mg Marriage' A cry of agony' part 11 on 143- 2 july - Page 54

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part..so maan's father was also like maan..adi saved geet and their mom is alive..
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gunjar banner is awesm lovd it sry 4 late comment maine aaj hi deka
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
want to know why maan become like this
geet hope she will be fine stand against maan act
maan mother her story will be intersting i think her story will disclose y maan behavior is like that

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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the note Mata ji 😆 on serious note, rightly said, ... waiting for next part
Nice teaser
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser
waiting to to maan's point of viwe
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Posted: 10 years ago
😃


teaser


maan come and sit on sofa he feel this house lost
its warmness so cold
just than another maan in come front of him an start to say


nastes ghari tu jevha
(nastes ghari tu jevha, jiv tutka tutka hoto
jagnyache virate dhage, sansar pataka hoto ) - 2


When you are not at home,
Life gets broken
the stitches of the living get loose
and family is teared apart


nastes ghari tu jevha
nabh patun veej padavi, kallol tasa odhavato - 2
hi dhara dishahin hote - 2
aan chndra poraka hoto, nastes ghari tu jevha



There is loud thunder
as if lightening has broken the sky
Earth looses its direction
And moon becomes an orphan



yetat unhe drashi, hirmusun jati mage - 2
khidakishi thabkun vaara - 3
tav gandha vachun jato, nastes ghari tu jevha



Sun rays linger at the door
And leave disappointingly
Breeze stops at the window
Then goes back without carrying your fragrance



tav mithit virgalnarya maj smarati laghav vela - 2
swasa vin hruday adave - 2
mi tasach agtik hoto, nastes ghari tu jevha



I remember the early mornings
When I got lost in your embrace
And stopping of heart without a breath
Now I am hopeless without you


tu sang sakhe maj kay, mi sangu ya ghardara - 2
samyicha jeev udas - 3

mazyasah minmin mitato, nastes ghari tu jevha

na ajun jhalo motha, na swatantr ajuni jhalo - 2
tujvachun umagat jate- 2
tujvachun janmach adato
nastes ghari tu jevha, jiv tutka tutka hoto
jagnyache virate dhage, sansar pataka hoto
nastes ghari tu jevha


Please tell me my beloved
What should I tell to this home?
Even the holy tall oil lamp is nervous
It is also going off with me
I am neither old enough, nor independent
I realize when I am without you
That my life has come to a halt.

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mirror1521

kuchh samajh nahi @aya





english translation bhi 🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful teaser! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser
Waiting to read d update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser mahi
maan is missng geet 😲
waitng 4 d update

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