Sandhir FF. Romantic and thriller- Winners Chapter 4on Page 6

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Hey Friends I am writing this FF for the first time. Please share your views on the same. It is a thriller and romantic FF on our Sandhir.

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Chapter 1

Randhir sitting in his cabin was going through some files. His trance was broken when his phone rang. He taking the call " Hello" No response from the other side. " Hello who is this speak up" shouted Randhir. All he heard was a laughter. He got irritated and asked " Kaun he ?" A man's voice spoke " agar tumhar mentor Vardhan ke jaan ki khairiyat chahteho to hum jaise kahenge aise karo" and the call ended. Now Randhir was worried thinking about his favourite mentor guide and a fatherly figure Mr. Vardhan Suryavanshi. His mind went to flash back his college days. He remembered every moment in FITE. His fights with Sanyukta and the dream team everything.

He completed his Mechanical Engineering from FITE six years back and did his masters from a prestigious London university and now owner of an automotive company.

A girl in short skirt and tee with little makeup and hair left openly entered his cabin without even knocking and seeing a worried Randhir raised her one brow and asked " Hey Hero? What's up? Pareshan kyun ho?

You know girgit our Vardhan Sir is in danger" he said and seeing her tensed face he explained to her about the call that he received few hours ago.

"Tho yeh bat he" she came close and placed her hand on Randhir's shoulder and said" don't worry hero everything will be fine. We will save him" trying to console him but sounded worried herself as she was also worried for her mentor.

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Vardhan is lying lifeless on a chair with his hands and legs chained his head down and eyes closed bruises all over his body and face . He was locked in a dark room and only source of light was a dim light at the centre on the ceiling."Pa...a...ni Paaa...ni" he said in a feeble voice. A man in his black uniform with his face covered with a veil came with a jug of water and gave it to him for drinking. Vardhan seeing water after days just poured water on his face and started drinking the left over water. He gulped water in onego and was feeling littler energized. Then he heard the voice from the speakers in his room. " Vardhan your dream team will be coming to help us we have already informed them about you being captivated by us and they are ready to do anything for you they will be here in a days time" the voice ended after a big laugh.

" N...O" he shouted and threw the jug which broke into pieces.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear start is awesome..
sounds interesting very interesting. ..
please continue it. ..

and who is the girl whom Rd called girgit? ??
Am excited to know what will happen next. ..
If possible pm me. .. 😊
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nice chapter amazing concept! looking forward to it! suspense!!
eager to know what happened to vardhan and who was that girl whom randhir called girgit??
now continue soon dear and pm me whenever u do so!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting.. very interesting.. so our favourite vardhar sir in danger... the guys those who have kidnapped him must b having something big in their mind as they knew the dream team will do anything and everything to save their mentor...

as far as the girl is concerned.. i hav a feeling that she is vidhushi ..

do update soon and dp p.m me when u update..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful... Masst start.. And I am stalking this if that girl is Vidushi.. Means you would have started Vidhir friendship here.. Brownie points for that if that's true. 😆😆😆
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It was intrstng
Would luv to read it

Update soon wtng 😊
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awesome dear...nice start...pls pm me when u'll update...
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interesting story...
continue soon...
pm me if possible...
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Sounds intresting very intresting updt asap
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Originally posted by: thundercute

Hey dear start is awesome..
sounds interesting very interesting. ..
please continue it. ..

and who is the girl whom Rd called girgit? ??
Am excited to know what will happen next. ..
If possible pm me. .. 😊

Thank you and i will update soon and defenitely PM you.

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