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Rimi Roy

@AsNoone

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Sadhanamomo
Awesome update
Loved the way you described Aparna and Neelabjo how they met and became close friends and Neel wanting to protect her "

Can you also describe the pull they have towards each other and you write beautifully update very soon.

Thank you di for your encouragement and I will try my best.

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Rimi Roy

@AsNoone

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Sanskrutiii
RESERVED

I have just finished till Valentines will edit after completing😊

Take your time...and thanks for give it a try.😊

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Rimi Roy

@AsNoone

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: ritzs200
beautifully written dear waiting for next update 😃

Kanya...aap humein dear kyun boll rahi ho??😭Aap mujhe bhul gayi ho.

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Rimi Roy

@AsNoone

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: MrToolConfuser
Comment. Main Edit Karunga.😆

Isko jaldi se unres krna...warna Vinash.

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Rimi Roy

@AsNoone

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Edited by mmroyalkaterick - 10 years ago

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Rimi Roy

@AsNoone

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Edited by mmroyalkaterick - 10 years ago

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Priyanshi_

@Priyanshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Beaauutiful update Di.
Maine to pehle hi kaha tha ki you're an expert in writing!
Thoroughly enjoyed my reading.
Very well described the relationship which neel and aparna share..
Waiting for your next update! 😊

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Rimi Roy

@AsNoone

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Priyanshi_
Beaauutiful update Di.
Maine to pehle hi kaha tha ki you're an expert in writing!
Thoroughly enjoyed my reading.
Very well described the relationship which neel and aparna share..
Waiting for your next update! 😊

Thanks Very much...I will hopefully update it tomorrow.😊
And thanks to hear praising of me from you.😛😛😛Guess I am missing this.😆

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Finally I finished it😃

Its beautiful dear⭐️

You used correct set of words totally made me flow with it👏

Great job absolutely Well done⭐️

Sorry some prob with the edit button so didn't edit previous comment😔

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Rimi Roy

@AsNoone

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Sanskrutiii
Finally I finished it😃
Its beautiful dear⭐️
You used correct set of words totally made me flow with it👏
Great job absolutely Well done⭐️
Sorry some prob with the edit button so didn't edit previous comment😔

Thank you very much. 🤗Dear...your valuable opinion will be helped me in my near future to improve my writing skill.😳