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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello people.. I know many of us are upset from Raman and many are upset from Mani.. I felt Raman was being judged by Mani so thought of writing an OS.. Please do read and tell me your views..


~Mere Raman~

"He doesn't deserve you Ishu.. woh ruthless arrogant batameez aadmi hai.. tum uske sath 6 mahine kaise rahi??? Wohh tumhare laayak nahi hai.. you deserve someone better.. much better..."

Ishita was stunned listening to his words but then smiled...

Ishita:- tum bhi Mani.. Aa gaye na mere pati ke jaal me...

Abhimanyu:- matlab???

Ishita smiled and shifted to a sitting position. She was still lying on hospital bed..

Ishita:- Mani wohh Raman hai Raman Kumar Bhalla.. Ye jo gussa karte hain na woh sirf pretend karte hain ki woh kitne khadoos hain par uske peecche kitna dher saara care aur love juda hota hai no one understands... Who agar apne bhai ko daantte hai to isliye kyunki uski parwah hai unhe, agar apne employees pe chillate hain to wohh isliye kyunki wohh nahi chaahte koi bhi employee koi bhi consequence face kare... Agar ghar pe kisi pe bhi chillate hain to ye unka tareeka hai mani.. pyaar chhupane ka.. par care jo dil me hai who to nahi chhupa sakte na.. to wohh is tarah nikalti hai.. Mere Raman aise hi hain... Who jispe bhi chillate hain ya gussa karte hain uske peecche unki care hoti hai.. Par ye tum kaise samajh sakte ho.. Tum unhe jaante hi kitna ho...

Abhimanyu:-Ishu.. I don't believe you.. Tum us Insaan ko defend kar rahi ho jo anhi recently tumpe chillake gaya hai... jo doctor se leke nurse tak.. union leader se leke apne bhai tak sab pe chilla raha tha kal se..

Ishita again smiled and nodded her head..

Ishita:- Accha chalo ek ek se shuru karte hain.. Sabse pehle he shouted on me ... you saw that... what was the reason.. I was being stubborn in not listening to him.. he was right for my health and I was being ignorant.. Haina.. to iske peecche thi unki worry.. mere liye..

Next... Doctor, Union Leader and Romi .. umm I wasn't there so tell me jab who chilla rahe the baaki sab pe to what were his words..

He tried to remember his words..

*Flashback*

Raman to ward boy:- Tera dimaag kharab hai?? Meri biwi yaha behosh hai aur tereko strike ki padi hai... Jaan se maar dunga saaale agar meri biwi ko kucch hua to..

Raman to nurse:- Doctor batayenge.. to aap log kya karenge?? Do nurse rakhi hain pure hospital me.. Usko kucch ho gaya na to... Agar meri biwi ko kucch ho gaya na to aap logo ke hospital ki band se band baja dunga mai..

Raman to Union Leader:- Andar jo patient hai who meri biwi hai.. Usko kucch ho gaya na to teri strike ki to mai band baja dunga

Raman to Romi:- Sabke saamne matlab kya?? Thappad maarunga muh ghum jaayega tera.. Ishita ki ye haalat teri wajah se hui hai. Sharab peeke ghar aaya.. usko pareshan kiya.. mummy se shikayat ki.. bhabhi se banti nahi hai teri...

*Flashback Ends*

He looked on towards Ishita..

Ishita raised her eyebrows..

Ishita:- Did you get the answer???

Abhimanyu:- Par ye koi tareeka nahi hai Ishu..

Ishita:- Par Mere Raman aise hi hain Mani.. Unka dil jitna bada aur saaf hai.. Shayad hi kisi aur ka hoga.. Unhone life me bahut kucch jhela hai Mani but still he is there for everyone.. Is baat ko maine bhi der se samjha par ab mai unhe samajhti hoon.. Mai jaanti hoon gusse me unhe kucch nahi sujhta.. sabke saamne who chaahe jitna bhi gussa dikha le.. Akele me jaake who chup chap rote hain apno ke liye Mani... Jaan dene se pehle bhi nahi sochenge who mere liye.. I know... And I have accepted him like this only with all my heart.. Agar tum mere decision pe trust karte ho to give it a thought.. I know you are concerned about me but I have no life without him anymore.. He doesn't have either but who kahenege ya nahi iska unke mood pe depend karta hai.. Mere Moody Kumar... Wohh kehte hain na "Tedha hai par mera hai "

She smiled and he saw her smile was genuine.. But he still was in a doubt.. Was he misjudging Raman?? Or was again Ishu showing her mahanta.. Does he really care??

He left after asking her to take some rest to find the answer to his still remaining doubts... He went to terrace of the hospital to find some peace when he heard a voice.. . He looked over to find Raman talking on the phone.

Raman:- Ru.. mera baccha strong hai na.. Papa hai Ishima ke sath baby.. Aap apna homework karo.. Ishima ko nahi pasand na ki aap apna homework chhodo.. Aur papa aapse promise karte hain beta ki Ishima ko leke jaldi ghar aayenge.. Aur unke liye hum log ek baar phir dosa bananyenge.. Ru and Papa.. okay ?? Now my strong gal .. go to periamma..

He could see him wiping his tears in the mid of his words.. He wasn't still sure..

Raman kept the phone and stared at his phone screen for quite a long.. He then spoke

Raman:- Jitna bhi try karlo tum mujhse dur jaane ka Jhansi ki raani.. mai tumhe waapas apne paas leke aaunga.. tumhe nahi pata shayad par tum meri strength ko aur mai weak nahi padunga kabhi.. Ill be always there for you Ishita.. More than anything else or say anyone else...

He hid himself when found him coming.. Raman straight went to Ishita's ward and Abhimanyu followed him.. He was worried what if he again shouts on Ishu..

Raman stopped at the door of her room and peeked inside.. He smiled and nodded in disbelief.. He then caressed the door and then went in.. Abhimanyu was shocked to see yelling Raman like that... He saw Raman going near to her bed and snatched the magazine out of her hands..

Ishita shocked and frowned

Ishita:- Kyaaa hai Raavan Kumar???

Raman:- Oh hello.. Tumhe koi IAS ki exam ni clear karni.. jitna padhna tha padh chuki ho life me.. Kabhi to books ko aur apni aankho ko rest do...

She smiled..

Ishita:- Bore ho rahi thi Raman.

Raman:- Bore to tum ho hi.. Apni shakal agar galati se dekh lo aaine me to darr bhi jaaogi shayad,, Itni boriyat bhari hai.. Par Hospital me tumhare magazine padhne ka kharcha nahi de raha.. Tum rest karo uske aise de raha hoon..

Ishita:- Insensitive!!!

Raman:- Tell me something new..

Ishita:- Sadu kahinke

Raman:- Ab apni aankho se mujhe ghurna band karo aur so jao band karke.. Sapno me shayad tum sach me dentist ban jaao.

Ishita giggled..

Ishita:- Raman aap na kabhi nahi sudhroge..

Raman:- Hum to bhai jaise hain waise rahenge..

He winked at her and smiled.. She smiled back and lied down.. he pulled the comforter for her.. She slept within no time and he was sitting beside her caressing her temple and looking at her lovingly..

Abhimanyu was noticing him.. He felt Ishita was right.. He cares for her but his way of expressing is a little different..He remembered her words

"Mere RamanAise hi hain"


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Waiting for your responses..

Love

Sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow..really wish something like this is shown in the show
Excellent os
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Really i wish something like this is shown by the cv's...too good ...
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Cute! My bhabhi says to me that no one really knows how a couple is except the couple themselves - this OS is so true to that
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very cute. Can so easily see it happening exactly like that.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWWHHH, I really hope this happens in the show. I mean frustrating as it might be, I can understand why Mani misunderstood Raman. Everyone who did not know the real Raman did at first but one by one, everyone learnt of the care he has and how he shows it in his special way. From Ishita to all the Iyers, they slowly got it and hopefully Mani will understand it as well like how he did in this OS !! And I loved how Ishita said Mera Raman aisa hi hei.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sakshi so good to see you here! You write awesome as always and this time you described the real raman or i should say ishita's raman so well! Mani never saw raman's good side so he can't be blamed but rkb is super human and you proved this here.
Amazing work! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww!!! extremely brilliant!!! loved it!! esp the explainations she gave Abhimanyu.. ekdum perfect!
do write moree!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey sakshi..! 😊
it was superb beautifuL OS... 👏
we cant see dis in d shw but atleast u made us to imagine...
thanxx 4 writng did OS... 👍🏼
Loved d explantion givn by ishu 2 mani... i lovd each nd evry li9 said by ishu 4
raman.."Mere RamanAise hi hain"
seriously it suits..
Plz pm me more of ur os/ff/ss..
Edited by SuryaNakshholic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS...
Loved it very much.. Wish we could see something like this on screen..
Ishu defending her Raavan Kumar and some sweet moments between them.. ❤️

Thanks for the cute OS 😃

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