SwaRon OS: The Rock/Marshmallow Dichotomy

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

It's been a while since I've read your work, irrespective of whether you have been writing or not. I've just been too not-here to read 'em. 😆

Anyway, the OneShot's good. I can CLEARLY see where the reference comes from. I was laughing the minute I read baking. (😆) I shouldn't have been, I know.
The entire thing had a certain ease to it and I also thought it was ended well.

Oh and by the way, I have a question. If Sharon's a metal or a rock or a marshmallow, how on earth does she bake? I'd like to know.

That's about it.
Good work. =)

-Srishti

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Myra.

@Myra.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

OMG!! <3 sooo cuteee :)) I love that wen he said ur not a rock but a marshmellow !! AWESOME!! U have to know...urs is the only OSs that I read :D And the Sharon's mind about her happiness as in..wen she thinks she is a metal that could be corroded by substances or a rock broken by sunlight n both agents are happiness...awesome thinking man..u have an amazing way of comparing things...keep writing :)

sam.

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Actually in Hindi literature,"Alankaar" is like one of the most basic form to represent anything..And most above "Upama Alankaar" is upper most common way to empathize or deal with different analogies..(I know,my hindi words are completely bouncer for you all..As i know today youngsters hardly read hindi literature,but somewhere i felt it was such a gud example of Alankaar,Thats why i stated such confusing words)Anyways,according to me,Thats what u had done above in ur One shot..It was damm interesting analogy to compare..

I just loved that beautifull synopsis of Sharon where u showed her feelings regarding swayam..She is confused,loved but dont want swayam to close her..Swayam part was short i think..But in all,i enjoyed such a great read including some funny references,different analogies with SwaRon and most above "Epic vocabulary" of urs...

Well done and yeah Thanx for ur PM

Sorry for late

PS-Do update ur Smithereens as fast as u can..!

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago