FF ON VIRANVI (Viraaj's love) continued - Page 2

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PART 14------------------

All were shocked to the core but krish is happy about the new school.

Sunder - ise kya hogaya, ye kabse sabke baare mein sochne laga. Mujhe to kuchh gadbad lag rahi hai.

Gayatri - Tum theek keh rahe ho sundar, jo insaan sirf apne bare mein sochta hai, wo dusro ki parwaah karne laga kyun sia.

Jhanvi - aap theek keh rahiin hai maa mujhe bhi kuchh gadbad lag rahi hai.

Next day se sab apne apne kaam mein busy ho jaate hain. Jhanvi subah jaldi uthkar krish ko school ke liye ready kar deti hai. Sundar bhi ready ho jata hai aur sab log breakfast kar rahe hote hain.

Jhanvi - chalo krish jaldi-jaldi breakfast karlo warna school ke liye late ho jaoge. Sundar bhaiya aap krish ko school chhod denge.

Viraaj - are unhe opposite direction mein jana padega, mein chood dunga krish ko.

Jhanvi - umm... Viraaj aap kyun pareshhan hote hain. Aisa karti hun mein hi chhod aati hun.

Viraaj - isme pareshhan hone ki kya baat hi kya hai, raaste mein hi to school hai mein chhod dunga.

Jhanvi is scared for krish but he cannot stop viraaj in taking krish with himself.

Its 2. P.M now, jhanvi does all household work and gets ready to go to school for picking up krish.

But as soon as she is opening the door she hear sound of car and its viraaj who has picked up krish from school and now he is dropping him and is going back to his office.

Krish is coming happily. Jhansi is shocked to see him.

Jhanvi(worried) - krish tum! Kaise aaye??

Krish - are chichi viraaj uncle chood ke gaye aur unhone mujhe chocolate bhi dilaaya wo bahut ache hain.

Jhanvi(to herself) - ye viraaj ko kya ho gaya hai. Ye itne ache kaise ho gaye. Zaroor naatak kar rahe honge.pehle bhi to mere pariwaar ke saamne achha bannne ka naatak karte the, aur mujhe...

Wo sab sochkar hi meri rooh kaap jaati hai. Mein na to wo sab bhool sakti hoon aur naa hi ye ki unhone mere raghav ko mujhse chheen liya. Mujhe ab aur bhi satark rehna padega.

NIGHT TIME------------------------------------------------

At the dining table---------------------

Gayatri - so, krish how was ur first day at school.

Krish - dadi, it was so great. Mene bahut saare friends banaaye and school khatam hone ke baad jab viraaj uncle mujhe lene aaye to mene un sabse uncle ko milwaya. Viraaj uncle sab ke liye toys aur chocolates laaye the aur mere liye bhi, viraaj uncle is the best. Aur unhone kaha ki is Sunday hum amusement park jayenge. Right uncle?

Viraaj - right, we all are going to amusement park as a gift for you my darling krish.

(to gayatri)"umm... aapka aaj ka din kaisa tha? Are you ok with the office.

Gayatri - ahem... It was good umm... I liked it.

Viraaj - sundar bhaiya aap ka kaam kaisa raha?

Sundar - theek tha.

Viraaj - aur tanish tum?

Tanisha - oh it was great. I loved it. And mujhe first day hi ek project mil gaya. Thank you so much.

All had their dinner.

In viraanvi's room-----------

Jhanvi - aapne jo n sabke liye kiya, thankyou for that.

Viraaj - why are you saying thanks? Kya wo mere kuch bhi nahi lagte. Tum to jaanti hi mera tum logon ke siwa is duniya mein koi nahiin hai. Aur ye kehkar tum mujhe un sabse alag kar rahi ho.

Jhanvi was mesmerized by his words and looks into his eyes for quite some time and thinks"

"inki aankhon mein dekhke ek pal ke liye bhi ye nahiin lagta ki ye jooth bol rahe hain. Kyun mein in aankhon ki taraf khichi chali jaati hun?"

Viraaj - jhanvi, are you ok?

Jhanvi - umm... haan wo mujhe neend aa rahi hai. Good night.

Viraaj - haan good night.

And both sleeps. Jhanvi on bed and viraaj on sofa.

A whole week passed and now comes the Sunday.

Jhanvi(shouting) - chalo sab jaldi karo warna hum late ho jayenge. Come on be fast.

She goes to krish----

He was wearing shoes. She helps him and combs his hair and makenhim ready. Now she goes to her room.

(Thinking) - viraaj to ready ho gaye honge, unhe time par saare kaam karne ki aadat hai.

When she enters the room, she saw a different view. Viraaj was panicking moving here and there. He cannot find his shirt and that's why he had thrown all the clothes from cupboard to bed.

Jhanvi was shocked and shouts at viraaj"

"yeh aap kya kar rahe hain? Aur kamre ki kya haalat bana rakhi hai? Bina shirt ke idhar-udhar kyun ghoom rahe hain."

Viraaj first sees the condition of the room and then makes a puppy face.

"I am sorry jhanvi mera dhyan hi nahiin gaya. Par mei shirt nahiin mil rahi hai. Meri favourite shirt."

Jhanvi - kaise milegi wo mene laundry di thi abhi lekar aati hoon.

Jhanvi gives the shirt to viraaj and start cleaning the room.

Viraaj - are jhanvi ye tum kya kar rahi ho, late ho rahe hain. Kal kar lena.

Jhanvi was shocked "kya ye wahi viraaj hai ya koi aur. Pta nahiin ye kya ho raha hai."

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