Tamanaa ' nigah e yaar ki ' || check note at page 139 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely CS I guess geet is not aware of being second wife of maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry dears for late i got stuck with hospital well me want one time admit in hospital lakin jab hoi toh meri band baj gyee god i hate hospital n medi dusman ko bhi hospital na bhejna mere

back to update

hi all thanks for liking previous part
this is pooja concept n i write this if she get time she also write on this story
waitng for your response please coment n like
well evry one know my English so dont mind n avoide gramer mistake
advance sorry


part 3


maan run to her and close her mouth with his hand his one hand is on mouth one is on waist

geet move trying to came out from grip

maan : kiya howa chilai q he shout at her thank himself in mind coz his room is sound prof his idea

Geet : whwhwhw

MAan : kiya how bolo bhi ab he sid in anger dont know what he did whcih made her shout


geet eyeing him n show his hand which is on her moth not let her to say

MAAn : ohhh par dobara mat chilna samji

GEET node he remove his hand from her moth

geet took long breathe n push her run to get her dupputa wear it propr ly n glaring maan (hey me actuly in my house we are not allowed to go infront of any men including bro n papa with out dupputa so i wirte geet like this only that y she react )

MAAN : what

geet : ap ko sahram nahi ati asey kisi bhi ladki k room mein agye hai jai yeh say dekye ksis nai ap ko dekha toh pata nahi humare bare mein kiya sochey ga jaie yeha say

MAAN : what tum kiya bol rahi ho aur tumhara room

geet : dekhieye jai yeha say koi ajai ga she was worried for her reppo a men which she dont know came to her room early morning what if her husband came


maan ; tum kiya bol rahi ho muje samj nahi arahai

geet : dekhey agar ap 2 minute mein nahi gye toh hum zor say chilai gye aur humare husband ko bola gye phir wahi ap ko yeha say behar nikal de gey samje

mAAN : what tumahi pata hai mein kon hoo he said coming close to her
geet breathe stuck to see him coming close

she move back word

n stuck between maan n wall

Maan ; geet hayat khan ap ka nikha MAAN SIGH KHURANA say kal howa hai maan singh khuran he said pint to himself

geet stare him n register his word

"maan " she said poitng finger to him

maan node his head

geet eys poped sh e put both hand in mouth like what she did

maan move n give her space she took long breathe n compose her self

geet : sorry sorry sorry hum nahi apki tasveer nahi dekhti thi humai sachi nahi pata k ap woh hai humai maaf kardije

now serino chage maan moving back n geet farwod

mAAN : ok ok he stop her

she stop jhali kiya karti hai pic nahi dekhi thi to poch leti dhanda lekar shoro hogye geet toh duniya ki pehli dulhan hogi jo apne husband say asey mil rahi hai chi she talking to her self

maan stare her try to understand what she is doing why she not speaking

mAAN st tuani kis ladki say shadi ki yeh jise yeh anhi pata k you are her husband wow

wase maan galti teri hai his heart say tu kal raat uske pas nahi tha jis tar hai tunai kiya woh bhi galt tha

now he felt guilty

geet turn from him start to talking to herself

GEet : jhali kahi ki kiya zarrorat thi asey bolney ki tere yeh zaban
( tongue ) bhot chalti hai ami nai kitna samjya tha lakin nahi

made all type of cute face she cursing her tongue

MAAN st : kam say kam sorry boldey tu nahi aya tha hmm

MAAnnet same time : woh mein ap tum

both shut together maan close his eyes geet too

maaneet : ap tum

both look again each other

geet : ap bol lejeye

taking deep breathe maan want to talk but he stop to hear some one knock at both compose them and maan open the door to saw his mother their with smile

MARiyaam came to maaneet room saw them

MARIYAM : Ma sha ALLAH , MA sha ALLAH bhut pyari lag rahe ho dono geet betey ap thek hai na she came close to geet n asked her lovily

GEET : AS SALAM O ALIKUM AMI

MARIYAM : walikum salaam

maan move toward dressing table n combing his hair n watching them throw mirror

MARIYAM ; ap dono ready hai toh chaliya she said n saw geet hand

MAARIYAM : geet ap nai chodiyan ( bangels ) nahi pehni she asked sternly

geet instantly saw her hand " woh meinn bhooll ' she said stameriming

MARIYAM : jaye pehanye ( wear them ) she order

MARIYAM : shadi say pehley ladkiya bangles nahi pehanti par shadi k bad wear them suhagan k hath khali achey nahi lagety samjeh ap

geet nod her head n went to wear them

maan saw her coming toward him he move n give her space

MAriyam : maan ap ready hai geet k sath hi break fast kijegye ga thek hai

she said n went from there

maan want to refuse but cant

maaneet look each other it was awkward silence now

maan st : yeh muj se kuch poch q nahi rahi meri kal rath ki harkat k bare mein

geet : " yeh kuch bol q nahi rahi tu hi bol "she think

geet : woh meinn yeh keh na but she cut by maan phone who start ringing

maan st : dam phone

he look his phone it was from office he remember his meeting today
he recived his call n start talking

geet saw him " stupid call abhi ana thi par acha hi howa mein kiya bolti unsay kitna ajeeb lag raha hai " she talked to herself

maan finished his call look her

maan : woh i have to go office

geet : node her head

he saw her last time n run out from there

geet saw him going but did not said any thing start to clean her room n keep her dresses in cupboard


here sultana maan chahci passing in her room she was distrub by maan act

SULATANA st : bahbhi ko bat dety hoo hmm woh hi thek kare gi sab( i should told bahbhi she will look after this)

she went to meet maan mother
she reached to her room

MAARIYAM : arey sultana itni subha subha kahereyat ( you here early morning what happen )

sulatan came to her : wohi toh nahi hai bahbhi ab kase batey hum ap ko

mariyam saw her distrub : jo bhi bath hai bolo kiya howa itna pareshan q hon

sultana : woh bahbhi aj subha jab hum pray ki liya uthey and she told her evry thing about maan saty with horam at nigth

MAARIYAm once get angry : sultana kisi ko is barey mein patan nhai hona chiye ( no one get know about this ) mein khud bath karti hoon abhi bf k liya chalo

sultana node both go to kitchen

in horam room she open her eyes n not found maan there she think maan went to geet room last night she cried

HOram st ; maan tum chely gyee apni hor ko chod ( left her) k geet k pass mein nai tum say kha tha k mat jao par sob sob

she cried n rub ing her eyes

maan open door n came n saw her crying he alert some thing happen to her

he came to her sat beside her

MAAN : hor what happen why you crying he asked

hor listen his voice n removed her hand from eyes saw him n hug him tight ( ayeeo mero ko phir jotey pary gey heheheh )

HORAM :; tum chaley gyee muje chod k maan q geye she said with sobing hard

MAAN sense her insecurity so he also hug her back : nahi hor mein yehi tha tumare paas bus thodi dair k liya gya tha he said n try to explain her he did not left her

HORAM : sachi tum yehi thye she said n came out from hug

MAAN smile n pinche her nose : muchi mein yehi tha ab raedy hojao subha hogye hai

horam smile at him get up from bed went to get ready

maan shock his head n cleaning bed his daily work you know 😉

TO BE continued

bus aur nahi write horaha my hands paining alot i hate canola grrr

here is part 3 hope you all like this one too

sorry for not replying any one dear dil say sorry 😭😭😭

big hug to all who like n coment 🤗🤗🤗


Ps note :; humko abhi bhi koi name nahi suja ap log dhondo koi nam dooja



Edited by maankijann - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i updated part 3 pooja will send pm hope you all like it too
sorry for mistake
waitng your precious comment
sorry for not replying any one coment
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Posted: 10 years ago
me first loved the update awesome talk btw maaneet loved geet innocent I think horam dramebaaz 2 keep maan in hand poor geet horam let maan marry 4 child then how she not letting maan 2 go geet room
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nothing has been talked out uff
horam and her insecurites hope maiyam didnt send hor away
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jab tak maaneet ko ek doosre se pyaar nahi ho tha ur gong 2 get dis smily 4m me always 😡
bechari geet 😭 thank god dat sultana said 2 maan's mom abt dat chudel nd maan's stay 4 nw i love sultana 😃
i seriously dont understand dat chudel ek tho kud hi maan ko shaadi keliye mana thi hai ab kud hi ro rahi hai itna in insecure thi tho kyu shaadi karwaayi 😡
waitng 4 d nxt part i want full of maaneet
Edited by mishtypie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nicd part
geet is so cute
and and and i dont like horam..usko jaldi se picture se OUT karo..
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Posted: 10 years ago
here horam behave like childish
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
Geet bahut cute aur bholi hai...loved it!!
Hor koi chalaki toh nahi kar rahi na?

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update..

maan cares a lot for horam!!


get well soon fariya...and take care!!

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