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(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR A LOVELY BEAUTIFUL BANNER)








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Maan came around at 3'clock as te meeting extend ,little bit and more over dev was taging him asking abt Geet..At once te meetings ends , he rush to gh, asking te driver to start te car , his each sec away from Geet was hell for him..before te car stops , he open te door and storm out to Geet's room and shock to see te room was empty..he wonder where she went..he open te washroom door, it was empty..he felt some thing missing..he was abt to leave te room to search her outside, but saw a paper on te bed

He took te paper and read te content, he was shocked and froze to read te letter


Maan im leaving..dont wory I wont die..im leaving to km..pls leave me alone..i need some time alone..dont follow me




He sat on te bed holding te bed : she left she left,

He rush out and saw Raghav standing there : Raghav where is Geet

Raghav : she left sir

Maan : how

Raghav : by bus

Maan : r u mad how can u let her

Raghav : sir she is not khurana, im only responsibile for khuranas

Maan look at him, Raghav saw a pain in his eyes ..Raghav know he utter wrong words but he didt like te way Maan behaved with Geet..he felt sad seeing his baby sister crying..he have always seen her smiling face , but yesterday..Maan turn to leave

Raghav : don't worry sir I have send bahadur with her



Maan sighed giving a look to him, he left to his room..he sat on his bed thinking Geet

Here Geet decide to leave to km, as she cant stand in tis place for a sec too..she felt suffocated..she didt think things will became like tis which she never want tis to happen

Wen she said she is leaving Raghav didt allow but she pleaded him tat she want to be alone, so Raghav without any other go, he allowed only if she agrees if Bahadur accompany her, she accepts..now She sat on te bench waiting for te bus




Evanoa oruvan vaasikkiRaan...iruttilirundhu naan yaasikkiRaen

Someone is playing (the flute), in the dark I am loving

Thavam poal irundhu yoasikkiRaen adhaith thavaNai muRaiyil naesikkiRaen

Like a meditation I am thinking, and I am loving those thoughts step by step

She was now and then seeing te entrance thinking Maan will cum..still her heart craved for him after wat ever he dose ..wind was blowing caressing her heart..she started to walk to inside , Suddenly she heard some one playing a flute on te platform, she watch a blind person playing a flute..she stood there watching it



Evanoa oruvan vaasikkiraan iruttilirundhu naan yaasikkiraen (2)

Someone is playing (the flute), in the dark I am loving

Thavam poal irundhu yoasikkiraen adhaith thavanai muraiyil naesikkiraen

Like a meditation I am thinking, and I am loving those thoughts step by step

Kaettu kaettu naan kirangugiraen kaetpadhai evanoa ariyavillai

I am continuously listening and falling for thee and he does not know I am listening

Kaattu moongilin kaadhukkullae avan oodhum ragasiyam puriyavillai

I am not understanding the secrets he blew into the ear of the bamboo from the woods


Suddenly one girl dash on her pouring water on her dress..breaking her trance

Girl : sory




Geet smiles and gesture its ok, she wipe it and her thought went to te day she meet Maan for te first time, in Chennai on her b'day, how she fall on him and smashing him with ice cream..she smile sadly..


Evanoa oruvan vaasikkiraan iruttilirundhu naan yaasikkiraen

Someone is playing (the flute), in the dark I am loving


They second meeting , they went out, how he mistook her and shouted on her.. how they again meet in Madurai..his sory , they moments in Madurai




Pullaanguzhalae poonguzhalae neeyum naanum oru jaadhi (2)

My bamboo flute, my flowery flute you and I are the same race

Ullae urangum aekkaththilae unakkum enakkum sari paadhi

The eagerness that sleeps inside is equally divided for you and me



She got into te bus, and sat in her seat..Bahadur sat behind her, he have booked seats of three rows on , so tat no one will disturb them..he felt sad to see his baby sister sad face..Geet watched thru te window..te flute sound still hearing soothing her heart..


Kangalai varudum thaenisaiyil en kaalam kavalai marandhiruppaen

In the soft music that touches my eyes I forget my lifetime of pain

Innisai mattum illaiyenraal naan enroa enroa irandhiruppaen

If there wasn't soft music I would have died long ago



Maan sat on his bed and thinking abt te last night events , his heart cried for hurting his Geet, he have shattered everything, how he is going to face her..he packed his things and left to airport as his private jet is waiting for him..he got into it and remember how he came with Geet and how she snuggle to him in her fear..he sat on his seat and stare at te next seat feeling her..he lean on his seat and closed his eyes thinking abt her


Evanoa oruvan vaasikkiraan iruttilirundhu naan yaasikkiraen

Someone is playing (the flute), in the dark I am loving





Bahadur asked Geet whether she wants some things as bus stops for some time , but she deny it saying she was not hungry..but he didt leave her, as he threaten her if she didt eat anything, he wont allow te driver to start te bus still she had some things..she frowned but looking at him, she sighed and had her dinner ..the bus started

Geet saw two kids fighting for a toy, she gets flashbacks of all they childish fights with MSK...pull over fight.. calling him kallulimangan , idiot and she smiles..they fights, they arugments , te way she bossing around, they shopping, she recollects everything..tears were flowing from her eyes






Urakkam illaa munniravil en ul manadhil oru maarudhalaa (2)

In these sleepless nights is there a change in my mind?

Irakkam illaa iravugalil idhu evanoa anuppum maarudhalaa

In these loveless nights is this a change sent by him?



The song kurban hua was playing on te bus, she remember they first dance, his first ever touch which made her fall for him, her love , her feeling for him , how she confessed her love and he deny it..





She recollects wat happen last night, how he dance with tat girl to make her lose..she felt sad thinking coz of her he crossed his limits, broke his dignity..tears were flowing form her eyes..



Endhan soagam theervadharku idhu poal marundhu piridhillaiyae

To cure my sadness there isn't a medicine like that

Andhak kuzhalaip poal azhuvadharku aththanai kangal enakkillaiyae

To cry like the flute I don't have that many eyes! ( the holes in the flute)




Geet recollect how he dance with Rasika breaking her , even though he didt like but want to show her he cant be affected by anyone..his closeness with rasika really killed her..


Evanoa oruvan vaasikkiraan iruttilirundhu naan yaasikkiraen (2)

Someone is playing (the flute), in the dark I am loving it

Maan reached to km at night..dadi have got te news from Ragav, as he informed Geet left in bus..so dadi sense something have happen between them..she is worried and angry on Maan..seeing him, her temper increased

Dadi : stop right there Maan

Maan stood : dadi

Dadi : where is Geet, wat u did to her haan

Maan felt guilty, he didt have words to say



Dadi : I didt expect tis from u Maan , hmm she left to her room

Maan went to his room and felt guilty , he want to run behind her but her words in te letter stopped , as she pleaded pls leave me alone.. he know bahadur is following her..he don't want to hurt and make her cry more seeing him..

He was waiting for her..Bahadur was updating where they were very half hour, he know she will reach next day, but he cant wait for her..Dadi , Anni, Ayesha was waiting for Geet, they are slept in they room, Maan didt went down for dinner as no one called him, he know he deserve it..



Maan was sitting in te chair and thinking abt her,he don't know wen he slept thinking Geet..he woke up in te morning coz of his phone..he got up with a jerk and saw te time..it was 9 clock

Maan got shock : shit , he took his phone and saw 22 missed calls from office and from, he at once called to Bahadur and came to know they will reach at 3'clock..Then he called to Adi and he remember he have to attend some meeting..but he was not interested to attend it, he want to see her once , to know how she is..her tearful face still haunts him..but tis meeting, he cant avoid it..so decide to attend te meeting and cum before she reach..



He got ready and went to kc..his body was sitting in te chair but his heart and mind was behind Geet, .. for first time he was Irritated with te meeting..with half heartly he was sitting..he rush to km at once he finish his work..he reached km, but he know still she didt cum..he was waiting for her sitting in te couch watching te entrance..no one bothered him..as Anni went to col, Dadi was sitting with Ayesha ignoring him

At 4'clock Geet came, seeing her Dadi rush to her carrying Ayesha..



Dadi : Geet beta wat u have u done to urself

Hearing dadi , Maan saw and his heart cried to see Geet, she was pale like exhausted, her puffy eyes was red , due to continuous cry..his heart winch, he want to crush her inside him and sooth her pain..but he stood still..Geet didt look at him..

Dadi : Geet beta , seeing her go to ur room

Geet didt say anything but just went to her room, as she enter she broke down, she started to throw te vase , she throwed te pillows on te floor, brokeing te mirrors with te vase..she was throwing everything wat ever she got in her hand in her frustration



Geet screamed a: ahhh, why u did tis Maan why,

MAAN heards her shout and rush to her room, but dadi stopped him on te door

Dadi : I will look after u leave Maan

Maan was hurt : pls dadi

Dadi : I said leave Maan, don't hurt her more, she know she was rude but he deserve it, gaving a hurtful look to dadi, he left ,

Dadi took te tray and went inside and saw te room was in full mess, Geet look at Dadi with red eyes, she sat beside, at once Geet fall on her lap, crying..dadi too had tears in her eyes seeing her, she just caress her hair soothing her

Geet : why dadi, why he did tis

Dadi : Geet don't cry, pls, wiping her tears

Geet : wat is lagging in my love tat he did tis

Dadi : no Geet u r not lagging, he is one u didt deserve u, so better forget him

Geet smiled sadly : forget , can I



Dadi : Geet beta im sory for making u go thru all tis im sory, after knowing abt Maan, I should have not dragged u in it

Geet : no dadi its me who forced u r not in fault

Dadi hugged her, but they broke wen they saw Ayesha came inside with sad face..seeing her both wipe they tears..Geet raised her hands

Geet : my kutty. Ayesha came to her, I missed u kutty so much , she hugged her

Dadi took te tray : beta have ur lunch

Geet : pls dadi im not hungry,

Dadi was looking at her : Geet beta u look so tired pls have some thing

Geet : I will have ot later dadi.



Ayesha was looking at both, she know her maa was sad and not having her lunch..she hugged Geet, Geet look at her..she tag dadi and gesture her te tray , indicating wat she want to do..

Dadi, gave te spoon with morsel to Ayesha , she took te spoon and raised in front of Geet's mouth..Geet felt overwhelmed, his throat chocked, she kissed her nose and open her mouth

Gete kissed her head : love u baby

Ayesha : lub u maa,

Dadi was crying seeing them..she know how Ayesha was bond to Geet, and cant live with each other.. but now she realize how selfish she became , for her grandson she made Geet to suffer..Geet finished her lunch , Ayesha wipe her mouth, giving her water

Geet : dadi ayesha had her lunch

Dadi : hmm

Geet : u dadi

Dadi : me too, now take some rest

Geet : dadi I want to sleep on ur lap , can i



Dadi placed her head on her lap and started caress ..Ayesha was lying on her..Maan was watching all tis from outside.his heart winched to see tis...after he left, he saw Ayesha, he know Geet was hurt, but only Ayesha can make her feel good, so he took Ayesha and gesture her to go inside and he is right Ayesha made Geet to have her lunch..he sighed and left to his room

Te day went, Geet, Dadi, Anni was sitting in te hall, Ayesha was running behind te pets..Dadi and Anni didt want to remaid her abt te incident, they want to distract her , Geet too felt tat Anni, and dadi trying to distract her, she don't want to make them worry for her..she faked to be normal and started her bak bak wat all she did in te party..

Ayesha : maa he is dextar , wat I will call them showing te kittens

Geet started to think : hmmm, Ayesha to started to think

Geet : dadi Anni u all too think some nice names naa,

Anni : wat to name tis cute cotton balls

Geet : haan, cotton and cuty



( osheen and richa I took ur cotton and cuty names, i miss them so much..i think u won't mistake me)

Ayesha clapped her hands in excitement, she hold te kittens: cotton , cuty

Both didt know abt they new names , but they snuggle to her, All surrounds them, without knowing one soul is watching them and craving to be with them..which he cant ..Maan was watching them playing with te pets, he saw them selecting names and how well Geet came to normal with them..he just came down and sat beside dadi staring at Geet..Geet sensed him..everyone ignore his presence and playing with te pets..Geet now and then saw Maan who was yeraning for her look, but she don't want to face him..she was really hurt



Geet : dadi we have our dinner

Dadi : hmm,

All left leaving Maan alone...he too sat in his chair, all was busy with themselves ignoring him..he felt hurt seeing them ignoring him..but he didt say anything, he had no words to talk..he had his dinner silently and left to his room, thinking how to solve tis..







PRECAP : I DON'T WANT HIM DADI

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Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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yahooo mein first fariya ki id say nahi toh is say hi sahi 😆
awesome update geet is sooo much hurt that she dont want to talk maan she avoid him fully
maan curse himself for hurting her isko nahi lagat k isko ek danda zoror say apna sir par marna chiya😡 idiot jitna time curse kar raha hai uska half time agar yeh samj le k he love geet toh kiya chala jai gaa 😡

dadi anie all avoid him well he deseve this kuty kamine k dhokey ki pare hai geet ka sacha pyar nazar nahi ata isko

geet koi zaror nahi itni jaldi maf karnai ki bus
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awsemm update geet left to km maan in pain everyone ignoring maan dadi ani ayesha trying to cheer geet
Edited by tamanna1391 - 10 years ago
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Superb update
Love it
Poor maaneet suffering
Hope everything is ok soon

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