a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 33

Originally posted by: Preetirox

Hahah! It was a funny update!!!

Thank god that this one wasn't emotional otherwise I would have killed you!!

And I love the full on shy and blushy blushy sharon!! 😳 😳

finally swayam confessed!! Aww!! The way he confessed was so cute and the concern of losing sharon is very well written from the beginning!

Super enjoyable update it was!!

and write long updates please! This one was very small!
update soon!!

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

Awhhh!!!
Finally FInally!!!

Atlast Swayu says it!!!

Diduuu!!!

Amazingaaa!!!

I loved this update sooo much!!

Awhh sooo sooo cuteee!!!

EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT!!

heheeh!!!

Now what do i say!

Ur just tooo goood!!
That proposal, godz!!

I fell in love with that scne!

Oye wait!!

Diyu what the hell!!

Whats wrong with u!!

Inhaler ka time hai! Oops mai toh bhul gai! U have one didu??

Hahaaha!!

Yeshhh itni sweetness hai ki mujhe diabetes hogai!

Plus ab asthama attack aane wala he!!!

heehss!!

Ab jaldi update karo ms amazing writer!!

Aur mai abhi bhi ziddi huu!!
U are, u weree and u always are a better writer than me!!
Samjhe??!

Chalo Good!!
Finally u agreed!!!
Yayyy!! Hip Hip Huraah!!!

Madame! mai abhi tak apne update ke baare mai nahi bhuli!

U still have to update jaldi!!

I know I know

iss baar comments bahot late mile!!

Sooo sowwie for that!!
Next time se pakka time pe aayenge!!
heeh!!

Love u soo sooo much!

Hey, wait! I loved the update mroe!!

Huh?! Yeh kya?? Mujhe toh apni di hi sabse pyaari hai!!

heehszz!!

Hasso mat!!! *pouts*

Love u soo much mroe!!

AUR UPDATE!!!

Yesh yesh, I know am restless!!

Haye, ab yeh kaise pata chala?

Chalo zyada socho mat aur UPDATE KARO!!

Ur restless is waiting...

Love,

Waiting like an idiot,

Your biggest fan!!

P.S. I WANT A BIG REPLY TOOO!!! 

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

res di..

a big sorry for late..

am crazy with work.. 3 projects along with one unit test coming up.. 😳

Originally posted by: shaaz23

Great great going
I am loving this
Swayams confession,his insecurities and his love
Sharon's way of tadpaing him too cute
Update soon

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

nice & cute update... 

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

awesome update

Originally posted by: ShailjaShan

Awesome update yaar...👏

Swayam kitta cute h...Bechara darr gya ki Sharon usko chor k chali jaegi...

Sharon thora tadpao Swayam ko...Budhhu ko ab samjh aaya h...😆

Update asap..

Thanx fr pm..

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan

nice update

finally the cupid struck swayam

is trying to get answer from sharon

and she's playing her part too..

loved it 

sorry for the late comment

thnx for the pm

update soon...

Part  9

Swayam came home from the academy and saw sitting in the lounge chatting with muskaan...

"hello musky... And cookie...I am home..." He came and sat on the handle of the couch...

"we have eyes...we can see..." Sharon said casually...

"to tu nahi manegi..." swayam thought in his mind... " tujhe kaise apna banana hai ye mujhe achi tarah se ata hai..."

"accha cookie miss kiya mujhe???" swayam smirked at Sharon while sharon looked at him saying this in front of muskaan with wide eyes...

Muskaan chuckled and said... " haa bhai...sharon di ne to tumhe bohut miss kiya... Pure din kahi khoye hue the aur blush bhi kar rahe the..." Muskaan had noticed Sharon smiling at herself while thinking about the previous night...

"haa wo to pata hai..." Swayam tilted his head looking at Sharon with a smirk while Sharon looked down to cover her blush with the hair falling over her face...

"acha bhai mai coffee lati hoon..." muskaan went to the kitchen...

Swayam moved behind Sharon and bend down to her ears to whisper

"mai fresh hoke ata hoon... tab tak mujhe miss mat karna..." And he went away leaving Sharon heated up with the blush... but still she shouted back at swayam's disappearing figure...

"mai tujhe miss nahi karti hoon ...okay????"

"yes princess..." He shouted from the room and Sharon blushed and bit her lips  because sharon's mom and choti ma also heard him say princess...

After dinner Sharon barged into their room and kept her hands on her hips...

"kya tha wo...!!"

Swayam was working on a project of his father's company ...he looked up from the laptop...

"kya???" he asked like an innocent kid...

"tune kamre se chilla ke mujhe wo kyun bola???" she glared...

"kya bola meine...???" He tried to stop laughing...

"princess..." She gritted her teeth...

"haa simple kyunki tu hai ek princess..." he put the laptop down on the bed and got up... " meri princess.."

Sharon went speechless...she tried to divert the topic...

"waise rey ka call aya...bol raha tha ki aj tune academy mein awesum performance diya wo bhi b boying mein..."

"haa...wo kar lia ek din...waise to roj hi mai freestyle sikhata hoon..."

"haa usme to tu best hai..." Sharon smiled at him...

Swayam looked at her intensely and sharon's smile vanished and she gulped becoming visibly nervous... Swayam started coming closer to her and Sharon started to move back and suddenly found her back bumping to the wall...she was pinned between the wall and swayam... She was totally startled and looked at swayam who was moving his face closer to her...

Sharon closed her eyes tightly anticipating what was inevitable...after a good couple of seconds she opened her eyes to see swayam staring at her with a smirk and then touched her forehead with the back of his palm...

"tujhe bukhaar to nahi hai na??? tareef kar rahi hai..that too mine..." He shrugged away to arrange the pillows while Sharon stood there breathing heavily trying to come back on earth after the heavenly proximity...

Swayam went and laid down on the bed

"chal aaja...so jaate hai...late ho gaya hai..." Swayam said hugging his pillow... Sharon composed herself and went towards the bed... swayam was looking at her smiling while she was nervously pouring water into the glass from the jug... Swayam smiled even more seeing her nervous... Sharon started coughing seeing swayam smirk...

Swayam immediately sat up n moved towards her rubbing her back...

"har chiz mein harbari hai tujhe..." Sharon was looking at him n was coughing... after sometime she calmed down... swayam immediately made her drink some more water...

"are you fine???" he asked softly...

She nodded looking at his intense eyes..she couldn't find any words coz of his intensity..she couldn't believe life can change so much in few hours... she was seeing love instead of friendship in his eyes...

Swayam stood up and made Sharon lie down and covered her with the duvet and then lied next to her...

"do you mind???" he said putting his hands on her waist hugging her close...

Sharon was smiling inside as she heard him ask for permission just for her comfort... she forgot all her worries...all her determination to trouble swayam was long forgotten... there were no logic in the air..there was only submission... Sharon didn't say anything and pulled herself closer to him , closing her eyes , cooing into his arms... Swayam has always understood her silence... he knew what it meant... he didn't need Sharon to speak her feelings out... He could feel her feelings inside him... He hugged her tight closing his eyes drifting into a world of sleep... Where he was painting a new dream... a world with his Sharon...

ANOTHER SHOCK COMING SOON...MAY BE NEXT CHAPTER...

HOPE U GUYS LEAVE UR LIKES , COMMENTS N CRITICISM...

LOVE ANI