3 *~BANJARA COFFEE HOUSE!~*

Originally posted by: AbHer_neha

OMG...Both the chapters(55 & 56) were heart wrenching. I can imagine what my Jo must have felt when that bas***d😡😡😡 was harassing her mentally & physically.😭😭😭

Yes dear

Prof. has some bitter memories of his past. I felt a bit sympathy for him when he told Jo his past story. I really feel sad for all those kids who couldn't get love & support from others just because they are a bit different from others. I felt sad for his wife. I can understand how he must have felt at the death of his wife as she used to be the only person who understood him & supported him. But you can't give excuse of your sufferings to misbehave with others just for ur happiness. Jodha & Jalal were not responsible for whatever happened with him. So why should they suffer? I've seen many people whose tragedies of life made them a better person & they always helped others so that others could not face what they faced in their life. But how can I forget that all this is applicable to a normal person not a mentally sick person.

True... and even if some are not really mentally sick.. they end up being bitter life-long! So, yes I guess that's why a good childhood makes it very important to shape a person into a good individual. However, apart from all that it stands that this professor was one sicko!

I m proud of your Jodha. She tried her level best to stop that animal. She never lost courage. In such situation where any girl can surrender, she had the guts to admit that she loves Jalal & she's his wife.👏👏👏

Her main aim was to drive him mad... mad enough so he'd stop what he was doing.. - she obviously didn't want to be in that situation seeing what he was doing to her and being unable to do anything about it! So, she took a gamble there...

I loved Jalal-Prof. convo.👍🏼 I m surprised how the prof. suddenly started behaving a like a normal decent man in fornt of Jalal.😲 How shrewd he is! Par Jalal bhi kam nahi. He spotted something unusual in the room through his eagle eye.👍🏼 His doubt confirmed after seeing his wedding photograph. So Jodha really resembles to his wife?😲 I thought only the prof. saw a glimpse of his wife in Jodha.

Resembled enough to strengthen his theories, I'd say... not a spitting image possibly... 🤔

'I know I am inconveniencing you by lingering around sir... but for some reason... I just can't convince myself to go...' he turned around, his approach darkening 'You see... I've been having a very strong hunch... the last time I had such an inkling, I was right... but, I ignored it by leaving Jodha alone in that green room... so, you must understand when I say that I don't want to repeat the same mistake twice... '

I just loved this para.👏 Jalal finally came in action.

Awww 😳

'You think I haven't sought help?' he yelled back 'What would YOU know? You've always been loved and accepted... everyone is not as lucky as you...'

'Your students didn't love you any less... nor did your own niece...'

Jalal is right here. Prof. was everyone's favourite. Couldn't he see his students' love for him? Couldn't he see how much Jodha respected him?😡😡

How can you reason with a man who's too much 'gayaa guzraa' in the head re?

Robbie ki news akhir mil hi gayi use.😭Jalal-Jodha scene was so heart wrenching.Jalal was so shattered seeing his girl's such a pitiable condition.🥺 🥺🥺 I can't comment on that part.😭😭😭 I knew that bas***d wouldn't spare them so easily.😡

😭 Awww

Chapter 56 was very action-packed. I could visualize the fight scene. It was written so well.😳That psycho swallowed the key?😲 Unbelievable! I just loved the balcony scene. Is the prof. dead?. I would have loved to see him being expelled from the college, being insulted by each & everyone & getting punishment.😡

He'll be directly taken to hospital and then police station na.. once he recovers... college gayaa tel lene😆

Jhut nahi bolungi...I cried after reading the rest of the part after the balcony scene. Can't see my JoJa in such a condition. Abdul, Meera, Renu kisi ko samajh nahi araha tha ki kya karein and I was also getting restless reading every line.😭😭😭

😭 here a big big hug for you 🤗

Gosh! He hadn't realized it, but his father had left. He was standing alone. In the darkness. With none beside him. He cast a brief glimpse at the door. He didn't know how - but it'd been locked too. Nevertheless, he knew what he had to do. After all, he did have abbu's consent. So, he dragged out a step stool. Parked it under the sill. Climbed onto it and jumped out of the window. To join her. Something he couldn't wait to do...

I just loved this part. Nothing can be more beautiful than this part. 👏👏👏Small Jalal & Jodha. His abbu reminded him that he can't go so early. He has to take care of so many things. And he's not alone. Someone is also there to take care of him.😳

Yes... it was a near-death out of body experience 🤗 something that people are known to feel only when they're nearly on the brink of death😭

Shraddha, writer-e-khaas is a very apt title for you. Tumhare jaisa writter na hua hai aur na hoga. You have again proven it with these two chapters. Hats off to you.

🤗 thank you thank you thank you so so so so much dear

Jodha is in coma..😲...maine itna expect nahi kiya tha...but I know only Jalal can bring her to her senses. Love you for such awesome chapters.🤗

Love you too for taking the time out for this dear.. means a lot to me

Originally posted by: divyavm

So let's have the next update more relaxing for all of us 😉😆

I get the hint 😆😉

Your use of figurative language is always very good

Thanchooo 😳

Yes - me thinks he kept talking to her to give himself strength rather than anything else. Strength and faith that she as still there listening to him!.

How beautiful! 😳

Yes..that Taveez was the last thing that left his mind before he slipped into unconsicousness.. so fitting that his Astral scene was about Abbu handing him over to Jodha (as it was abbu who gave him the taveez for protection)

Oh what a connection ... i missed that ... Beautiful

Yup.. cos even if the police did come, they'd waste time trying to sort silly formalities ask questions, get the watchmen to try again etc etc.. this way was best - also by going on foot, she avoided the 7:30 pm junction traffic

What detailing!

☺️ ooo ok

Where do I find these theories?

Apaaa I went through 50 pages or something to get this out for you 😆

I deliberately left a few things 'open to interpretation' since that's how emotions/sentiments are.. na?

1) He was standing in darkness for so long - but the vista outside was bright and sunny

2) The room he was in was empty with nothing to offer - but the beaches outside had all of nature's marvels to offer him

3) The window was high - thats why as a 12 year old he couldn't see it, but his father showed him the way

4) Jo was calling him to 'build' something which can stand for 'life' 'relationship' 'love' 'house' everything

5) The whole shift was also in a way to explain the Taveez.. a symbol daddy had put around his son to protect him. which he removed for first time to give her.

So symbol protects her -> which in turn means for whole of life she cares/protects/takes care of him!

I can go on...but yeah pick ANY of these interpretations or all of it too 🤗

Thanks dear ... Though I guess this sentence was a bit controversial😆

A bit? Underestimation much?😆

🤗

Originally posted by: tmaddy

Oh... jodha slipped into coma... 😲for how long??? Please don't make it too long...😭 raven charan shud have been in her place...😡

Ravan Charan is also going to suffer a similar fate only.. don't worry! 🤗

very touching... The part were he kisses her n says he loves her because he's not sure if he would be able to do again... and the dream that Jalal had while he was unconscious... His babu himself guided him to jo... 👏

thanks dear

Great update!!! Thnx for the pm... can't wait for the next part... plz coma-period leap le lena... want to see her awake...

Hee hee don't worry... the wait wouldn't be too long 🤗