LOVE STORY - Page 2

what happen guys pasand nahi aayi kia??? 😭

I love it!!👏
Amazing part!!😉
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😳😳😳

KRISHAN IS HOCKED TO SEE COLOUR FUL DECORTAION HE CALL SERVANT YEH SAB KISS NAY KIYA WOH KAHTA HAI KT MADAM NAY KRISHAN IS GETTING ANGRY CALL HER WOH AATI HAI JI SIR APA NAY BULA KRISHNA APA SAMJHTI KIA HAI APNE APA KO YEH DECORTAION KIYA HAI APA NAY APA KO NAHI MALOOM I HATE COLOURS SHE SAYS SIR MAUJHAY MALOOM NAHI KRISHNA SAYS SHUT UP AND BE OFF ITSMY MISTAKE KAY MAIN NAY APA KO JOB PER RKHA KT ROOTI HOYI JATI HAI NAKUL EYH SAB DEKHTA HAI AUR KRISHNA SE KAHTA HAI YAAR TUJHAY KIA HO GAYA HAI US KO KIA MALOOM KAY TUM KO COLOURS PASAND NAHI HAI IS MEIN US KI KIA MISTAKE HAI U SHOULD SAY SORRY TO HER KRISHNA KO APNI GHALTE KA AHASS HOTA HAI WOH BHARA AAT HAI KT WAHA PER ROO RAHI HOTI HAI US KAY PASS AAT HAI KT US KO DEKHA KAR KAHTI HAI MUJHAY NAHI MALOOM THA KAY APA KO COLOUS PASAND NAHI HAI WARNA MAIN KABHI AUR WOH ROONE LAGTI HAI KRISHAN IAM SORY MUJHAY TUM SE AASA BAAT NAHI KARNI CHAYE THI IAM SORRY PER INSAAN JISS PER HAQ SAMJHTA HAI US KO HEE KUCH KAHTA HAI KT SHOCKED AND SEE HIM KRISHNA SAYS COME TO THE PARTY KT (maan mein) UN KO SAMJHA BOHAT HEE MUSHLIK HAI JO UN KAY DIL MEIN HAI WOH SAMANE NAHI AATA KT PARTY MEIN JATI HAI EVERY ONE IS DANCING KRISHNA KT SE POOCHTA HAI SHELL WE DANCE ? EPISODE END WITH KT SHOCKED FACE
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great job!!...but try writing a bit more! 😛

I agree wth Rani. And I think you should avoid writing in CAPS. It just looks like you are shouting. 😊 Liked all the parts.

i am enjoying it.... please do write more...if possible can u please write in english... it is so hard for me to read...

thanks 4 your comments guys
kt give hand to krishan and they r dancingsong is (WADA RAHA PYAR SE PYAR) ka they look eachother eyes after the dance nakul says to krishna chalo koi aasa aaya tumhari zindagi mein jo bohat kahs hai he says aasa kuch nahi hai and he leaves he think about kt suddenly he see some boys kt ko tang kar raha hai he get angry woh un logo ko marta hai kt says stoppped sir apa ko kai hoya hai he is my collage friends woh mujhay se mazaq kar raha thay thats it krishna kt ka haath paragta hai aur us ko le kar room mein aata hai aur kahta hai gusse mein what is your problem? if they r your friends than woh tumharay touch kar saktey hai on one to right to touch u kt says what happened apa ko kia haq banta hai mujahy se yeh sab kahna ka who r u ? krishna main woh ho jo tum ko kiss aur kay saathbardast nahi karsakta main woh ho jab bhi kabhi koi tum ko touch karta hai mera dil chata hai i kill him aaj tak is zindagi mein koi nahi aaya yeh main nay kiss ko aane nahi deya u r first one aur aab tum aayi ho tu main tum ko jane nahi do ga its my promise and he kiss her forehead episode ned with kt shocked face
tell me guys i like it or not sorry 4 nay mistake
love
samra

well done samra 👏 👏
do continue soon
n carefull sweety caps means shouting on forum avoide caps 😉
love
kitty