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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Oh my! Vish. .. This is awesome . You are the mystery queen. James Patterson, Mary Higgins Clark and Frederick Forsyth all rolled into one. I was biting my nails in tension throughout the update and you left us in cliffhanger. How do you always know where to stop? Truly brilliant my dear! You are too good.

Raghav wanting to tell Kamala about Kalpi 's innocence. But Pakya stopped him as Raghav doesn't have any clues yet and she won't believe him. Doesn't he know that even if it's thousand against Pakhi, Kamala will support Pakhi only. Like Kalpi, even I think she never loved Kalpi. Vithal overheard Raghav - Pakya conversation and is guilt ridden now. Though he has loved her , he never supported Kalpi and believed what others said. He should have believed in her. So I don't think Kalpi should forgive them but I know how much she misses her parents, especially dad. So maybe for her, you can make her forgive them. But not before they suffer little.

Sammy is at last about to find Sheetal , hopefully. Raghav is confused seeing Kalpi at the Kapoors house. Will he seek answers? Loved how Kalpi made Prem come out of his trauma on seeing his dad's death. Also how she comforted Maria and then Prem -Maria scene too. All three have formed a good bond between them. Did this Pakhi had to butt in now? I think she's here to ask Prem for money to give to Sheetal. Hopefully she hasn't seen Kalpi 's phone or car . But Kalpi needs to be back to her vicious self to get back at Pakhi.

Kudos to you for your excellent writing 👏 . Keep up the good job dear. 🤗, my special only for you!


M flattered with so many adjactives.. i do not know what to reply now. Kiara...🤗 my best reader. Chane k ped pe mat chadao yar!!

Vitthal has to suffer a bit coz Kalpi expected him to trust her... Kalpi never expected her ayi to trust her over Pakhi but Vitthal disappointed her... She will take some time to forgive him n that will be his biggest punishment.

Let's see whether Sammy succeeds in finding Sheetal or not...

Raghav will deffo seek answers... He is close to know the truth.

U r so correct about Pakhi.. she is there for money.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vasishna

Heyyllooo senior..😉😛

Reallyyy wenever I read this ff.. I feel lyk I'm reading sum suspense full of story or CID epi lol😆
Its vryyy intrestnggg to read.. and pakya's reason to stop raghav was justified n I'm sumhw happy dat nw vittal has cum to know d truth abt kalpi.. I want to u to forgive vittal w/o punishing him much (if he s punished much wat ll be d diff btw her n enemies) bt don't leave kamla😡 n don't even forgive her its my sincere request!
I hope raghav won't MU kalpi dis tym wen things r getting well.. kalpi comfortng prem was good n emotional too.. and nw wat s pakhi's plan ya wat s she upto nw.. curious to know wat happens next..


Hi Vaishu... CID is my fav show so i keep introducing it's episode in the story,😆

He won;t be punished by Kalpi but destiny will punish them. Kamla will pay for her sins. Let me work on that.

Raghav has to know the truth about Kalpi... Before starting fresh they need to know the truth about each other.

Thank u for liking it.

Originally posted by: balarangarajann

U had given us a very beautiful update after a good break!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good in ur FF,Pakhya is smart and sensible and he is very affectionate towards Kalpi.And wants to support and prove the innocence of Kalpi.

Again this Vitthal is Kamla's ghulam .Good he had overheard Pakhya's and raghav's convo and realised his mistake.But couldn't wait to share it with Kamla thus proving that he will be Kamla's kathputhi rather than his Rajkumari's father.

And hats off to the soon to be detective Sammy.How is the psycho related to Sheetal??.

U have beautifully narrated the emotions of the trio :Prem - Maria -Kalpi.

Let the psycho leave her brain at home and not notice either Kalpi or Kalpi's car


Thank u dear... Pakya is an intelligent guy here unlike the show.

Vitthal trusts Kamla so much that he trusted her blindly and find fault in Kalpi... it's his love yr. The way our Rags love Kalpi.

Pakhi-Sheetal is a mystery... can't comment on that.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Superb update

Loved pakya n raghav convo...he knows his parents well
I actually wanted sum punishment for vitthal as he culd not trust his own blood but also feeling bad for him at d same tim so let kalpi forgive him
Pakhi got threatning call n guess its sumthng related to khushi...hope Sammy finds mystery lady soon
Loved premna n maria scene
Wonder wat has pkhi planned nw as kapi left her phone in her room n pakhi must have chkd it n got sum clues abt kalpi knowing d truth or she simply came to ask for money from prem ...vish u left us on cliff hanger...pls update soon


Thanks Rani.. m glad u liked it. Kalpi will forgive Vitthal but she will need some time to do so.

I am updating soon... can't reply on rest of the comment as it will destroy the suspense. Hope u understand.😳

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

hey di...suprb update 👏 👏 👏 thnx 4 pm di... Luvd pakya nd rags hug...it ws tuchng d way kalpi handld prem...wt a frnd di aapne poll kiya tha meine apna vote diya bt phir bt cumnt bhi ker deti hun i thnk kalpi shuld 4giv vitthal bt she shuld'nt 4giv that kamla the damla...i hate dat witch 😡 😡plz di update as soon as posibl...last time apne aftr 10 days update kiya...bt plz iss bar jaldi plz...plz...plz...plzzz...



Update di...update


Thank u dear... M glad u liked it n no need to thank me for pm. it's my pleasure.
I agree... Kalpi will forgive Vitthal but not Kamla.

just for the promise I made u about update, i am awake till 1.15 AM and writing. updating in a while.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi guys... m back with another update... Let me tell u first that this update is not as rocking as I wanted it to be... I had so many plans for it but can't execute them as had to help mom in something. Neways in this update... nothing much happened... but I assure u that next update will have rocking parts like Sammy finding Sheetal and some Kalpi-Vitthal confrontation... May be a twist.

Sorry for the mistakes but i confess... i am too lazy to Proof read the updates. So please bear with my mistakes as i know I make many while writing.

@Somi or bricka.tiwari : Special update for u... Just coz I made a promise that I will give u an update today... i am awake till 1.30 AM.

"Prem Bhaiya..." Pakhi cried once again.

Kalpi gets shocked on recognizing her voice... "Oh no... she can't see me and Maria here and what id she had noticed my car while entering??" She said loudly.

PRem and Maria too gets tensed on hearing this... Prem suggests them to stay in the room without making any noise and he will try to handle Pakhi... Pakhi once again yelled while climbing the stairs... "Prem bhaiya are u there??"

Prem comes out of the room and stops her from moving further... He drags her to the hall once again without letting her realize that he is actually taking her away from the room..

"Pookhi... What happened dear?? Why r u looking so tensed." Asked Prem worriedly.

"Bhaiya.. I actually need some money. Actually u know right now Raghav is facing some economical problem and I too don't have any balance in my account so... Hope u understand" Pakhi said hesitantly.

"Sure baby... how much money u want?" Prem asked casually while thinking that he need to make Pakhi leave the place as soon as possible..

"1 lakh" Pakhi said while praying that he doesn't ask reason for it but her prayers got unheard and Prem gets worried on hearing such a big amount..

"That is now Pakhi upto.. why she wants such a big amount?? I can't give her money without knowing the reason" Prem said in his mind. "I do not have that much cash in the home...Give me sometime... max by evening." He said loudly.

"No issues bhaiya... But please make sure that u do not tell anyone about this... Actually Raghav n Gauri mom will not like me talking help from u." Pakhi said innocently.

"I understand... but anything serious why u need such big amount??" He asked seriously.. He was genuinely concern about her... Though he wants her to get punish for her deeds but she is still her baby sister and he doesn't want her to be alone in some trouble.

"No bhaiya... Wo actually.. Khushi... ya Khushi.. it's something related to her school..." Pakhi lied.

Prem accepts her argument without any argument though he understood that she is lying but this time his priority was to make her leave asap.

"Ohh Crap... m late for the office... I think I should leave." Prem said while looking at his watch.

"Ya bhai... I think I should leave too as I have some work. " Pakhi said.Prem sighs relief... He tells Pakhi to leave as he needs to collect something from the room and will leave after that. Pakhi nods and leaves. Prem rushes towards the room to look for Kalpi and Maria.. They thank god for saving them.

Pakhi comes out of the home happily thinking that now she will be able to pay money to Sheetal and her secret will remain secret forever.

"But what If she blackmails me again?? I need to do something to remove this threat. I should kill her." She thought. Her gaze falls on the car standing in the parking area... She is surprised to see that it is similar to Kalpi's... he gets a closer look and realizes it's Kalpi's car only...

"What is Kalpi doing here?? Is she planning something against us??Is she using bhaiya against me?? What if she tells everything to bhaiya that happened 5 years ago... but why m I fearing?? She doesn't know that it was me behind all this... not in her dreams she can imagine that I did it. But what if manages to convince bhaiya and he helps her in finding the real culprit... I need to find the truth." Pakhi thought. She goes back to rom yelling Prem's name in angry mode. Prem, Maria and Kalpi gets scared on hearing her voice again.

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Raghav who was working in KJ industry was surprised to see Amar behaving politely with him.. he wonders why is he not insulting him again... "Kalpi might have instructed him not to do so.." he thought. He remembers the moment when he saw Kalpi entering Kapoor's mansion.

"M I thinking too much?? Kalpi might have gone there for some business work... After all she is a partner in my company... I mean Singhania enterprises and Prem is it's CEO. But why was she so tensed?? Was Sammy correct?? Did she deceive me?? I should find out the truth." Raghav said and leaves the place hurriedly... Amar notices him going in anger and calls Kalpi but to his surprise she doesn't receive. He wonders whether to follow Raghav or not but decides not to as Kalpi has told him to respect Raghav from now onwards and he can't hurt her.

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Raghav is sitting in his room with a visiting card in his hand.. The visiting card is of the same guest house where Sammy had stayed on the auction day... He has his mobile in the hand and was trying o dial the number but his hands were trembling in the fear... The thought of Kalpi deceiving him and destroying him was too much for him to digest... He was just a phone call away from the truth and he wonders whether he really wants to know the truth or want to live in a false hope that Kalpi can't destroy him... Finally he gathers to courage to call up the person.

"Hello... Akash Patel speaking. I want to book ur guesthouse. Is it available on weekend?" Faked Raghav.

"Yes sir it is." Came the reply from other end.

"Good... It is going to be a private party so just want to know whether u have network jammers installed." His voice trembled a bit while asking the question... All this time he was hoping the reply to come in Kalpi's favor.

"Yes sir... we have network jammers installed." Said the man. Raghav feels happy on hearing this.. he heaved relief but her happiness was short lived. "But sir we activate them only on special requests. So if u want us to activate them u need to tell us while booking." The man continued.

Raghav dropped the mobile on floor and call got disconnected... Though he was prepared for a negative answer but still it came as shock to him. He was not ready to believe his ears and still in denial mode...

"May be someone else requested him to install the jammers that day and coincidentally Sammy reached there." He showed optimism.

He picks his cell once again and remembers Sammy's words regarding Kalpi bribing Mr. Mehta. He find out Deepak's number from his office and dials it.

"Hello Deepak... this is Amar this side... Kalpana madam's employee." Said Raghav in a fake voice.

"Ohh yes sir... now what u want??" Asked Deepak.

"Madam had got to know that u revealed her secret to Sammy and Raghav. Is it true?? Did u told them Kalpana madam bribed Mr. Mehta to take the project" He asked.

"Sir actually... Do not tell anyone but Kalpana madam told me to do so. N I just followed her order." Deepak said in a low tone.

"What?" Raghav asked in confusion n his original voice..

"What happened to ur voice sir" asked Deepak.

"Nothing... I was just shocked that why madam did this" said Raghav in fake voice.

"God knows.. I just followed her instructions... she told me to tell Sammy sir the truth n I did... Then she told me renege on my words in front of Raghav sir n I did... I do not know what she wanted but what I saw I understood that it was her plan to break Raghav ans Dammy sir's friendship." Deepak said in a disgusting manner.

Raghav's anger flared on hearing this... now there was not doubt that it was Kalpi who planned to destroy him and even tried to snatch his best buddy from her. He manages to keep the stern voice on call and ends it. After ending the call he sits down on the bed lifelessly... The truth was beyond his imagination and he was having hard time to accept it. He throws away the phone in anger and runs towards the locked room. To his surprise it was open but he was too shocked to react on such small issues... He enters the room n bolts it from inside and start throwing all the Kalpana's pics on the floor.. he pushes the table and creates the mess all around him and cries loudly... In anger he pushes the flower pot as well but holds it before it can break and keeps it back in the corner...

"Why the hell u did this to me?? Why u betrayed me?? I love u like crazy and u.. u came back after 5 years to break me??" He shouted while seeing her pic which was lying on the floor. He imagines Kalpi standing near the window ans smiling sarcastically at him.

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Pakhi rushes inside the room in anger... She yells one more time in anger.. "Bhaiya.. where r u??" Prem comes out hurriedly after telling Maria and Kalpi to go in the washroom as Pakhi is looking angry and she might come upstairs.

"What happened?? Why r u so angry?"

"I just saw Kalpi's car outside... what is it doing there??"

"Ohh that car... I brought it. Actually, u know I and Kalpi work in same office... I wanted to come home so she offered me her car." Prem managed to find a quick answer but still stammered while answering.

"And why u needed her car?? Where is ur car then??" Pakhi asked once again.

"At home only... u dint see my car outside... Actually yesterday night I had party so I stayed at my friend's place and told driver to take car back to the home... Coz of some urgent meeting I went office directly... my friend dropped me.. N while returning I borrowed Kalpi's car. But now I am going office and give it back to Kalpi."

Pakhi nods as if agreeing to his statement but she wasn't fully convinced... To avoid any further discussion she leaves the building once again but this time she stops her car at a distance from Kapoor's house and waits for Prem to come out... She wants to make sure that Prem is not lying.

Prem comes in the room and tells Kalpi to leave as soon as possible. Kalpi takes her car keys and red purse and leaves the home.

Pakhi notices the car coming out of the home and takes out her binoculars which she always keeps in her dashboard to check the driver.

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Vish
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmm...as always ending in a big twist! This time Pakhi may have upper hand and even Raghav is angry with her. Hope Kalpi doesn't lose the fight, or should I say the big fight. or Pakhi doesn't know the real reason behind Kalpi being there. n why do I feel after sometime Raghav will understand Kalpi's pain even better; understand what Kalpi must have felt on thinking that Raghav betrayed her! Though not now, but later on. Sorry for short comment dear this time. 😭 but kind of sleepy brain I have right now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh no! Oh no! Oh no! Vish I really dont like this!!!
Not at all!! Please please let Paakhi not see Kalpi and maria!!! How can Kalpi be so foolish!!! And Raghav???? Why is he getting angry??? Oh where is sammy??? Please vish no more misunderstandings dear!!!! Kalpi has gone trhough a lot a lot alot!!!! I dont want that chudail to win!!! Let bappa make someone throw dirt on her face and run!!!! Please!!!!

Vish I hope your next update has pakhi getting disturbed by a call or something!! It better have that because both Kalpi n maria have suffered a lot!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I really hope Kalpi does not get caught by Paakhi because all their plans will be destroyed, hope when Prem give the money to Paakhi the put a tracker in the bag, looking forward to Raghav confrontation with Kalpi
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Posted: 10 years ago
subah subah 1 mug hot super strong coffee wth such a suprb update maza aa gaya... Din ban gaya... 😊

nd thnx di...4 makng dis spcl update super spcl 4 me...spcl muaaahhh 4 u di...nd a big fat huggie also...sory di coz of me u spoild ur nyt sorry...but ur my elder sis na to choti sis k liye itna to banta hai...ye mera hak hai mera janm sidh adhikar hai... 😳


nd u still remember my official name di wow...i thought aap bhul gaye hoge...thnx...well nxt time aapko jo man aaye ,jiss bhi naam se aap bulana chaho aap bula skte ho...saumya or bricka or somi kuch bhi...haan bricka naam jaldi kissi ka hota nahi hai na dats why bricka naam se if pe activ hun...bt thnx 4 remembrng my name...

Nd yes update was fab...i feel pity 4 rags...bechara...plz jaldi uss damli ko punish kero...aur uss dumla ko bhi i hate both of dem...

U kno di i luv ur each nd every ff...but dis 1 is my fav...

I m big fan of u, chahat di nd mariee di...u all r dam gud writr...i luv priya di's ff also nd sum more...thnx 4 update di..u kno aap sab k ff se hi to i can live ragna/ashna again dats why dis crzy ashna fan ne apko tang kiya sorry...
Nd di 1nce more thnx nd sorry...
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Posted: 10 years ago
i thnk its prem wo is drvng kalpi's car...i dont thnk kalpi is such a folish 2 make such a big mistak...nd rags shuld understand kalpi's pain...i wish jald se jald pakhi ka game end ho...nd i wish khushi rakhi ki beti na ho...i dont kno why but i thnk khushi is sheetal's daughtr...nd sheetal issi liye pakhi ko blackmail ker rehi hai...coz i thnk sirf kisi ko abortion k liye doc k pas le jane k liye koi itna blackmail nahi kerta hai...its my pov di...u kno khura fati dimag...jitna mera khurafati dimag ashna mei lagta hai utna prdhi mei lage to mei colleg top kerun...ye meri mumma khti hai...koi nahi...mei aur mera dimag aksar ye bate kerte hai ki ashna hote to ye ho ashna hote to wo hota...nd dat pakhi she is plng 2 kill sheetal witch sory witch bhi usse achi hoti hai...jaldi se suspencc hatao di cant intezar kerofie...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really good update hope that cheating pakhi get caught soon

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