MaNan FF: You are the one(part 3B updated 16/11/2014)

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CHapter 1:Below
Chapter 2: Page 2
Chapter 3A:Page 4
Chapter 3B:Page 6

It's the winning celebration party of SPACE. Everyone wanted to look the best. The girls wanted to look the best as they had known Manik is single again and Boys wanted to go gaga over Alya...Whereas in the Fab 5 Mukti wanted to celebrate the win, Cabir wanted to keep aside his weakness and face the world, Alya wanted to be there for her friends and Dhruv wanted a chance to confess his feelings. However NH3 had a different story. Navya wanted to be there with her Harshadji who was going in the party to implement his plans. Everyone had a motive to come in the party .But there were two people who wanted to be confined in the four walls of their room and be with themselves only.

Nandini Moorthy heartbroken and shattered stood by the windows from where she often saw her monster honking the car. She knew he had broken her heart and he did not deserve all the attention but yet she could not stop herself from missing him. She could still not believe that Manik had broken her trust .The same person who asked her to trust him just 2 days back. The one who asked her to shine for him and remember him in her prayers. But it was all a lie...Nandini cried and then sighed and said...Alas...It was all a lie.

Her thoughts were interrupted by Chachi.

Chachi: array...Nandini you are not ready yet? Don't you need to go to the party?

Nandini: No Chachi I don't feel like going. I feel sick

Chachi: Nandini don't lie to me. You don't want to go because you lost. But Nandini this is life. If today you have lost, you don't need to worry. I know you are capable to make others loose as well. You have always been a fighter .I remember when you came back from USA after that incident 10 years back. You know that day what you said to your ams. (Nandini looked at her)

Chachi: You told "Ams don't worry. Appa and Mama are here with us. Everything will be alright. I am papa's fighter and I will make it fine I won't cry. I am a scientist's daughter. This is just a phase of my life where I fell down. I know people will trample me but I have the guts to stand up and run again because I am Nandini Moorthy. My parents are always there with me, no matter what. Don't cry.

Nandini had tears in her eyes.

Chachi: When Nandini of 9 years could say that much when her parents left her today my Nandini is of 19.I am sure she has more guts. I know one fall will not make her wounded. You are a lioness. GO with your head held high and crush them all. Go to the party. And who knows you could meet my SHahrukh also.

Nandini smiled

Chachi: Now you are going or you want to have my Manchurian pooris...

Nandini laughed while crying

Go and come back soon. I will take care of Rishab

Chachi went closing the door.

Nandini: yes Chachi you are right...me wont break. I will show Manik Malhotra what he has lost. Just wait and watch

Manik Malhotra on the other side was angry at himself and at everyone around him. He had switched his phone to avoid talks with anyone, scolded anyone who came in front of him, broke every single thing in his room. The only thing that remained safe was the dial lamp. He sat on the corner holding it and star gazing at his ceiling. He was frustrated, he was hurt, he was shattered and more over he was heartbroken.

The door of his room knocked.

Someone form the door: Baba...Madam is calling you downstairs

Manik shouted: Are you all deaf or you all wanted to die today. How many times have I told you all that I don't want to see anyone? Get lost

He opened his bloodshot eyes totally red with anger and pain and feeling totally lost and broken he walked toward the balcony.

And this time someone opened the door of his room.

Manik: Don't you all get it that I don't want to meet anyone.

The lights of his room switched on and there stood Nyonika, his mother.

Nyonika: It's me

She looked around the room

Nyonika: And this is the first time Manik is here and not celebrating his win. If you remember we have a party to attend which I have thorn for you. And we both need to make it to the party together.

Manik :( clenching his teeth) I don't want to go to any party. I am not interested and I am not going anywhere with you. Get that thing clear in your head.

With that Manik turned showing his back so that she could not figure out his condition

Nyonika: Manik if you have forgotten I have already saved your friend's you don't need to do this mess in your room to pressurize me to not get Cabir expelled. I have saved him already. You are my son and you are safe with me and so are your friends. So why are you acting as a heart broken Romeo...

Manik did not expect much more. He had not thought out of all Nyonika would suspect him of being heartbroken. He turned towards her.

And now I want you downstairs in 15 minutes.

She then shouts...Ram Singh...I want this room straight right now.

She comes out of the room and says something is seriously wrong. Manik for the first time in the past 10 years did not answer me back when I ordered him.

She takes out her cell and calls someone: I want to know what Manik up to be for the last 1 month, since my stay in London. Each and every single detail.

It was the most lavish party anyone had ever seen. Nyonika had not kept anything amiss for the celebration. It seemed as if they were going to party week long. Media coverage, high class VIPs, paparazzi, celebrities everyone had their presence in their party. Then entered the people with royal blood running with in them. Fab 5 excluding Manik made their entry .They avoided and went into the venue straight. Followed by them Navya entered along with Nandini and Harshad.

Cabir: Where is Manik?

Alya: I tried calling him but his phone is switched off.

Manik: And look our very own loser Harshad is here. Where are you Manikin hope Nyonika is not up to something again.

And two black cars barged into SPACE. And then the mother -son due made their entry. They were all covered by the media. Manik wanted to avoid it but Nyonika caught hold of his hands.

Media: SO how does it feel ma'am. SPACE wins the Musiccana for three consecutive years?

Nyonika: It's an honor. I feel proud as a mom and even proud as it's because of my son Manik and his band Fab 5.

Manik: No questions please and he left her hands and went in the party.

He just made his entry when everyone in the hall started buzzing. But is eyes were just stuck at her .She felt him staring at her but she chose to ignore it.

Mukti: and here comes Manik.

She ran over him and hugged him.

He hugged her back.

Cabir: Where were you? We were so worried.

Alya: yah Manik...I tried calling you but your phone was off

Manik: yah the battery.

Dhruv: you are aright Na buddy

Manik glanced at Nandini and painfully looked at her and then back at the gland and nodded his head in positive.

Recap:

Someone is catching hold of Nandini with a knife in her neck

Manik: I am warrning you move away from Nandini or you will see your death right here

Nandini: Leave me please am ready to do whatever you want

Person whispers in her ear: Stop speaking in English. You know I understand English is a really good language but we south Indian are also no less na...our language is too good...Say something in South Indian as you used to in front of NYC Primary School back in USA...My bull Nandu...

Nandini repeated: Nandu the bull...we south Indian s is no less...NYC Primary School

Manik: What are you saying...I told leave her

Nandini felt the person loosen her hand and she turned back and hugged him tightly feeling overwhelmed and shouted-AARGAV...I missed you

And the person hugged her back and Manik stood there totally shocked.

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oh my god I love you seriously I do plz cont soon. And I hope ur exams are going well. Nandini's friend from usa. wow I am so excited.
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The party was on full swing. Everyone was enjoying except the two people who were taking glances at each other. Manik could not concentrate on anything else except her. He could not just take his eyes off her. But then he would see Dhruv also staring at her which would bring back Manik to the present and he would stop. He had to stay away from her. He needed some peace. he went to the stairs where they usually met, to find some solace for him with the moments he spent with her.

Nandini on the other hand could feel him staring at her. Though she smiled in the party to show him that she was strong she would fail at it the moment she saw him. His eyes looked so sad. Though his body language showed something else his eyes were expressing a totally different expression. It felt as if he was lost. At a moment she felt like going to him and know whets wrong but the very next moment she would hear his hatred for her ringing in the ears and stop herself. She needed to be alone. She did not belong in this crowd where everyone had a reason to be happy. She needed some time just for herself. She wanted some lone moments to think about her life. She went to the stairs so that her mind should give her some piece.

Manik was drinking. He had carried his drink along with him .He was gulping the drink along with the pain in his heart. She saw him there. And Manik saw her too.

Manik: So my Nandu is here .But no she is going (he did not want her to go her so he used his very old act to make her impulsive so he pulled her towards him and pinned her towards the wall...he then caressed her face and said while Nandini looked disgusted...) ummm...yah after what I did to you, I don't think you can handle being around me right.

Nandini got flashes of all what happened and she got really angry so she stepped on his foot making him scream.

Manik: ouchhh...have you gone mad

Nandini: It hurt Manik...woh I thought that you should also bear some physical pain so that you can figure out what it is to deal with a broken heart.

Manik: so my jungle bill is back. But trust me...

Nandini: no I don't ...I don't trust you and never dare to come near me again. You get that

Manik felt his heart cut into pieces and all the anger and guilt with in him rose. He pinned her to the wall and said

Manik: No...Nandini Moorthy you trust each and every single word I say. You trust me the most. If you did not trust me you would not believe what I said you yesterday. You believed that I...

Realization stuck upon him and he left her and turned his back.

Nandini: why did you stop? Complete Na...Speak out Na Manik that ...what...tell me

Manik: You know what...just leave...leave before I loose myself

Nandini turned him with full force and hit on his chest.

Nandini: Complete na Manik...Let me complete it...yah I trusted you were not a monster...I trusted that you will be with me...I trusted that you are my true love...I trusted my mom's belief in fireflies...I trusted you with my first kiss...I trusted you as my father's shadow...I trusted that I would be your princess...

She was crying and holding on to his shirts collar

Nandini: and trusted myself that I love you Manik...

Manik was helpless. He wanted to kiss away all the tears. He wanted to hug her and tell that yes she was right .She could trust him. She could tell that she loved him. He brought his hands about to hug her when she left him and looked at him

Nandini: But it was all wrong...it was your stupid revenge for a punch...punch Manik...seriously that punch...that one punch made you forget all the humanity, care ,friendship...everything...How could you manic Malhotra...How could you...didn't you even realize that you were becoming a added reason for me to live this life...Didn't you realize you were playing with the emotions of a girl who lost her parents love...and you played with the most precious emotion of her life...I trusted you Manik...I wanted to shine for you...included you in my every prayers...

Manik's soul crushed into thousand pieces hearing her. He was helpless.

Nandini: but now you will realize what you have lost...I won't lose my innocence Manik...this innocence of mine will kill you...you will die every day with your guilt...You will die every day...I hate you...I hate you

Saying this she ran away from their towards the parking. She was crying badly...

Manik ran behind her. He could not leave her right now. She was really not in a condition to be left alone.

Manik: Nandini...Nandini stop running

Nandini was running when she crashed into a person .She did not look up but realized that the person turned her towards him with her back facing towards his chest .He folded her hands and kept a knife like thing in her neck. As it was a bit dark, she was more scared.

Nandini: Manik...

Manik: Nandini...Leave her.

Person: So it's Nandini Moorthy with me.

Manik: I said leave her

Nandini: Manik...

Person: not so soon...I have got her after really long

Nandini: Listen who you are...I don't know you...Please leave me...

Manik: what...why are you requesting him...Are you talking to your boyfriend with so much of respect...shout at him...hit him like you did to me some time back...how dumb can you be Nandini Moorthy...You know what just forget it...you are only wild cat when with me...

Manik: I am warning you move away from Nandini or you will see your death right here

Nandini: Leave me please am ready to do whatever you want

Person whispers in her ear: Stop speaking in English. You know I understand English is a really good language but we south Indian are also no less na...our language is too good...Say something in South Indian as you used to in front of NYC Primary School back in USA...My bull Nandu...

She started having flashbacks of her childhood.

Nandini repeated: Nandu the bull...we south Indian s is no less...NYC Primary School

Manik: What are you saying...I told leave her and he went towards him to punch him

Nandini felt the person loosen her hand and she turned back and hugged him tightly feeling overwhelmed and shouted-AARGAV...I missed you

Aaargav: Nandu meri jaan...I missed you...

And the person hugged her back and Manik stood there totally shocked. Manik moved forward to see the face when he got a bigger shock of his life.

Manik uttered: A...argav...

Argav: Whets up...Manik? Long time brother...

Nandini: argav you know Manik?

Argav slapped her in her forehead and said

Aaargav: Nandini Moorthy you are still dumb.MAnik is my first cousin from my mom's side.

Precap:


Scene 1

Aaargav: When you love her, why don't you just tell her?

Manik: That none of your business, just go to your room and leave me

Aaargav: If you won't, should I propose her

Manik stood up and held his collar
Scene 2

Aaargav: Nandu, now I am sure he loves you

Nandini: No you are mistakes like I was, he just played with me.

Aaargav: are you serious,

Nandini: Let's not talk about this. I am going.

She walks away when Aaargav says

Aaargav: Like seriously I never thought Dhruv would play with your feelings

Nandini: What...I thought you were talking about...

Aaargav: I am talking about Dhruv. He loves you. Whom are you talking about?

Edited by Shreyame - 10 years ago
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oh my god I didnt expect this really manik cousin is nandu's friend. What an update awesome. cont soon and precap looks so interesting. w8 for d nxt one.

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