Manan SS Sacrifice of Iove part 5 updated page 8 (13th November)

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Hey guys I am Kashmi and I'm a pretty newbie to this lovely forum and a fresh Manan fan today's kiss yet fresh in my mind and reading about the precap made me wanna write .. Drop in your precious likes and comments I would love to read them. Here I go:-

Hot burning hot, that was what Nandini felt at the moment her senses alert and every nerve end of her body felt like a live wire, seeing Manik's face so close to hers, feeling his breath on her lips and his arms wrapped around her frail body made her feel alive like nothing before.. Manik put a finger under her chin and tilted her face up to close in the distance between their lips, going up on her toes, Nandini put a hand on his cheek and gave in to his passion and their burning desires, hot met cold when their lips met, moving in sync they kissed slowly at first and then kissed passionately and deeply. His fingers tangled in her hair holding it in his fist as he kissed her like a man parched fulfilling his thirst after an eternity. They kissed until Nandini pulled out of the kiss feeling breathless but Manik didn't stop there he had not had enough slowly but teasingly he pushed back the hair creating a halo about her shoulders and bent down to press his lips against her delicate collarbone, but Nandini being Shy moved away creating some distance and leaned against a pillar her back facing Manik, her breath caught in her throat when she was suddenly thrust into a manly chest, the touch so familiar she knew it was Manik even without turning behind, his fingers trailed down her face to her shoulders and further down before Manik intertwined his fingers with hers burying his face deep into her neck, and with his free hand he moved away her hair, pulling down the strap of her dress he began finishing his unfinished task, he bent down and placed a deep kiss on her shoulder earning a short gasp from Nandini but he didn't stop as he continued placing a trail of hot open mouth kisses to the length of her neck, touching her with his lips first and then with his teeth leaving callous red marks of his passion and love on her, Nandini stood there numb only aware of Manik's presence behind her and lips on her body, her hand in his hair, massaging it slowly, only to add sparks to the embers of his love. Slowly Nandini turned in Manik's arms and out of impulse again went up on her toes and slowly but softly kissed Manik's forehead, his strong manly jaw before once again placing her lips on his and kissing him deeply. Nothing could have prepared Manik for the sweet surprise his Nandu gave by kissing him like that and he happily kissed her back feeling content , they both parted away yet reeling in the after effects of the moments they shared sometime back. Red in the face Nandini looked up at Manik waiting for him to say something, and just when he was about to say something to her he was distracted by a call, frustrated he pulled out his iPhone and saw it was Dhruv calling him. Without wasting a moment he answered the call and he was greeted by a short excited one liner "I wanna meet you now Manik."

Okay people wrote this much, did'nt really find it appealing coz I am writing after a long long time so it is a bit rusty but hope you guys like it and don't find it too boring. Lemme know if you people liked it or no and if you guys want me to continue with this one. I'd look forward to your positive feedback and criticism. Also if you could suggest me a better title I suck at those actually.😛

Love,
Kashmi



INDEX

Part 1- Page 1
Part 2- Page 2
Part 3- Page 4
Part 4- Page 6
Part 5- Page 8
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Thank you gal for your positive reply..😊
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Great start 😊 update soon
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Awesome story dear! Really hot! Pls pls continue soon and do pm me when u update! Wil be luking forward to the next part.
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Nice starting... Plz continue it soon:)
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Well its really apeal even when its a short one. plz cont soon.
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Originally posted by: sweet16cash

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my pleasure 😊
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kashmi!! We meet here again! :D

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Dude this was awesome!! I have always said that u r an amazing writer!! Loved how u paid attention to the little details and gave the sequence a new touch!! Enjoyed reading it!! Do continue soon!! :)
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Originally posted by: Mihi4VruShan

kashmi!! We meet here again! :D

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Dude this was awesome!! I have always said that u r an amazing writer!! Loved how u paid attention to the little details and gave the sequence a new touch!! Enjoyed reading it!! Do continue soon!! :)

Fabulous I'm super happy meeting you again Mihika.. :D.
I'm really glad you liked my work here I value your opinion Co it's unbiased and clear. So I'll post an update to this one sooner. Thanks for liking my work dear.. :)
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Hey guys here I go with the second installment of this story hope you guys like it. So here I go
Manik turned towards Nandini scratching his forehead uncomfortably. "Ummm Nandini"
"Dhruv called up"? Nandini asked her forehead creased a bit with worry "Yeaaa it was Dhruv on the line." "Is he ohkkk Manik he hasn't gotten one of his attacks again no?" "No no he seemed fine to me just a bit excited though, wanted to see me urgently actually".
"Go then Manik maybe something urgent "Nandini said with a sad smile, she had been looking forward to spending some time with Manik after their moments together, "What No not yet Nandini " Manik said too fast and then he realized what he had said in haste, "Ummm what I actually meant was that " not letting him complete his incoherent rants and explanations Nandini pushed Manik in the direction of their college with a sly smile on her lips "Go Manik Dhruv will be waiting for you. "
"Hey just sometime more Nandini I haven't had enough time with you." he said in an almost whiny tone, Turning towards him she said, "Me neither" with a shy smile and walked away leaving Manik smiling like a lost idiot, "This girl's innocence will be the death of me someday. " He stood there casually ruffling his hair reminiscing their moments until Dhruv called up again calling him immediately. He ran up the stairs to meet Dhruv, when he reached there he found Dhruv walking up and down the length of the corridor a bouquet of roses in his hands, almost bumping into Manik, until they both steadied themselves, "Hey what's up mhan, what's the urgent business with me and are these roses for me? " Manik joked thumping Dhruv on his back casually, not knowing that Dhruv's answer would turn his world upside down. "Manik don't take on me when I'm already so tensed." "Tensed for what? "Manik asked confused. Dhruv turned away smiling wide thinking of Nandini and he said dreamily, "To ask her out" "Ask whom Dhruv, don't talk in puzzles brother." "Nandini, the love of my life." Manik stood there shocked as if struck by lightning, he stood there processing Dhruv's words, Nandini Dhruv's love, Dhruv loves Nandini, I love Nandini, we both loved the same girl, what were they going to do about it, "What did you say Dhruv? ". "Yes I love her Manik, I love everything about her, her face, her smile, her innocence, her laughter, just everything Manik and I feel now is the time to ask her out, what do you say Manik I'm doing it right or am I not? ", His words hit Manik like a ton of bricks, this couldn't be real, this cannot happen, he was Dhruv, his brotherlike, he loved the same girl, what was he to do, life without Nandini seemed like an impossibility to him even thinking of it scared the living daylights outta him,but it was Dhruv, he again thought, but he loved Nandini too ugh this was frustrating, "Manik tell me am I doing it right?" "No this cannot happen Dhruv, just cannot happen "Manik exclaimed frustrated running a hand through his hair, he hated this situation. "What do you mean by cannot happen Manik "?. Manik suddenly turned away from Dhruv anger building up in him, tears burning in his eyes "This cannot happen because I love Nandini Moorthy, I love her Dhruv."

YO peeps done posting the second installment lemme know how do you guys like it and definitely drop in your likes and comments. Ohhh yea thank you so much for all the likes and comments for the previous chapter I felt humbled by your response. 😊
Edited by sweet16cash - 10 years ago

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