Arjun-Sakshi FF : Wada Raha... (Part 11 pg 34)22/7

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pango

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

awesome update

loved it

intresting story

thanx for pm

waiting for next part

continue soon

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Atisha Khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

ok...I'm sorry that I'm too late here...( already daant kha chuki hoon)

and I'm really glad that you've posted here... your story means something special for me... and I know each and every one is different from each other...bas tera emotions ke lekar khelne ki aadat same hain...aur isi aadat ke hum deewane hain...🤗

Start was awesome...the pain of losing a friend, and some promises which never gonna fulfill...and the connection you've set up between Sakshi-Arjun-Sam-Rosh...mind blowing concept...mera toh soch ke dimaag kharab ho raha hain...I hope story ke end tak yeh salaamat rahe...🤪

jokes apart...this story is going awesome...Sakshi knows something, Sam sensed that, Arjun found her mysterious and finally Sakshi-Ros secret in FBs...specially that mail...this mystery is going superb...& I loved it.

And the hollowness into Arjun-Sam-Sakshi's life, their pain, Sakshi's fright...your sketching skills are improved...genuinely.

Do continue...& love you...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Thanks for PM.

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Sorry for getting so late..😒
Finally the story starts from here...😃

loved the suspense filled update...saks and rosh's mystery was held with each word and line till the end...amazing..

the emotional outpour..though just a drizzle today...but was good..specially Sakshi's emotional quotient and then Arjun's instints...then sam sakshi talk..a formal, yet a touch of friendliness...loved it..

KG...i am really glad you kept sakshi;s character natural and real...not the reel one..which was way too absurd for me..😛
rosh has seen him...is it HIM??😃

continue soon..thanks for the pm...

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sonai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Awesome update. Plz update ASAP

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Awesome update.

Loved it very very much..

Superbly written.

But I have so so so many question.

But why didn't Arjun recognize Sakshi by now?

Or he just simply didn't care?

What's the relation between Coehlo and Sakshi?

What did Sakshi meant by saying "Par har kisi ki naseb Roshni ki tarah nehi hota"?

Plliishhh con soonz..

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dinazz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

nice.

nightmare and flashbacks amazing.

cont soon

waiting for the next part

thanks for pm.😊

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

awesome update Di

loved it

really intriguing!!

Arjun hasn't recognised Saki yet.. if this happens.. oh..

Saki to help Arjun unofficially..

the fbs were nice!

do continu soon

thanks for pm

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Awesome update...

I am sure Arjun has recognized Sakshi...😛😛😛

What Roshni hiding??😕😕😕

LOL...Sameer got punishment form Roshni...😆😆😆

What's the matter with Sakshi & Arjun's parents???😕😕😕

Hope so that Sakshi will help Arjun unofficially...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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rvss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Nice.
sakshi ab arjun ko madad karne wali he.
roshn ye ek name hi he jo dono ko ek dusre se jodkar rakhega.
Acha he.
dekhte aage kya hota he.
please continue.