ThiS HearT Is YourS EpiloguE UpdateD (plzzzzzz koi to nazar daal do)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2 - PAGE 5
EPILOGUE -PAGE 10

Sanyu: Rd plz ek baar to meri baat sun lo plz dont go na main sach keh rahi hu mujhe bohot ajeeb si feeling aa rahi hai ek ajeeb sa dar lag raha hai mujhe plzz postpone this conference

Rd: Offo jaan trust me its just ur pregnancy hormones tum tension mat lo ok just take care of urself n our baby oka n u know na I cant miss this conference its really important

Sanyu: Yeah this conference is important but not me hai na I m almost 9 months pregnant n u r going to attend a conference leaving ur pregnant wife grt u know na humaara baby ab kisi bhi din aa sakta h

He stepped closer to her n cupped her face n said

Rd: I cuse myself everytime for this u know na even I dont want to go leaving u like this agar main waha chala bhi gaya still my heart will be here woth u

Sanyu: then dont go na (defeated tone)

Rd: u know I cant do that this conference is very important for ourcountry, n waise bhi um army officers ki koi personal life nhi hoti sanyu humaari country k liye hume apna sab kuchh sacrifice karna hota h. Jab baat humaari coutry ki aati h we have to leave our everything behind. N waise tum fikr mat karo mujhe humaare baby ko dekhna h usse pehle main marne wala nhi

He recieved a tight slap at this statement

Sanyu: Randhir sigh shekhawat dont forget agar main logo ka ilaaj kar sakti hu to unko hospital bhi pohocha sakti hu agar do baara mere husband ke baare mei kuchh bhi bola then I will forget k main ek doctor hu n I will kill u

She pulled him to a tight smooch

Rd: sorry jaan aage se aisa nhi hoga pakka

Sanyu: sochna bhi mat agar tumhe kuchh ho gaya na to main jee nhi paaungi tum tak pohochne se pehle tumhaari har problems ko mujhse guzrna hoga phir chaahe wo death hi kyu na ho

Rd: now can I slap u

She smiled through tears n nodded in a no

Sanyu: but rd ek baar try to karke dekho na kya pata sir maan jaaye trust mujhe ajeeb se instincts aa rahe I feel like kuchh bohot bura hone wala h mujhe bohot dar lag raha h rd

Rd: jaan tum mujhse itna pyaar jo karti ho na sab usi ka result h isiliye tumhe meri itni fikr ho rahi h waise jab bhi maine dekha h mom dad ko u know jab bhi dad border pe jaate the na mom bhi unhe kuchh isi tarah rokti thi n jab dad waapas aate the na tabhi unki tension khatm hoti jst relax main jld hi waapas aaunga

Sanyu: Rd tum samajh nhi rahe ho tum isse pehle bhi mujhe border gaye ho na...

He cut in between

Rd: Ha gaya hu tab bhi tumhe meri isi tarah fikr hoti thi

Sanyu: Ha hoti thi but aajtak maine tumhe roka agar aaj rok rahi hu to koi wajah hai is liye na mujhe tumhe lekar bohot dar lag raha h rd

He cupped her face n pecked her temple

Rd : kuchh nhi hoga baba main thodi na kisi fight pe jaa raha hu its jst a conference isme kya darne waali baat h n moreover main jldi hi waapas bhi to aa jaaunga na

Sanyu: U r not going to listen me r u

He nodded in a no . She sighed in defeat. Suddenly something clicked her mind. She removed her taaviz which her mom gave her for her safety n gave it to rd.

Rd: Ye ! Ye to tumhaari mom ne diya tha na ye tum mujhe kyu de rahi ho.

Sanyu : Ha ye mom ne mujhe diya tha for my safety n ab main ye tumhe de rahi hu for ur safety chalo chup chaap baandh lo isse

Rd : No way ye mom ne tumhaari safety k liye diya tha I wont take it n moreover I dont believe in these things yaar I wont take it n thats final now bye I m getting

Sanyu : Rd plzz...

Again she was cut by his soft kiss

Rd : bye (he whispered in her ears )

Sanyu: tum kabhi meri baat nhi sunte tum kab sudhroge

Rd: till u r here to correct me tab tak to bilkul nhi
Now bye

Sanyu: Bye jldi aana n ha take care of urself

He smiled n waved a bye to her . She also waved a bye to him , a lone tear escaped from her eyes

SUNA SUNAAA LAMHA LAMHAAA MERI RAHEIN... TANHA TANHA... AAKAR MUJHE.. TUM THAAM LO.. MANZIL TERI... DEKHE RASTAAA
MUD K ZARA... AB DEKH LO.. AISA MILANNN PHIR HO NA HO SAB KUCH MERA... TUM HI.. TO HOOO
BE.PANAH PYAAR HAI.. AA JAA
TERA INTEZAAR HAI AA JAA
HOOO
BE.PANAH PYAAR HAI AA JAA
TERA INTEZAAR HAI AA JAA
SUNA SUNAAA LAMHA LAMHAAA MERI RAHEIN... TANHA TANHAAA

He saw tears in her which he never wanted to see what could he do he knew if he will go back he will give up in front of her . He knew she is hell worried for him but he knows its jst her love which is making her restless n the result is her worries n her instincts . Its tough for him to leave her at this but he cant do anything , for him his duty n his country is 1st priority. Ofcourse he could have made excuse of her pregnancy n could have escaped the situation but could he take risk when it comes to his duty no he cant. When she was giving him her taaviz his heart melted that time only but he cant give in n also he cant take any risk when it comes to her in any way . Initially he didnt believe in that taaviz n all but for her safety he is ready to believe in any thing . He knew the base of their relarionship was respect that they both had for each other. He has always seen a pride in her eyes for him for his devotion towards their country how could let her pride down . He knew right now her emotions n her worries r getting better of her but when she will be fine she will understand everything. He still remembers the day when he proposed her how much faith she had in him
*FLASHBACK*
That day he had proposed her n she agreed . After that they were hving some good time with each other suddenly

Sanyu: rd ek question puchu

Rd: ha pucho

Sanyu: sacchi sacch jawaab dena ha

Rd: Ha baba sacchi sacchi jawaab dunga (mimicking her)

Sanyu: accha okay to maan lo kabhi aisa time aaye k main aur humaari country dona danger me ho to tum kisse chunoge?????

She already knew the ans but still she asked as she wanted to listen it from rd

Rd: sanyu u already know the ans still u asked n I know k meri jagah tum hoti to tum usse hi chunti jisse main chunta but still u wanna hear it then listen main humaari country ko chunta u know na mere liye my duty is my devotion meri life par meri country ka hi haq h but mere dil par bas tumhaara haq h sirf tumhaara isiliye jaise hi main humaari coutry bachaata then main apni jaan de deta koi bina apne heart k zinda reh sakta h kya

She smiled throgh tears . How could she deny this man whose arms r heaven to her . This man so pure so loyal n above all that a true lover n a true devotee of his country . Today her respect for him grew thousand times more she is proud of him . N proud of herself that she his only his.

Sanyu: Well tumhe kisne kaha main humaari country ko chunti.

He looked at her startled at her statement

Sanyu: haa main humaari country ko nhi tumhe chunti. U know why ?? (He nodded in a no ) cuz I know k our country needs u , u will never let anyone harm our country . Tumhaare rahte humaari country ko kuch nhi ho sakta . So indirectly tumhe chunkar main apni country ko hi chunungi hai na

He smiled n hugged her tightly

Rd: Accha agar man nhi bacha paaya to ?????

Sanyu: Aisa nhi hoga jab tak tum ho tum aisa nhi hone doge

Rd : itna bharosa h mujhpe

Sanyu: Ummm isse bohot zyaaada

He hugged her closer n said I love u to her

Sanyu: I love u too

UFFF WHOA 1ST PART HO GAYA GUYS ITS A TS NXT PAAT SOOON N YEAH PLZZ GIVE UR FEEDBACKS N YEAH PLZ PLZ UPDATE UR FFS MSG TO ALL WRITERS

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Yay me first 🥳
But awsm thought yr
Rd as an army officer
That was an out of the box thought yr 😛
Aaj tk kisi ne bhi ye nai socha hoga
But plz dont kill rd
I beg u 👏
Apne first commenter ki baat to man lo yr plz 😆
But it was really awsm
Luvd it 😳
Updte soon
Thnx fr pm 😊
Edited by Sagl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Yr it was so emtnl
Luved it to the core

U penned it so beautifully

Rd in army n sanyu doctor
They luv each other so much bt use b zyada apni country se krte h

Sanyu sixth sense warning her sum thing bad going to hppn

Plz yr sad ending mat dena
Moi will cry 😭

Plz make it perfect happy ending

Update soon
Wtng

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazimg dear next part asap
andy1245 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
amazimg dear next part asap 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Hey!Pritha
lovely,lovely,lovely,lovely,lovely,
lovely,lovely concept n update😳😳
lovely, nicey n beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
so well u've penned the emotions⭐️⭐️

Randhir Army Officer❤️...Dreaming Him In Army Dress...
Looking Hot Handsome☺️☺️...Moi *faint*

Sanyu is so concer!!!😳
Sanyu's feeling is making me scare
Hope so nothing will happen 2 Randhir...😳
keep it up
update ASAP
eagerly waiting
thx 4 pm
love
Bushra🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
OMG! I loved it yaar! It was very emotional! The words you preferably chose were the best ones for this story!
I am loving randhir's dedication and devotion towards the country!
And sanyukta's love for him possesses unconditional eternity.
Really loved the concept. Simple and unique at its peak!
Continue soon! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its soo emotinal but awersome prt
Plzzz randhir ko kuch nahi hone dena ok
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awesome lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
fab awesome superb duper fab amazine.
you describe everithing so nicely
beautiful and fab writing.
Rd is a army officer and he really love his country
he is really love his country and Sanyu to.
i'm also proud of him. sandhir are so cute and sweet.
Sanyu love him so much.
sandhir"s bonding are very nice and awesome.
outstanding fab part.
please sad ending matkarna
muja bhi kafi buri felling arahi hai
i hope Rd ko kuch na ho.
aur Sanyu bhi thik raha.
i want happy ending cute sandhir jindaa...
love this part. update asap.
thanx for pm me.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update thanks for pm i just loved it...

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