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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Nice update. ...update soon 😊amazing


thanks dear1!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anu_d3

Awesome update that's hug n promises very nys...thnx for PM


thanks dear!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

wao wat an update
it was super spl
swayam wanted to talk to sharon
clearing his doubts more than her's
which refleacts how deep thr frnship is
but the segment wit choti maa
was really spl n emotional
it more like an invisible thread
was connecting the three of them together
at a level which only thr hearts knew
do update soon 🤗


thanks a lot for the wonderful comment!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update dear...swayam was so caring...he kept on assuring her that no matter what he's always dere for her...swear man sharon's chachi was super cool & extremely sweet at the same time...
Loved the update...
Hope swayam realizes his feelings for sharon like real soon...
Waitin for the next chap...

P.S. thanx for the PM dear...update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
and thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: snehaswaron77

Awesome update dear...swayam was so caring...he kept on assuring her that no matter what he's always dere for her...swear man sharon's chachi was super cool & extremely sweet at the same time...
Loved the update...
Hope swayam realizes his feelings for sharon like real soon...
Waitin for the next chap...

P.S. thanx for the PM dear...update soon...


thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_31

awesome update

and thanks for pm


thanks dear...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 4

Muskaan was helping sharon to sit on the bed decorated with flowers...the room was filled with the soothing lights of the candles and aroma of the flowers and candles...yes it was her wedding night as she is now mrs Sharon shekhawat...

sharon was revisiting the time of her marriage with swayam... she didn't know what swayam felt but she felt a different kind of sensation while taking the pheras , as the vows are her life now... When swayam tied the magalsutra around her neck she felt those were simply not some black beads but a shackle to tie them together forever... when swayam filled her partings with sindoor... She felt a weird happiness... the happiness was because she felt that she became his forever...

"Sharon di...tum thik to ho na???" muskaan asked with concern...Sharon broke out from her reverie

"actually the entire day was so hectic...shaadi aur itne saare log...that's why I am a bit tired..." Sharon smiled...

Muskaan smiled... " bhai ata hi hoga...mein chalti hoon..." She said and moved out of the room closing the doors and bumped into swayam...

"accha hua tum mil gaye ho bhai... Ab mujhe behen ka nek do..." she put her hands forward with a huge grin...

"musky this is my room...I'll enter it and that's why I have to pay you...nice ethics you have got..." He raised his brows...

"that's the ritual bhai...you have no other option..."

"kitna chahiye???" swayam straight away went to the point...

"jitna aap goge..." Swayam smiled at this...

Swayam gave her a couple of thousand rupees notes and she hugged him tightly...

"bhai I am so happy for you...i know she is your best friend...but please take care of her...I am sure bhai you can't help but fall in love with her...she is really good bhai...you couldn't have got a better girl as your life partner than her..." and she broke the hug...

"I know musky...thanks for being there with me..." He touched her cheeks... Muskaan left and swayam entered the room to see Sharon sitting on the bed...she was trying to open her maag tika which got entangled in her hairs...

"ruk mein dekhta hoon..." Swayam closed the door , came and sat in front of her and then carefully detangled her maag tika from her hair...

while removing the maag tika swayam's face was inches away from hers... she could feel his breathing on her cheeks which gave her goosebumps...she had clutched the side of her lahenga in her fists feeling the proximity as her breath hitched with ecstasy ... His eyes intensely looking at her maang tika focusing on his work while Sharon closed her eyes feeling the silence of the moment...

"ho gaya..." swayam moved to the dressing table to keep the tika... Sharon left the breath which she was holding...

"tu jaake fresh ho ja...thak gayi hai..." He spoke with concern... Sharon nodded and went to the washroom...after half an hour she came out wearing a track pant and a t shirt to see swayam also changed into his tracks and he has removed the flowers from the bed for making it suitable for sleeping... Seeing Sharon come out swayam picked up the pillow from the bed ...

"tu bed pe so ja...I'll sleep on the couch..."

"swayam...uski koi zarurath nahi hai...tu bed pe so sakta hai...mujhe koi problem nahi hogi..." Sharon gave a smile...

"are you sure???" he asked with her brows raised...

Sharon nodded...

Both of them lay down on the bed while suddenly swayam sat up and looked at Sharon...

"cookie why are we talking so formally???" Sharon got startled with the question and also sat up beside him...

"matlab...???" She asked with a confused expression...

"cookie pls... lets get one thing clear... humare beech bohut sare relationship change ho gaya hai...magar pls hum koi awkwardness ya formality nahi layenge humare beech mein... At any cost I can't afford to lose you..." he said looking straight into her eyes...

"don't worry swayam...sab thik hi rahega...hum kuch galat hone hi nahi denge..."

With that they slept as the tiredness of the entire day melted into thin air...

It was 6.30 in the morning when Sharon woke up... She quickly freshened up taking a bath and dresses herself in a beautiful yet simple light pink churidar and went downstairs...

"good morning mamma..." She hugged swayam's mom from behind who was sitting on the couch drinking tea...

"array mera baacha uth gaya...woh bhi itni jaldi..."

"haa mamma...ab bataiye...mujhe kya karna parega...???" she asked with a chirpy smile...

"waise aaj to tujhe khana banana parega...par tu tension mat le..maine breakfast already taiyar kar liya..tu sirf rasam k liye thora kheer bana le...kam ho jayega..."

"aapne kyun banaya breakfast...wo to mera kaam than a aj ke liye..." Sharon frowned...

"haa par kal poora din shadi ke liya thak gayi thi na tu...to meine socha bekaar mein tujhe aur kaam na karaun... bas kheer bana lena... waise agar tujhe man hai to tu aj ka aarti bhi kar sakti hai..." she touched her hairs and caressed them...

"thik hai mamma...thanks mamma...aarti karne ki haq den eke liye"...

"Sharon beta...tu meri bahu nahi hai...meri beti hai...aur jitna swayam ko mein pyaar karti hoon shayad bachpan se hi tujhe use vi jyada pyaar karti hoon...to iss ghar mein jitna mera ya kisi aur ka haq hai utna hi tera bhi hai..." With that she pulled Sharon into a hug...

Sharon hugged her back and stood up to go to to mandir ...

"kitni pyaari lag rahi hai Sharon..." swayam's chachi came and kissed her forehead...

"thanks choti maa..." She hugged her...

"tuu mandir ja rahi hai na?? to chal mein teri madat kar deti hoon..." Both of them moved towards the mandir...

As Sharon did the aarti , everyone from the house gathered there including swayam who was standing at the door not entering the mandir because he had not taken a bath...

after it was done Sharon distributed the Prasad amongst them and fed the Prasad to swayam as he would not touch the sweet before taking a bath...swayam gave her a tight side hug while THEIR entire family kept adoring their bond...


here goes the long update for those who complained that the previous one was short...i hope u like this...do hit like n comment...

love , ani

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Posted: 11 years ago
aniii😛
i am happy i am the first😆

so sweet of you😊, you give long one this time🤗
so about the part 😉
it was sweet and cute as like you😆

you are so fast,😊 you married them this soon😆

sharon revisiting the marriage and her thoughts about swayam was nice😳.

muskaan is a sweet heart a big hug for her..🤗
muskaan's bond with sharon and swayam was superb.😊

swayam and muskaan's conversation about the nek and sharon was cute, 😃
i love their relationship 😊

next come swaron😳 what to say about them,

haa got it😉😆

the part where swayam helping sharon was super😃,
sharons reaction to swayam's proximity was nicely written😉. do continue this type scene😉

the sudden change from informal to formal then again informal was nice😆
swayam was to excited to save the informality between them😆

swayam's mom is sweet. loved the bond between she and sharon😃
chachi is again cool😆

last but not the least the side hug was a treat🤗

long comment for long part...😆.
if u give a very long part next time then my comment will be also long😆
continue soon...😛
waiting is always torture😆

love ❤️
keechuu🤗🤗







Edited by keechu91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ani...
such a nice update
you kept your word of giving a quite long update
coming to the update
swaron married
sharon's reaction to swayam's proximity
that moment she cluched her lehanga
wowww
and swayams mom
such acute relation
swayam's dialogue where he says not to keep aformal relation
shows the depth of their friendship
swarons side hug at last was a cherry on yop moment
thnx 4 d pm
thanx 4 updating
agli update jaldi dena
update sooonish


Edited by athi_vrushan - 11 years ago

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