#2 Asya/Kabhi FF Teri Galiyan Part 18 updated on Page-92 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
hey di!!
awesome update
owhiee now everyone knws!
oh so they won...cool
owhiee!! the dance was so so cute!!
nice song selection
aww they all went and celebrate
so cute
adorable update
but chotu sa tha
amazng
awesome
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Surprise...
Hiii guys.
How are you ol?
Surprise to see me so soon?
Actually i read ur comments and realised that my update was actually very short, so thought of giving uh an early update.
Ok so here's the update.
(BANNER CREDITS TO ME)

Part-10

Next day in lecture.
Teacher- so students here is an important information, that our college is going on a tour to Manali for 4 days and 3 nights.
Interested students plz fill up the forms and give your names to me by tomorrow. The trip will go next week by bus.
All the stidents started discussing about the trip.
So is asya's group.
They all were very excited about the tour. All went home to take permission from their parents.

Everyone's parents agreed to send them to tour. Ol were very much excited for the tour.
This whole week went in preparations of the tour.
On the final day everyone came in play ground except our group girls
Boys were waiting for them.
Ayaan- yar kaha reh gayi humaira?
Rishabh- laibaa bhi nahi aayi.
Rizwan- nahi aayat.
Asad- aur nahi meri zoya.
Suddenly all girls came in jeans top, hair loose, eyes covered with aviators.
They all were looking hot, all boys were stunned to see their girls.
Girls- hii guys.
Boys in a dazed voice- hii.
All came out of their looking session and taunted them for always being late.
World war was about to start but teacher came and made the announcement.
Teachers- come on students give your attendance and be seated in the bus.
Teacher took the attendance and all students seated in bud after giving their present.
Humaira and laibaa were sitting together. Rishabh and ayaan were very angry seeing that.
Ayaan- yaar had ni hoti tum dono ki jab dekho sath baithti hu. Aana hi nahi chahiye tha. Saying so he went from there and sat on another seat.
Humaira- ise kya ho gaya.
Rishabh- thik hi toh keh raha hai hum yaha sab aaye hai trip pe and again you both sat with eachother. Saying so he also left from there.
Laibaa- ab ise kya hua.
Humairaa- vaise they are right we never sit with them on first place. Chal tu tere vale ke pas ja main mere vale ke pas jati hu.
Laibaa- vo kabse hum dono ke ho gaye?
Humi- bas bas zada we both know that we both a crush on them.
Laibaa blushed and went to rishabh and humi to ayaan.
This whole scene was witnessed by asya as they were about to take there place.
Asad- 2 more love stories are going to start😉
Zoya- true. I am happy for them.
Saying zoya sat on the window seat by asad sitting beside her.
Than enter rizwan and ayat hand in hand one after another.
They too sat on one seat.
Basically there were only two seats no tjree seats were there.
Humaira went to ayaan- ayaan plz get up i want to sit on window side.
Ayaan- kyu apni friend ke sath jake baith. Hum hai hi kon.
Humairaa- sorry na yar. I will be with you on whole trip pakka.
Ayaan happily- promise?
Humairaa- yes.
He happily have her the seat.

Laibaa- rishabh can i sit here?
Rishabh- why?
Laibaa- its my wish i can sit with anyone. Do you have any problem? She asked showing fake anger.
Rishabh- no not at all.
Laibaa- good. Rishabh smiled, seeing him she to smiled
Teacher entered the bus- students please make youself comfortable. If you have any problem do let me know.
All- yes ma'am.
Bus started. It was evening time
First few minutes everyone was busy in their own.
Asad- zoya you look stunning in this dress.
Zoya- thanku. Uh too look handsome.
Asad- thanku baby.
Zoya blushed.
Asad- when you blush like this i just want to bite your cheeks.
Zoya- haha i am not a baby asad.
Asad- for me you are a baby that too a naughty one.
Zoya- haha.

Rizwan-yar i am so excited for this trip.
Ayat- me too. Kitna maza ayega. We ll get more time to spend with eachother.

Ayaan- so are you happy?
Humaira- yes. I want to enjoy every moment of this trip.
Ayaan- me too.

Laibaa was siting looking outside.
Rishabh- yaar yeh kya hai? Maine isliye tumhe pas nahi bulaya ki tum bahar dekhke mujhe bore karo.
Laibaa- ok sorry. Tell me what to do?
Rishabh- talk to me. Lets talk.
Laibaa- okk.

After sometime all decided to play antakshari but asad denied.
Rishabh- khel na yar.
Asad- no i am not in a mood.
Ayaan- fine. Zoya hi important hai hum nahi. Sorry zoya we ate not blaming you but now he don hangout with us.
Rishabh- ya.
Humi/Laibaa- copy paste.
All saw in her direction confusion.
Humi- umm vo we meant same is our complaint for zoya.
Laibaa- yes. Fyn you all sit spend time with eachother we wont disturb uh. Saying so they all sat on their places with angery face.

Asad- yar yeh toh gussa ho gaye.
Zoya- but they are right we dont give them time.
Asad- yup you are right.
Zoya- so now.
Asad- i have an idea. Come.

Asad started the song eyeing ayaan and rishabh.

Beetch raat ko jagaye
Fizool ki batein banaye humesha late hi aaye fir bhi blame kare
Bina kuch kahe jo dil ki baat samajhle

Ayaan and rishabh continued.

Jabhi bhi mile ek tight hug zaroir de
I wish tumhare jaise dost
I wish tumhare jaise dost sabko mile.

Zoya too joined eyeing laibaa and humi.

Dinner pe mile breakfast tak batein kare
Ek topic pe 10 cup coffee Bhi kam pade.
Kabhi kabhi choti choti baton pe jhagdne lage.
Kabhi kabhi choti choti baton pe jhagdne lagyeh
Humi and laibaa sang for zoya

Kabhi panga ho toh seena tan ke danga yeh kare.
All laughed. Haha
All sang together.
I wish tumhare jaisa dost sabko mile.
I wish tumhare jaisa dost sabko mile.

Asad- sorry guys. This wont happen again.
Zoya- copy paste.
All- haha.
Humi-ayaan-laibaa-rishabh- its ok guys.
Rizwan-ayat- we too are sorry.
All- its ok.
They all enjoyed for sometime and than had dinner on a dhaba.
After having dinner all sat on their seats and slept.
Laibaa and humaira slept on rishabh's and ayaan's shoulder.
Zoya too slept on asad's shoulder and asad resting his head on zoya's head.
Rizwan and ayat too slept in eachothers arms.
(Guys you must be thinking that how can they sleep like.. But at night lights were off and teachers were also sleeping)

In morning everyone reached manali in hotel. They all went and just slept as they all were tired.
By afternoon everyone woke up and assembled in lobby.
Teacher- so guys outside is the food arrangements please go and have lunch.
Ayat- chalo yar. I am so hungry.
Rizwan- come baby.
All teased them- me too coming baby.
They felt embarassed.
All- haha 😆
They all had there lunch together.
After having lunch they all retired to theirs room.
They all went to one room to chit chat and have fun because they have to start their sight seeing tomorrow.
That day went in laziness.
Next morning they all went to Hadimba mandir
Hadima mandir is a famous mandir in manali made in memory of Devi Hadimba. It is situated in middle of forest.
All stood in a queue to worship God.
After an hour there turn came and they worshiped Lord Hadimba.
After that they all walked in forest exploring the forest and feeling peace and hapiness.
No couples they all were in a group. They all enjoyed a lot.
They loved the surroundings. They clicked pictures and also they clicked pictures with rabbits who were big in size and also too soft. Owners of this rabbits were outside charging money to take photographs. Than they took pictures with bulls and also took ride of them.
Thay also wore kashmiri dresses and than clicked pictures in that attire. They enjoyed very much.
After having refreshment they all went to Rahalla Falls.

Rahalla Falls

They were amazed to see such beautiful fall.
The voice of water falling from a was like music to ears.
In starting ol couples sat there on rocks with eachother feet dipped in water.
They all clicking pictures and capturing these memories in camera.
But zoya being zoya splashed water on asad and everyone.
And than the water fight got started.
All were half drenched .
It was night when they all reached hotel.

So how was it? I guess this one was long enough.
I hope you guys liked it.
Plz do tell me through your likes and comments.
Love Vish❤️
Edited by MagsDhingra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
res for me
unres...

wow maggie lovely update
amazing...👏
four days trip...😃
loved every bit of update 😛

cont soon n sorry for late comment
Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
res for affu, yashu, nino, liyu, nidz, jas, gowtu, hinu n abi bhai
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

rice

unrice!!
wuhuu!!
so quick update!
kya baat h!!
hmmm awesome one!!
manali trip!!
haye so cute
hehe this update was so sweet and so adorable
all the couples
too cute
loved the whole bus scene
the song one
the love brewing in the couples
everything
woah so they finally reached manali
too good
amazing
awesome
superb tourism
lets see whats ahead
amazing
spectacular update
loved it
update soon
Edited by riddhi1206 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Awesome update!!!! All couples enjoying!!!! Mujhe inke enjoyment se zyaada !!!! Aane wali AsYa ki judai ka darr lagrah hai !!!😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

res for affu, yashu, nino, liyu, nidz, jas, gowtu, hinu n abi bhai

🤗...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
loved it...
thnxxx for pm...
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
i loved it so much
thanx for the pm
update super soon like this please 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Very nice
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next
Continue soon

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