DARK & MATURE FF - WELCOME TO HELL...UPDATED 8/11/14 - Page 18

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Originally posted by: shmvr

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😛 even I am eagerly waiting to see ur views..
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Kya yaar stil no update:(
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done 😳
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Originally posted by: mrdodokk

Kya yaar stil no update:(
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Came back from tuition...!!
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Originally posted by: Honey-FLAB

RES'WA...


EDITING😃

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900cc">I'M SO DAMN LATE😡
ANYWAY, THIS PART WAS SO CUTE!😳😳
THE SWIMMING POOL PART WAS JUST FABULOUS...👏👏
I LOVED THIS UPDATE TO THE CORE!😳

SWEET AND LIGHT HEARTED!😳😉
AND NEXT PART WILL BE HELL??
WAITING EAGERLY...😃
UPDATE SOON!😡😡

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...😆

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Thanks a lot anu...!!
Updating today
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Hello everyone...!!some of you maybe be angry with me for updating so late but can't help it ...!! So much work and studies that I don't get time ..!! Sorry ...here is the next part... I dedicate this part to all of the readers who always leave down their reviews and encourage me to write more... Including silent readers also because somewhere they also read my work although I don't know whether they like it or not ...! Happy reading...!! Checking is not done... And there can be a lot mistakes...!! Because I type it from phone.. Haha..


Chapter 9


"Please dont do this. Not again" I pleaded, still cradled in his arms as he carried me upstairs. "Please, I beg you, please" I was crying again. I might have lost count of how many times I had cried today, but they were all because of him. I didnt even understand how it was possible for one person to make you feel this miserable. And then, at the pool, there was a moment where a tiny little part of me thought he might actually have a soft spot, a good side, even if it was a minuscular part, I had believed I could maybe reach to the good in him. But not even. What could have possibly happened to him to make him like this? Cruel, heartless, to make fun of me for my fears, that is for me the worst.



I had been too lost in my thoughts to realize we had reached his bedroom and he was laying me on his bed, again. No. Not again, please. He was hovering on top of me on the bed, his weight resting on his knees, which were at each side of my hips on the mattress.


"Randhir" my voice broke, tears filling my eyes as I looked into his eyes, searching for that tiny human part I still had a tad of hope existed. "I thought..."


"What? You thought, what?" He looked into my eyes "That I changed? That, this, changed?" he looked into my eyes expectant. What was I supposed to say, had I really been that stupid? What went through my mind? I had a dark mark on my face because of him, I had bite marks on my neck because of him, I was being kept in here against my will by him. Of course he didnt have a good bone in his body. He chuckled, darkly "sanyu, the only way this can change is if you want it to. Now, Im sure you dont want to get hurt, right?" he looked at me with a raised eyebrow, as I slowly shook my head no.

"Then kiss me"

"What?"

"Kiss. Me. Two words, babe" I shuddered at the word, maybe at all of them, as Randhir connected his lips with mine softly, like testing the waters. I didnt react, I neither moved away nor did I kiss back. I didnt want to kiss him but the whole idea of giving in made me nauseous. Randhir was moving his lips against mine now, trying to get some sort of reaction from me, failing at it.


"Dont make me say it again," he murmured against my lips which made me quiver, he would hurt me if I didnt obey but I jut-

Randhir's fist smacked against the headrest of the bed which made me jump, "SANYUKTA", my hands immediately shot to his hair, tangling between his chocolate brown hair while I brought him closer and kissed him, shutting my eyes tightly trying not to get sick. I had to do this, or else the next hit would be directed to me, and knowing him, it would be my face, again.


He seemed to be happy with my response because I felt him smirk against my mouth as we kissed. He ran his tongue across my bottom lips, like asking for permission, I would have probably given it to him had he waited for it but, of course, he shot his tongue inside my mouth less than a millisecond later. It was getting too much for me, I felt like I was giving him permission, not fighting against it, against him. But I didn't stop kissing him back.


His hand grazed the side of my body, starting on my elbow and going down my arm, then he stroked down my waist, resting for a second on my hip and then going down, through the outside of my though. When he reached my knee, he moved his hand to the inside of my leg, his fingers ghosting my skin up until he rested his hand mid thigh, putting gentle pressure, spreading my legs apart as he moved his own, resting himself in between my legs as he pushed us even closer than we already were. He lowered himself so our clothed chests pressed together, but we were still wet from the pool, and I was still braless, so no need to say, how uncomfortable I was with everything. He didnt pull back from the kiss at any time and our lips were still connected, tongues dancing together, until I felt his hand hitch up under my shirt, and I froze.


"Sanyukta," he said, clearly expecting for me to kiss him back again. I didn't. "Do I need to say it again?"


"No" I said firmly as both my hands yanked him by his hair off me, which made him immediately pull back from me, surprise evident in his eyes, but it quickly, and I mean quickly, changed into anger. Wrath, fury, anything you want, I had never seen him like that.


"WHAT. THE HELL. WAS THAT" he said, his eyes piercing right into mine. He was still hovering over me, which made me feel even smaller than I already was next to him. But I couldn't back down now.


"I'm not a toy, and I will NOT be treated like one" I snapped, "do you honestly think I'm only going to give up? Already did that, didn't work, cause I'm STILL here! And-"


He hit me, again. But it wasn't on the face, it was in my stomach, which made me clench in pain. If I'm being honest, I was expecting it. I might have pushed him to far, but it was about time, and not going to give up.


"Want to say that again?" he asked with a smirk on his face, looking into my eyes.

"Yes" And the smile quickly disappeared. He hit me again, this time on the face, and I screamed, or groaned. Whatever it was, it didn't sound like me.

"Still?"

"Still" I managed to choke out. And then he lost it. He hit me again, and again, and again. I lost count after the fifth blow when the pain became too much and my body was numbed. I closed my eyes tightly, not wanting to look at him as he beat the crap out of me. The first two minutes consisted of hit, after hit, after hit. But as that time passed, I felt the time between his blows stretch; he was hesitant. I knew, because he couldn't be tired from hitting a defenseless creature like me, it had to be hesitation. But I didn't care what it was; my mind was in off.


He suddenly stopped, and I heard him sigh. "You know... You are the one who makes this harder, you should just give in" he kept quiet for a while, waiting for some kind of response from me, but I couldn't move, or talk. Still with my eyes closed, I realized I looked like a lifeless person laying covered in blood in his mattress, and I was happy I was the person laying in here because if I had being a third party watching this, I would've probably shit my pants, or worse.

"Sanyu. Say something," but I didn't. "Sanyuktaaa" he said, his voice was agitated, like he was worried, but of course he was, kidnapping was one thing, but killing? Different story.


"I- yeah" I breathed out. I slowly opened my eyes to reveal a concerned looking Randhir. His expression changed from worried to a blank one when he saw I was alive, and up. He just stared at me. I tried to take deep breaths, but I couldn't.


He reached and tugged strands of hair that were covering my face away from my eyes, being extremely gentle and careful, like he was afraid to touch me. He sighed. "This is your fault"

"I dont even ask for that much"

I wanted to answer that, to fight him, to say that I would never give in, but even if I had been able to talk my head told me it was a bad idea, that I should drop it. I closed my eyes as tears started coming out, and when I opened them again he was leaning closer, my eyes widening in fear.


Randhir didn't say anything else; he stood up and left the room. Why did I feel like this had happened already? This was not the kind of Dj vu I liked having.


RANDHIR'S POV


I took deep breaths as I exit the room, making my way downstairs and as away from her as I could till I could let out. How could she be so stubborn? I only asked her to kiss me, I... Was I really that bad? I apologized for the pool thing, whatever it was, but I never wanted it to look like this would change. She needs to understand how it works, but she's... stubborn. None of the other girls have ever been this way; they're always so willing. Maybe that's what attracts me so much to her. The way she resists me, but even though, she has to let go. I don't understand, she was the one who approached me in the club, I wasn't even looking for anyone, not after what just happened with neha last week, I couldn't think of any girls besides her, she was everything to me, and she just left. And sanyukta, she was so... fun, and up for everything and, beautiful.


I've been told thousands of times I'm good, great actually, so she should actually be enjoying this, not pushing back. It only gains her more and more bruises. And I felt like shit every time I lay a hand on her. I'm a gentleman, my mum taught me better than that, but I get so caught in the moment... But what does it get me? A perfect, beautiful girl nearly lifeless in my bed; crying over things that seem so stupid. I was only trying to be funny when I through her in the pool, let's be real, it's hardly deep, had she reached down she could just jump back up and that's it, but she cried. Hard. And I was getting so f**king frustrated I couldn't do anything right with her.


But I was going to have her, cause she was mine. Mine.


And if I couldn't have her mentally, I would have her physically, eventually she would realize she had no other option, because she's not leaving anytime soon. And I was so hot right now, just to think about her naked under that wet shirt and sweatpants, the image of her wearing my clothes, or without them, us kissing earlier, how she had actually let go for a second. God.


But I couldn't have her right now, not after what I had just done; I'd kill her. So I had to wait until tomorrow to take what was mine.

But I would.



To be continued...


Pls do leave your reviews...!! Iss par main Bohot violence ho Gaya... But dark is dark... Hungry for your comments ..criticism always welcomed...and extremely sorry for being late... Studies and all... Hope you like it ..!!
Edited by Paravi - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KRISHAJADAV

OMG...😲😲
teaser was shoking..
pls update fast




Updated ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unress
Hiii Janavi
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely n beautifully written👏👏
Love it to the core❤️
Beautifully you've describe the scenario
Omg...Randhir..what u did??😲
Sanyu sab kuch sai rahi hai...her stubborn awesome😎
Rd love someone. .who ditch him
because of that Neha😡...he's behaving like this..!
Randhir find her different from other girls😳😳
Well its going interesting😉
update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Thx 4 pm🤗
Edited by Param_love - 11 years ago

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