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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

hey di i tryd 2 send u buddy rqust but my bad luck hua nahi... So if u don't mind nd ur intrstd den plz send me buddy rqust...avi bhi 4m samajhne ki kosish zari hai


No need to request that much.. i am always interested in making buddies n will pm u for sure,

Btw agr forum smjhne m dikkat aye toh u cn pm me anytime.

Welcome to the forum.🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Since you are back and commenting on other ffs I guess you have some free time. Don't you think we deserve an update? Vish, please yaar. Write na! 🤗 Ye lo... pehle de di my special!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Since you are back and commenting on other ffs I guess you have some free time. Don't you think we deserve an update? Vish, please yaar. Write na! 🤗 Ye lo... pehle de di my special!


Yaa kiara... U r going to get an update today. As I was free yesterday i started writing the next part of all my FFs. As I am at home in holidays so I may give u frequent updates for next few days.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shonali164

muje update chahiye😭



Sho baby... Mene tujhe kabhi mana kia kya?? U will get an update by eod. Aj cousin ka birthday h so uski preps m busy hu thoda sa else abi hi update kr deti.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover




Sho baby... Mene tujhe kabhi mana kia kya?? U will get an update by eod. Aj cousin ka birthday h so uski preps m busy hu thoda sa else abi hi update kr deti.


oh den enjoy darling i cn wait 4 tomarow 🤗 meri vishu ko me bdea enjoyment se dur ni rakh sakti❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all i am extremely sorry that I am not able to reply individually this time. But ur comments means a lot to me n I promise from now onwards I will try my best to reply to each of u...Though I am not replying to any of u but I have read all ur comments... So thank u so much for such generous comments and the encouragement...
Secondly... Those who still do not want Khushi as Ra..Khi daughter... Have patience guys!! Khushi's relation with them will reveal soon. Just have patience and faith in me.

And lastly, I have a poll for u.. i want to know how many of u want me to forgive Kalpi's parents for what they did to her. So please either comment or vote but lemme know what u guys want.

Once again thanks a lot and sorry for not commenting. But please showering ur love in form of comments so that i feel motivated and write a lot. Writing has really become my passion and thanks to u all for that.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for the mistakes as it's the unedited version... Whatever was coming to my mind i wrote it. if u find some major jhol in it than please notify me. Thanks for ur time. Hope u guys enjoy it.

Ragav who has witnessed the argument runs after Kamla to tell her the truth but before he can reach her she hires an auto and leaves the place... He grabs her keys from the home in the anger to follow her... Pakhi tries to ask him about the reason for leaving in hurry but he gives her and angry glare and leaves without saying a word...

"Kamla maa must have gone to chawl... I need to meet her n inform her about Kalpi's innocence and Pakhi's crime. I am sure she will trust me. After all it was her mistake.. Once again she failed to distinguish between her daughter and Pakhi." Raghav though while driving.

Finally he reach the chawl and sees Kamla entering the door.. he yells her name but she fails to hear.. he moves forward to catch her but a strong hand pushed him back and he fell on ground.. In anger he looks up and notices Pakya. Pakya forwards her hand to help Raghav... Raghav ignores it and gets up on his own.

"Look Pakya... I need to talk to Kamla maa urgently. Please do not fight this time."

Pakya holds his upper arm drags him to the corner so that no one can see him. Raghav was requesting him to let him meet Kamla maa once as he want to tell her the truth.

"Enough... Raghav!! At least listen to me first!! M not stopping u from proving Kalpi innocent but tell me what proof are u going to give ayi?? U will just say and tell her that Kalpi is innocent and she will agree. Do u really think it is so simple."

"It's not as simple but let me try... I know the real culprit is Pakhi.. She has created all this misunderstandings... once I will clear everything to Kamla maa than she will surely understand. I assure u Pakya that Kalpi will be free from the accusation and I will punish Pakhi for all her deeds. Let me try once."

"Ok.. Go I won't stop u but let me tell u that Ayi is not going to trust u over Pakhi... She will say that Kalpi has manipulated u and u r trying to get rid of Pakhi by accusing her. Do u think I do not know that how Pakhi is... Though I dint had the evidence but I have noticed the happiness on Pakhi's face when I informed her that Kalpi left the city. She was crying while hugging ayi but soon she gave a smirk which I noticed coz I was standing just behind her. Though not in my dreams I could think that Pakhi is the real culprit but That time only I understood that Pakhi is not a well wisher of Kalpi. I tried conveying to to ayi once but she dint trust me and even warned me. She thought it's Kalpi's influence that I am doubting Pakhi. Raghav ayi won't trust u... u need a solid proof to prove Kalpi's innocence."

"But what about Vitthal uncle?? He will trust me... Kalpi loves him a lot.. Why can't we talk to him."

"That's of no use either...He will inform this to ayi and she will once again accuse Kalpi and this might alert pakhi as well. U need to find proof against Pakhi to prove Kalpi innocent. There is no other way Raghav."

Raghav agrees with Pakya.. he keeps his hand on Pakya's shoulder and thanks him for the support. Pakya hugs him in the return and requests him to prove Kalpi innocent. Raghav promises him that he will bring back Kalpi's respect which she lost coz of him. They parted their ways.. unaware of the fact that Vitthal has witnessed the conversation. Tears were flowing down from his eyes. He sits on the temple step adjacent to the chawl and cries his heart out... He was happy to know that his daughter is innocent but soon guilt engulfed his heart..He remembers the cruelty he showered on Kalpi and the way he burnt her pyre. He cries loudly on realizing the pain he has caused his princess, he takes out Kalpi's childhood photo which he always keep in his pocket and hugs it. He wipes his tear and runs to tell the good news to Kamla but stops and remembers Pakya's word that it might alert pakhi... He controls himself and sits back on the step of temple not knowing what to do.

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Kalpi was sitting in the balcony reading the book... The act of reading was just a faade to hide her real emotions and pain which was once again caused by Kamla. Kalpi's mind was abuzz with Kamla's words and her hatred for her mother. She wonders whether Kamla ever loved her. She wish her father was there to understand her today but remembers his accusation on her and feels angry on him as well.

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Pakhi who managed to see Kalpi's tears was laughing evilly... She is so sure that her plan worked.. she gets a call from some unknown number... She panics on seeing the code of the city.

"Hello" She answered the call in low voice.

"Hello... I hope u recognize my voice."

"Yes.. but y have u called me here?? Don't u know this can be dangerous for me."

"I have to call to remind u that I have not got my paycheck yet."

"This time I do not have money.. please give me some time."

"I too don't have money... coz of u I have to leave my home... what will I do here now without money?? Send me money now else I will come at ur place and reveal ur secret."

"Please don't do that. I will deposit the amount in 1-2 days."

"Okkie... giving u 2 days else on 3rd day I will come at ur place."

Toon toon... The call gets disconnect. Pakhi is sweating badly.. She wonders from where she will get money as Raghav is already facing financial problems and she has no money in her account.

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Next day Morning

Sammy was being informed of the call by the man who was recording Pakhi's phone call on SP's instructions. Sammy wonders who the lady can be... He dials back on the same number as unknown and not surprised on knowing that it is of some PCO of village Katnipura which is around 20kms away from Mumbai. Sammy calls the same man once again and asks about Sheetal... He was being informed that Sheetal mobile is on constant tracking but she has not switched on her mobile even once. The last call she made was 2 days ago and that too from Mumbai. He ponders whether the caller can be Sheetal as why someone else would call from landline number...

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Kalpi was pacing restlessly in the room waiting for PRem's call as Maria had texted her that the data has been recovered and they are watching the video. She is praying to the god to give them some clue regarding the accident... Just then her phone rings... Without looking at the caller id she picks the call..

"Hello... Did we got some clue?? "

"Kalpi... which clue are u talking about??"

In confusion Kalpi looks at the caller id and realizes it Sammy and not Prem.. She wonders whether to share the detail with Sammy or not but think otherwise as it's Prem's confidential matter and she has no right to share its details with someone else.

"Nothing Sammy... btw why u called me?? Something important??"

"Yes Kalpi... I need Sheetal's photograph which u got from her bank details. Can u plz send it now? "

"Yes I will. But why u need it."

"Pakhi got a threat call today.. A lady was asking some money to hide some of her secret and I doubt that it can be Sheetal.. As the call was from a small village the photo might help me to identify her."

"Ok Sammy... I will send u the pic now."

They hang the call. Kalpi sends Sheetal's picture to Sammy and Sammy informs the same to Raghav.

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Raghav is talking to his ex-accountant Ramesh now who works for Prem.. Ramesh is an honest guy and his loyalties were always with Raghav... In Raghav's request he came to meet him in the caf.

"Ramesh... Do u remember any transaction of 1 crore rupees 5 years ago. Actually this is very important for me to know as I am not aware of any such transactions. "

"Sorry sir... but it's hard to remember in this way. Could u please tell me at least the month of transaction... The bank statements are available in ur office files."

"Ya sure... look at this bank statement... it's of one of my frn who was credited with this amount... And I doubt that it's from my account so the debit should be around this time only."

"Sir... we can find the bank statements of this month from ur office. If u want I will fetch the file secretly from Prem sir's cabin as now he is the ceo and all this transactions are under his supervision."

"Thank u Ramesh... That will be a great help."

"But Sir the transaction could be from ur personal account and for that u need to meet banking officials."

"I have already met that and such big amount was not debited from my account.. In that week the max transaction was of 40 lakhs and that to my mom's account."

"Ok sir... I will find the details for u."

Raghav and Ramesh leaves the place when Raghav gets Sammy's text that he has left for Katnipura.

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Kalpi finally gets Maria's call... Maria tells her to come at Prem's house as soon as possible... Kalpi asks her the reason but Maria requests her to come fast. After changing dress Kalpi takes out her car and starts driving rashly... Raghav who was just entering the building sees her going speedily somewhere and wonders what's the problem.. Worriedly he too follows her... She is in so much tension that misses the car that's following her.. Raghav calls her in tension but she doesn't receive it and in hurry she has forgotten her mobile on the bed and took her red handbag which she always keep with her as it has some memories of her past in it. Finally she enters the Kapoor house... As Prem and Maria stayed there whole night for extracting the data. Raghav who was following Kalpi gets surprised on seeing her car entering Kapoor's house... He remembers Sammy words when he accused Kalpi for shaking hands with Prem and destroying Raghav... he recalls the evening when he saw Kalpi sitting with Prem in the restaurant.

"Was Sammy correct?? Did Kalpi destroyed me for taking revenge for all that happened with me??" He pondered.

With this questions in his mind.. he returns from the gate only not wanting to know more about Kalpi or her plan.. He feels dejected and goes back to the KJ industries where he works as employee now.

Kalpi enters the home screaming Maria's name who shows her Prem sitting on the bed engulfed in tears... Kalpi shows her concern to Maria and asks the reason.

"The footage showed the complete accident of Sahil uncle. Prem saw his father getting hit by the truck and in the blood pool... The truck and it's number is visible in the footage and we can find the criminal as his face is also visible but Prem is so shattered on seeing the accident that he is not moving from the place.. I do not know what to do.. How to pacify him... Please Kalpi!! Do something, I can't see Prem like this."

Kalpi keeps her hand on Maria shoulder who hugs her in return while crying. Kalpi assures her that she will tackle Prem. Kalpi sits beside Prem and keeps her palm on his. Prem doesn't respond to it. Kalpi takes his face in her palms and sits on the ground on knees in front of him.. She lifts her hand and tells him to look into her eyes. Prem closes his eyes.

"Prem... look at me. Do not run away from the truth... I know u r hurt... Anyone would be. But remember the lady lying on the bed in ur farm house... She is ur mother... Sahil uncle's wife who saw this accident. Who is so shattered that lost her mental balance. This is all becoz of this truck driver. Don't u want her to get justice? Won't u become her support?? She is helpless Prem... Help her. Be strong. She needs u. Look at Maria PRem... how scared she is coz of ur condition... Prem u told me that u love her unconditionally... Will u let her cry coz of u??"

Prem looks at Kalpi with his face in tears... Kalpi's tears starts rolling on her cheek. Prem turns his face to the left and looks at Maria crying badly on his condition. He wipes his tears and gets up from the bed and hugs Maya. Kalpi smiles though the tears were still there in her eyes.

"I am sorry Maria... I am sorry. I know I was supposed to be strong but I just lose control on seeing my father lying in the blood of pool. But kalpi is correct. My mom needs justice and I will help her."

"No need to say sorry Prem... I was not crying coz of u but with u..."

"Stop this melodrama u too" Kalpi said smilingly when they hear some noise in the hall.

"Prem Bhaiya..." Pakhi cried once again.

Kalpi gets shocked on recognizing her voice... "Oh no... she can't see me and Maria here and what id she had noticed my car while entering??" She said loudly.

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Please Vote for future track. No pms right now. As will send pm after updating FF : love revisited.


P.S. : Once again sorry for mistakes. n please give honest feedbacks as only ur comments can encourage me to write more and keep our RagNa alive.

Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Stalker😆😉
Yippee me first🥳 aise hi subah update kara kar.. i'll always be first to comment😆

wow.. Pakya is rocking .. he showed that he is VitLa's son.. knows his mom and dad so wel.. kammo won't even trust god over paakhi🤢 she seriously deserves punishment and as of vithal.. i feel bad for him.. father always loves his daughter more and because of the mu he was forced by circumstances to react the way he did... but he still oves kalpi so defo uske liye maafi..

wat is paakhi doing there😲😲 u left us on cliff hanger ab next part jaldi update kar..
Edited by appyK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ltl bit busy wl unresh vry soon
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wow pakya knw abt kalpi's innocense, he trust his sis very keenly. Thank god atleast he saw pakhi's evil smile n doesnt got manipulated with her melodrama. Dats gud he stop rags, else kamla wl told evrything to pakhi wich alert her. Finaly vithal knw abt kalpi's inocense n felt guilty bt still he need punishment, 4 nt trusting his own daughter. Evn he trust on pakya's word n stop frm telling anything to kamla.
Pakhi😡 she is gving evil by seeing my kalpi's tears😭 kalpi mising vithal so sad bt last she get angry on him dats realy neccessary.
Gud sheetal start threatning to pakhi.😃 Ab aaya unth pahad k niche😆
sammy also start his work to prove pakhi as culprit superb.
Oh no rags follow kalpi n got to knw dat she is with kapoor's n all dat sammy said is ryt. Rags must b hurt bt i knw once he wl knw all truth abt prem helping kalpi he wl feel nyc.
Love the way kalpi handle prem frm dis trauma. Pakhi in kapoor mansion n evn kalpi their oh no, hope it wl doesnt create any trouble in kalpi's plan.
Vishu kitne cliff hanger deti he😔
fabulous update dear😳
Edited by shonali164 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update n now pakhi has t pay for hurting n interfering on ragna life

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