MaNan OS: My Hazel..All Of The Stars - Page 2

Originally posted by: dewcute

zohaaa...

that was amazing girl...

you didn't even send a pm...

how rude...?

write more dear...

Jiya

Originally posted by: Malika.Dua

Zoha this is criminally BEAUTIFUL!!

The way you portrayed Nandu's feelings is too good. The fear of loosing her Manik, the fear of wondering if she will walk with him under that moon again.

I pictured myself instead of Nandini for a while and gosh! I don't think I would be able to endure such a painful feeling.

This is a great piece of work!

continue to write gurl 😳

_Dua :p

Originally posted by: Bubblie1490

THat was so pure, amazing and most of all touching.

Originally posted by: -DEvil_Heart-

Zoha🤗 that was WOW !! 👏
I just loved these line lines --> So open your eyes and see
The way our horizons meet
And all of the lights will lead
Into the night with me
And I know these scars will bleed
But both of our hearts believe
All of these stars will guide us home
❤️

Originally posted by: .ishqbulava.

AAAHH ! Zoha I loved this soo much as much as I loved TFIOS ! Its definitely emotional..the last bit..that was perfectly penned down..WOW !

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

I dnt knw what to say its a very heart touching os. Although I hv not read TFIOS I hv only hear the story but I hv understood d emotion u want to convey.

Originally posted by: kritu17krits

amazing