Arjun-Draupadi Kalyug FF- Shubh Punah Milan-Part 35(2/11)

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

Yagya, I guess you had a memory loss. Chalo let me remind. This is the FF you write. UPDATE!!😭

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
Straight from the heart Yagya!! Loved the update and the song too...looks like it from a teleserial?

Why is Arjun always so clueless and so confused.? It is very frustrating. He had no idea why his "love" was staying aloof until Subhi told him!! Hoping Subhi's talk will have some effect. Waiting for your diwali dhamaka 😊

Thanks a lot, Mamta!! It is from a serial which is one of my fav, Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon? The serial reminds me so much of ArDi!! Arjun's love is actually a bit distorted as he had not completed the path of self-realization but Yagya being the fire princess, already had done it!! Subhi's talk wil have it's effect!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..strawberry_Pm
loved ittt

Thanks a lot, dearie!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: Mala_TM
Sorry for the late comment jiji..I won't be able to comment regularly anymore as my school started 😒
Coming to this update..
IT IS BEAUTIFUL jiji!!! I loved it a lot!!! The first part was so beautifully written..I definitely can see that you have poured out ur heart!!
The song was so apt!! ( I googled the translation 😉 )
It was very emotional too..
Finally Paarth knows why Yagya is upset..
Paarth feeling bad after having the flashes of the past with subhadra
Waiting for the next update!!!

It's okay, meri priye!!! Thanks a ton!! I love this song and sing so many times!!! Emotional, angst and love, everything is visible in the song!!! Hats off to the lyricist!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: Texie
It was. An emotional one yagya di the way they remember each other was so good and poor Subhie she is still helping her jeeji and arya and parth mistakenly told what he should not have
A fantastic one

Thanks a lot, Sam!!! I myself was in tears while writing this!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: Urmila11
Oho 😭 ab kya hoga Jiji 😭 both you & devrani Subhi love him a lot, how can he hurt any of you 😭 my poor devarji!!
This update truly shows your emotions Jiji 😊 I loved the part where you described their eternal journey 👏 nothing can separate these two souls, they will be re-united 😊
Update soon!

Thanks a lot, Devika!!! Eternal journey of separation and re-unison of these souls cannot be describes, dear!! Shabdhopari hai!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes
Yagya, I guess you had a memory loss. Chalo let me remind. This is the FF you write. UPDATE!!😭

Aisa kuch nahi hai, Angela!! Bas was busy in Dhanteras ki Puja!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#878

Part 29:

The question surely had no easy answer. Subhi immediately got up and turned her back to Arjun while answering to his question, as she knew that task would prove to be impossible if she had to answer to it while looking in to his eyes,

" No Paarth! I don't want this to happen as I know both of you are made for each other but the destiny always played with you to a game of eternal separation and re-unison. But this birth of ours will reverse all of that to make both of you, one, till the end of the time. In our previous birth, I was born for the birth of Abhimanyu and for one of the reasons of this birth but this time I am born to unite these eternal soul mates, whose unison will always be cherished!" As she completed her answer, the tears made their way out of those lotus eyes. Arjun was shocked to know that she knew about their past and still was trying to unite him and Yagya. Deep in thoughts, he felt Subhi as the sister of his Madhav in all sense, for both never thought of themselves when the question was about the social welfare. Subhi was about to leave Arjun in his storm of thoughts when she felt a tug at her hand, which made her turn around to look for the reason of this act. Arjun spoke in a grave voice as the flashes of their married life, made it difficult for him,

" Subhi, you know the past and you are still doing it! Why, Subhi?"

" Because, jiji has known enough of it, Arjun! In our previous life, I took jiji's place in your life and this is the time to show my gratitude to her! Go to her and give her, her rightful place, Arya!" as she completed the sentence, she distanced herself from him and covered her mouth with shock as she realized that she addressed him as 'Arya'. Arjun knew that however she may sacrifice but the past will keep haunting her and she has not committed any mistake here. He immediately took her in to his embrace to calm her raging mind while she lost herself. With no one in the canteen to witness it, the shallow wind and the elegantly shining Sun lost themselves in the soothing memories of their life. Subhi composed herself in a little while and spoke with a voice of shattered heart,

" Arjun, I have one last request from you, will you fulfill it?"

Arjun pulled himself out of the embrace and spoke while calming himself,

" Anything, Subhi! Just name it!"

" Arjun, please name the sign of your's and jiji's love which will come soon in to this world as ' Shrutkarma' as it was Abhimanyu who got your love the most in our previous life and this time atleast let that innocent yet brave soul get its share of love from you!" she said while the disgusting incident of the deaths of their children came flashing in to her mind.

" As you wish, Subhi!" he replied.

" Now go , Arjun! And pacify jiji for she has undergone a lot till now and only your love can counter the injustice she had faced and to take your eternal love story to a new level"

" Thanks a lot, Subhi!! The sacrifice you made today is incomparable and i will remain thankful to this forever!" and left from there as he knew the situation was extremely vulnerable and he didn't want to let out the emotional turbulence out in front of Subhi, which would make her more tormented.

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