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Posted: 10 years ago
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PERSIFLAGE
Last night was a blur to her but as far as she could recollect, she knew one thing for certain,she had troubled Manik enough to piss him off,so her mission of the day was the same as always...
AVOID.MONSTER.MANIK...period.
but life is of course full of ironies,the 1st person she encountered was none other the than the Monster himself
*speak of the devil and the devil's here* she muttered under her breath much to Manik's amusement.

"awww...'.Nandu',missed me?"

he smirked cheekily standing dangerously close to her,his posture adjusted to match her height.
Her head was still spinning from last night's hangover,she so didn't need this early in the morning,so instead of plunging into yet another argument with her beloved enemy,she simply chose to speak 2 words which stopped Manik,right at his track

"Thank you"

she said meaningfully remembering how he'd patiently handled her gibberish babbles yesterday

"what did you just say,I didn't hear it properly"

he was definitely enjoying her awkwardness and nervousness around him.

"THANK YOU...for ...being there for me yesterday and...making sure I didn't do anything stupid"

his grin widened,and she knew she was getting in trouble, there was no way to get out,she was trapped.

"what makes you think you didn't do anything stupid ,you kept laughing like a fool, you almost...never mind"

he stopped abruptly ,realizing he was making her uncomfortable

"I am sorry ,for spilling lemonade on you and calling you...a fool"

she stifled a laugh and at the same time tried to sound as sincere as possible suddenly remembering the day's event.He didn't flinch or feel disgusted ,instead he had a mischievous smile on his face and at that very moment something came flashing back like a lightening bolt to her ,and she unfortunately knew the reason behind that smirk

"nooo"

she groaned inwardly as he came dangerously close to her...

"you know ,there's an unfinished business we need to deal with,you were too wasted yesterday so ...I didn't comply but since you were so adamant to correct your wrong why don't you do it today? Now that you are fully conscious"

he was so close to her at the moment that she could feel his hot breath over her shoulders..

"why do memories come in bits and pieces and that too at all the wrong times"

she thought to herself and simply closed her eyes,taking a step back,she knew he had diminished the gap even before opening her eyes
*like she'd thought she was trapped today*
she kept moving back till her back hit the wall...

"this is it"

she didn't know whether she was scared or nervous of what was coming but Manik didn't give her time to react and recoil...his lips crashed into hers and before she knew it she was responding back with the same intensity...
Even this was WAR for them,more than anything
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A/N : so this was my 1st OS on this forums, this one's dedicated to my Partner (-ScaredAngel-)coz I ate her head a lot while writing this OS.
do leave your valuable comments .criticism is welcome.
love
Rads😃



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Posted: 10 years ago
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First -I loved the title. Very apt and I learnt a new word !
Very cute OS. Ahem awkward morning afters are always so much fun.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Firebolt

First -I loved the title. Very apt and I learnt a new word !

Very cute OS. Ahem awkward morning afters are always so much fun.


I m glad u liked it dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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*reserved *
Rads love u for this!!🤣
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Unres:
Writing a comment on anyone's work after ages... Donno how I became so busy..but now that I'm finally free...n u finally wrote something... Your no1 fan is here to comment!!🤣
I can be a number of peoples fans but I'm not everyone's partner...so dat way this is kinda special to me..that ur writing again...after all the drama...all the unshed tears over what to write...here goes something that is so ur style...short piece of writing..!!
Although u always criticise ur work as if its no good...I sometimes wonder what it is that makes u so unsure ...this is such a beautiful piece of writing n thanku for dedicating it to me..!! Millions words can't tell u how perfectly u hv depicted out manik and Nandini here... The kiss would hv happened if it was a foreign shows between the duo defo...as it was so apt...!!
The situation calls for it... The way you put in ur emotions..n creatively imagined the aftermath of the drunk wpisode was definitely beautiful...!!
Flawless...for a person who thinks of demself as a silly writer in ur words!!🤣
Love you rads!! N keep writing...one day who knows I'll be reading ur published book..!! 🤣🤣
Regards
Safrena
Edited by -ScaredAngel- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely os. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww this ws super cute...thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it. "Think of the devil and devil is here." and the reaction of manik when nandu has told him this.Its really very good.
Edited by apardh_ba - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Radzz😲🤗
Wat an entry😎
good to c u here😊
hope u remember me😛
d os was damn awesomeee❤️
and loveedd d title too
amazingly written⭐️
keep writing moreee🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u dear I m glad u liked it😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I m glad u liked it😃

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