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Posted: 10 years ago
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After reading manan os- "I'll be waiting" by ToralRas. I got an idea and thought of writing it down.
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Manik and nandu are in a secret relationship for four months now. One day in college

Nandini: Guys! I'm taking a break now. I'll come in a while. After getting manik's msz nandini tell her friends.
Navya: Its ok nandini. I m also tired we all should take a break.

Harshad thought After reading a msz nandini is talking about taking a break, and its not the first time she is doing this. I have to find out. He thought of following her.

Nandini: Hi manik
Manik: Hi you are seriously saying me hi after making me wait for you.
Nandu: Sorry!
Manik: No not this time you should be punished so that you dont repeat this mistake.
Nandini: What? What punishment?
Manik: This and he pull her towards him by her waist. With his free hand he hold her cheek and slowly close the distance between their lips but as soon as their lips touched he forgot all about softness and bite her lips and as she open her mouth he fight with her tongue for dominance. Both are in their own world unaware that one pair of eyes are watching all this.

Harshad in his mind so I was right there is an affair btw nandini and manik. I have seen the look in manik's eyes as he watches her every1 thinks manik hates nandini but nobody knows manik better than him. Once upon they were best friends even before dhruv came along. This is the time to take d revenge. He silently goes from there.

Manik's House
Manik enter his house with w smile on his face. Now a days he is always happy bcoz finally he hv a reason. Nandini is d reason of his smile, his life, his everything. Oh! He love her so much.

Harshad: What's up bro? Thinking about ur girl.
Manik: What d hell Harshad? What r u doing here in my room?
Harshad: Chill bro. I've just came to warn you.
Manik: listen I m not interested in u or ur warning. so take ur butt out of here.
Harshad: U r nt intersted even if d news is about nandini.
Manik: what
harshad: Yeah! I know about u guys.I hv seen d love u hv for her in ur eyes. The love my stupid sister always seek but u were unable to give it to her.
Manik: listen harshad keep nandini out of this you want to take revenge take it from me. Dont hurt her.
Manik: Aww! someone had said dey had said it correct love do wonders. The Manik Malhotra is in love. But so sad when she will goes away from u.
Manik: Harshad! He pulled him by his coller and said I'll kill u if you do anything to her and I mean it leave her alone. Harshad pushed manik away and goes from there with an evil smirk on his face. harshad in his mind do whatever you want to do manik but Im going to torn apart ur love. you hv snatched my mukti from me and now its my turn.

Sorry for the mistake and thank you for reading.If u liked the os plz press the like button. Your comments matter to me so plz tell how you like story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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please dont let the revenge be successful
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

please dont let the revenge be successful

Its an os I m nt cont this but if I do then dont worry manan wont be sep maybe for sometime but not for long.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG! U r a vry gud writer cont. soon DEAR..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mi_cheeky_me...

OMG! U r a vry gud writer cont. soon DEAR..😃

Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice os
plz continue...
n pm me plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow nice... Plz continue it soon:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute story šŸ‘ ya I really want to see Manan in secret relationship. Plz continue 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran

nice os
plz continue...
n pm me plzzz

Thank you I'll try to cont.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: missfilmy

Cute storyšŸ‘ya I really want to see Manan in secret relationship. Plz continue😊

Thanks.

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