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Posted: 10 years ago
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caution. ... highly intimate
hello people. .. this is my first attempt in writing an os... plz forgive my mistakes
here I go...




so the scene is like that all the tests are over and it is proved that duggu is naitik and akshara's son and all are happy with this... after this huge problem... naksh plan a holiday for the entire family. After a lot of manofying... it is decided that naksh, shava , naman muskaan and the kids would be going to a nearby resort and eldies won't because of imp works.Mohini are also not going because of nandini's pregnancy but they are sending yash. So it is a three days trip and all are preparing...
Naksh room
ak Is packing the stuffs and nk silently comes from back and grabs her tightly from the back.
ak: kya karte hn naitik. aap bhi na.. itte achanak se... darr hi gyi thi mai.
nk: tightenns his grip and says.. kya ak...shaadi k 10 saal baad bhi ap aise react krti hn jaise k maine ye pehli baar kia ho..huh ... he digs his face in her neck and squeezes her waist little harder so it makes her scream a little.
ak: aahhh naitikkk... kya kar rhe hn... plz chodiye mujhe dard ho raha hai... aur waise bhi... hatiye.. duggu aa jaega
nk: kya kr rhe hn ka ans pyaar kr rha hu... apni biwi se... aur don't worry. ... aapka duggu aaj naman k saath so rha h... aur chodne mai aapko waala nhi hu na aaj...aur na hi agle 3din tak...and he bites her there... lighly...
ak now feeling very shy and loved but still pretends to get away from his grip.. ak: nk plz... apni biwi k sath koi aisa karta h... usko itni zor se pakad kar...itti zor se bite krna... very bad... plz chodiye na..
nk: apni nhi... to kisi aur ki biwi k saath krta h kya? ??
ak now speechless hits on his hand on her stomach and tries to remove it... as a result nk's passion increases and he suddenly moves and pins her to the wall. ak is now unable to meet his gaze which was scanning her from top to bottom through his favour0ite red color pure net saaree
nk: aapko pata h na k muje na sunne ki aadat nhi h..
ak: nk plz bs do minutes mai change kar k aa jau???
nk: nhi... ye meri favorite saree h... ise pehenne ka haq aapka h ... par utaarne ka... sirf aur sirf mera...
ak who is now blushing like anything: plz nk... aapko pata h na... m...mujhe...bahaut sharm aati h... plz...
nk: nhi ak... aaj kuch nhi. ... koi sharm. nhi...aj... sirf aap aur mai...
and he bends over her and moves his hand towards her pallu. she closes her eyes and catches his hand...nhi nk...
nk: ak... aap jitNa sharmati hn... mujhe utna hi excite karti hn... I'm sorry. ... but now. ... I can't control. .. sorry if I do hurt u a lot... with this he quickly picks her up and movez towards the bed... he makes her stand near the edge of the bed and suddenly pushes himself with her and they land on the bed with nk over ak
ak: nk...plz Mujhe aise mat dekhoye...
he bends down and kisses her eyes then moves to her cheeks. then neck then collar bone then chest then her stomach. .meanwhile ak is ruffling his hair
he stops on her stomach and suddenly digs his face in her again and starts nibbling her belly. this feeling of pain and pleasure was driving her crazy. even he' couldn't control anymore and went up... he remobed her pallu and with losts of protest was successful. . he bent down and kissed her body madly and possessed her completely for the whole night..
next morning...
both were sleeping peacefully and contended in each kthers arms... when the alarm rang... ak woke up and tried to mobe from under him but as he too was awake... he increased his pressure that it beacme almostimpossible for her to
get up...
ak : ab agar aap isi tarah sone ka naatak karte rahe..to. hum holidays par bilkul bhi nhi ja payenge...
nk gets uo and says ...oh no... in holidays ko to mai bilkul bhi miss nhi kr skta... itni mushkil seaap teen din k lie mere haath me aayengi... aise kaise jaane de skta hu... he quicklygivesher some pecks onhet face andlips andas soon ashe gets up... he notices the love bites on her neck chest and all over her belly...he takes her to the mirror and says... dekhiye... mere pyar ka token aapki poori body pe de dia h maine... and kisses her on neck...
ak:han aur jo muje itti zor zor se bite kia... itti zorzorse pakda... uska kya??? raat bhar mere upar soye...saans bhi nhi le paa rhi thi. abhi tk body dukh rhi h... she says while making a puppy face just to tease him.
she also says k kittebhaari hn aap...which aggravates him more he again pushes her on the bed andjumps over her...
nk:kya kahaaapne... mai... mai bhaari hu...han...???abhi batata huand he starts uzzling her hard..
ak: oouccchhh naaaiitttikkk mai to maxak kr rhi thi...plzhatiye...acha nk... derho. rhi h...
he stopsand says... abhi to chod diya...par dekhna...wha kya hal karta. hu..she just smiles and says...dekh lenge...he goes and she blushes...
they all go for the picnic and do looots of masti and shoppong and romance ofcourse as kids were woth naman muskaan and anshu jasmeet aap log soch hi sakte ho k three days me naitik nye khkh kya kya. kiya hoga... hihihihi...-they return happily and next day Is karwa chouth... akshi nd nk ad usual fast for each other but akshi is feeling little low shrthinks it to be safar ki tiredness and doesnt tell nk about it... shaam tk uski halat aur kharab ho jaati h and during pooja..she faints... all are tensef... nk carries her to their room...
ak Is still behosh anddoc is checkinghr... when she also gets up... nk in tension ask..kya hua doc... ak aise achan. sab thik to hai na?????
doc : relax mr. singhania... ghabraane waali koi baat nhi h... aapka... pehle bhi to ek beta hai... fir????
nk: matlab????
doc: congratulations mr. and mrs. singhania... aap firp se mummy papa banne waale hn.. and entire family ki battiisseee khil jaati h bas isi wajah se...aur poora din fast karne se akshara behosh ho gyi...don't worry... all congratulate naksh and go from.. there... tabgi chaand bhi nikal aata hau... naksh do their pooja from their room window both feed each other and wish for their eternal love... ak bends to touch naitik's feet but he picks her up signaling her not to bend... both hug each other and thank each other with teary eyes for giving such a special gift on such a special day...


HAPPY ENDING!!!!!
Guys it is my first attempt... plz do comment
if its liked by you all... gets likes and comments I'll write another part which will be flash back of the holidays. ..on next sunday... which will be surely more romantic! !!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice and romantic dear..loved it..pls write more..i am waiting..okeeey..os padhkar meri bhi bateesi dikh gayi..he he he :) ..but love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm happy you liked it... but I'm not getting any more likes or comments. ... I think people aren't interested in reading it. .. and if they are reading. .. they didn't like it [:^(]
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: avinaksh

I'm happy you liked it... but I'm not getting any more likes or comments. ... I think people aren't interested in reading it. .. and if they are reading. .. they didn't like it 😭

hey avi don't be sad ok by comments and like...see the views many members are here na...so don't be upset and write more os..okkeyy

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