooo nicely !! luv u 👏👏
i have no words for last two parts, the dialouges r sooo goood🤗
and yaa... i hv a complain! u have not updated frequently 😡.. there are soo less parts😭
m angry so now to make me happy u have to update a long one😃
will u??😆😆

Thanks a lot, darling!! Love you too!!! I will try to make a long one!!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Sanjana_JA
Yagya rula diya tumne muje!!!!😭
Speechless dear!!!
I can just say one thing,u touched my heart!!!Amazing👏
Update soon dear!!!😃

Thanks a lot, Sanju!!! Rulana nahi chahti thi par kya karen storyline kuch hai hi aisi!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Read this at your own risk! It is not 18+! But extra heart-wrenching!Part 38:
The time halted as the breathing rate of Arjun increased as he painfully said,
"You are asking me this, Yagya? You used to love me unconditionally and I was your husband, Yagya!"
" If you remember, your brothers were also my husbands and I did love them, too! Then why are you the only one to claim rights on me, Arjun?"
She said while her eyes were flooding with tears like the waves of the sea and her heart was losing it self as a wind blowing a direction, unknown. Arjun was shocked beyond anything as he couldn't believe that it was his Yagya, in front of him.
A person came running to them, bringing them out of their painful trance. It was Chitra and She asked,
" Yagya why are you here? Anyways, Chalo sing a song for us, naa!! Everyone wants to hear your beautiful voice!"
" I am not in a mood to sing, Chitra!"
" There is a song for every mood, Yagya! Sing whatever you feel like naa!"
Arjun's eyes for now ready to spill out their inner feelings. Yagya could sense it and said,
" Chalo Chitra!! Let us go!! I know what I have to sing, anyways!"
Arjun wanted to stop her but he was too hurt at her statement to say anything. The sight which will turn invisible and the dream which would be faded is soon going to be his love, for Arjun.
Yagya went to the stage and her eyes were sparkling with the tears of her painful love. She started of painfully,
Yaara...
Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si ilteja
Ye meri zamaanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai aa...
Arjun who had reached there felt his heart wrenching. My heart's desires flowed out in my tears.Life became an unquenchable thirstand love stories stayed incomplete, thought Arjun.
Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de naye bahaane de
Khabon ki barishon ko mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

The heart which wrenched through the ages for love, was now wrenching again in its pain. Though they obliterated themselves, the distances remained. Nor did the Faith fade nor did the loneliness.

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x20

Difficult to understand was this story of their love, which was the most beautiful and heart-touching yet the most painful and heart-wrenching. Each other being the cause of the other's happiness but the reason for their rare tears.

Yaara...

Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise koi duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai
Ages passed but their love didn't change. They found themselves after finding each other but only to suffer the ultimate solace in their beloved's arms. The love so pure, between them that it could surpass everything but so intense that its scars would remain eternal on their souls.

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein
Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)

The beautiful melodious voice today cried its sad tale of love, as its heart poured out, demanding a reason of the unbreakable vow of silence which her beloved had taken. The warrior's heart, known to be softest ever, had to turn to stone when the vow had to be implemented was the truth never recognized. The melancholy strung in the strings of pangs of love, could only touch the soul.
Audience were left mesmerized by the beautiful voice and realistic feel that had struck them. Subhi felt like hugging her brother, the Almighty, Kanha as she felt the struggle of these noble souls to hard to bear. But as her brother had always told, " Nobility and Values shown, always pay off". Though this couldn't be accepted, as the pain of their love had not ended, but began a new chapter in their lives.
Yagya hurriedly got to her home as she couldn't face anyone right now and Paarth didn't know what to do. He spoke to Madhav who could only remind him the ultimate truth of love: It hurts, always!---Rula diya, kya maine? Sorry Guys!! But kya karen story line hi kuch aisi hai!! Hope you liked it!!Please comment and like!!

Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

I am all in tears, Yagya ! What an emotional yet excellent update !

The song was just perfect for the condition.

You are a blessed writer!

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago

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Krishnaa Nair Kooriyil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

not gonna comment!! pls excuse me!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes
I am all in tears, Yagya ! What an emotional yet excellent update !
The song was just perfect for the condition.
You are a blessed writer!

finally, Madam in her place!!! Thanks a lot, Angela!!! I am obliged!!