Tamanaa ' nigah e yaar ki ' || check note at page 139 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
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people update is typed... but it is with fariya and she is down with fever
she will post as soon as she is back 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. .maan is already married. .& Geet is his 2nd wife..oh..wht will happen next. .

maan srays with 1st wife.. wo tih thik hai..but geef..fas na jaaye inake beech mein

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice prologue
part one nice starting n emotionally update its different story
waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for your response please comment n like
Well every one know my english so don't mind n avoid grammar mistake
Advance sorry

Part 2


Annie took Geet to Maan's room both are silent

They reached the room both came inside n Geet starting to observe her room Geet saw this n smirk

Annie: checking out room you wouldn't have seen this type of room in your whole life

She mocked at her

Geet: hmmm mein ne kabhi aise room nahi dekha bahut khubsoorat hai

She agreed

Annie stared her n left to her room coz she also didn't want this marriage happen

Geet saw her going did not say any-thing she came close to bed n sat n thinking what to do will wait for Maan or change
Geet st: yeh aaye nahi... ammi ne mana kiya tha change nahi karna unkey aane say pehley toh abb wait karr

She settle herself on bed and put her head on bed post close her eyes for relax it was hectic day
Mariam Raza Singh Khurana (Maan's mom) in her room taking with her devrani

Mariam: sab kuchh achhey say hogaya... hum bhut khush hai ab kuchh hi dino ki bat hai humara
ghar bhi khushiyoo say bhar jai ga

Sultana: haan bhabhi... aap sahi keh rahi hai... humey aur kya chahiye Maan nai shadi kar li yehi sab say bari bath hai aur Horam ne bhi koi mushkil nahi khadi ki

But she stops in mid to see Mariam face stern

Mariam: Sultana...!!! Aaj khushi ka din hai hum use barbad nahi karna chatey aur aap jaiye aram kijeye raat hogye hai

Sultana: ji bhabhi making face she left

Mariam: bus humari sari dua qabul ho jaye aur kuchh nai chahiye humey
She prayed


Time 4:30 am
Geet opened her eyes to see time and then see here there not finding Maan she sighed her neck is pain coz she sleep in sitting position with heavy attire


Geet: fajar ka waqt hone wala hai mein kaprey badal leti hoon namaz k liye

She think n took her dress from suitcase went to washroom for change (namaz time fajar ki uski English mujko nahi pata par it perform before sun rise)
Here Maan also get up n saw Horam is sleeping hugging him he cares her face kiss her forehead get up went to washroom but then he remember that his clothes are in his room he close his eyes think now what to do he didn't want to face her not now what will he answer
Maan st : Maan kabhi na kabhi toh tujhe uss se bath karni hogi kab tak in sab say bhagey ga yeh mat bhool ke tunai shadi ki hai ab woh bhi teri hi zimmedari hai aur waise bhi abhi woh so rahi hogi chup chap apne room main ja cloth le karr aaja bus hmmm
He went to his room but some-one saw him coming out from Horam room in this time

Sultana: Maan is waqt Horam k room say bahar aa rha hai iska matlab kal woh Geet k sath nahi tha yeh bath humai bahbhi ko batnai hogi yeh galat hai
Here Geet came out after ready she took pray met n start preforming namaz

Maan open room door slowly didn't want to disturb her but he get shock to site which is mesmerize Geet performing namaz he stand at door n stare her something made him to look her first time he saw girl perform namaz Horam didn't perform fajar namaz baaki pad leti hai only his mother n chachi is one in the house who pray all sleep in this timing

His trance broke n
What the hell he think how can i lost in her Maan toh pagal hogaya hai ready ho aur ja yeha say iskey pray khatam hone say pehley he move to washroom

Geet in pray so did not guess about Maan (reader it happen some-time when u pray u lost in that forget your surrounding)

Geet finished her pray get up folding pray met keep it back n came to dressing table remove her dupatta throw on bed n combing her hair

Maan came out from washroom both saw each other n get shock

Geet turn and

Ahhh she shout

Maan run to her and close her mouth with his hand his one hand is on mouth one is on waist

Geet move trying to came out from grip

Maan: kya hua chilai kyu????

He shout at her thank himself in mind coz his room is sound prof his idea

Geet: whwhwhw

Maan: kya hua... bolo bhi ab

He said in anger don't know what he did which made her shout

Geet eyeing him n show his hand which is on her moth not let her to say

Maan: ohhh par dobara mat chilna samjhi

Geet nodded her head remove his hand from her mouth

Geet took long breathe n push her run to get her dupatta wear it properly n glaring Maan (hey me actually in my house we are not allowed to go in front of any men including bro n papa with-out dupatta so i write Geet like this only that's why she react)

Maan: what

Geet: aap ko sahram nahi aati...??? Aise kisi bhi ladki k room mein aa gaye... jaiye yaha se... dekhiye kisi ne aap ko yaha dekha toh pata nahi humare bare mein kiya sochey ga... jaiye yaha se

Maan: what...! Tum kya bol rahi ho...?? Aur tumhara room

Geet: dekhieye jaiye yeha se... koi aa jayega...
She was worried for her repo... a man whom she doesn't know came to her room early morning what if her husband came...????

Maan: tum kya bol rahi ho muje samjh nahi aaraha hai

Geet: dekhiye agar aap 2 minute mein nahi gaye toh hum zor say chilaengye aur humare husband ko bulaengye phir wahi ap ko yaha say behar nikal dengey samjhe

Maan: what...!!! Tumhe pata hai mein kon hu...???

He said coming close to her

Geet breathe stuck to see him coming close

She move back-ward

N stuck between Maan n wall

Maan: Geet hayat khan ap ka nikha Maan Singh Khurana say kal hua hai... Maan Singh Khurana he said point to himself

Geet stare him n register his word...

Maan she said... Pointing finger to him

Maan nodded his head in yes

Geet eyes popped out... she put both hand in mouth like what she did

Maan move n give her space she took long breathe n compose her self Maan saw her


Geet: sorry sorry sorry... Humne aapki tasveer nahi dekhi thi... aur kal raat aap aaye bhi nahi... Humey sachi nahi pata k aap woh hai humai maaf kardije

Now scenario change Maan moving back n Geet forward

Maan: ok ok

He stop her


She stop jhali kya karti hai pic nahi dekhi thi to puchh leti danda lekar shuru hogayi... Geet tu duniya ki pehli dulhan hogi jo apne husband say aise mill rahi hai chi...
She talking to her self


Maan stare her tried to understand what she is doing why she not speaking

Maan st: tu ne kiss ladki se shadi ki yeh jise yeh nahi pata k you are her husband wow..!!!
Waise Maan galti teri hai... his heart say tu kal raat uske pas nahi tha jo tuney kiya woh bhi galt tha

Now he felt guilty

NOTE
part 2 by Fariya...
Posted and Proof-read by Pooja
do leave ur feedbacks plz...😊

IMP: still not able decide on the title... and Fariya is down with fever... we will work on it as soon as she is back... get well soon dear😊

ps: wishing u all a very happy Diwali in advance... u may get another part soon as this one is not letting Fariya rest in peace she's typing this in super speed😆
Edited by mirror1521 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank god you save it
sorry reader for late i am realy down
fevr hate this
not able to type more


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Posted: 10 years ago
chalo...atleast they..met...and.meeting wasn't that..emotional!!!
lol..geet dint even..recognize maan..good..going geet...!!
now

maan.is feeling guilty..waiting for..the next part...!!
and..fairya take..care sweetheart ..get well
soon..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
poor geet waited for maan and slept. and here maan kamre mein aakar geet ko dekhkar shock laga as horam never used to do early morning prayer. and kuch pal keliye wo geet mein khogaye hai. last scenes was very funny about geet not knowing who maan is and maan khkud apne aap ko introduce karna pada ki he is her husband
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh god geet is so naive, hope maan uske saath rahe or usse bachaye uske mean family members se...
Hehe.. Geet ne maan ko apne hi room se bahr jane ko bol diya... Loved the way maan said that the person she got married is no other than himself..lol...
Nice part dear... Waiting for more...😃

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