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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
nice concept dear..
love d cs..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Unres.

Nice start...
taani n rey both feeling each others presecne...
Edited by TR_lovebirds - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Nice chapter

Exited for the next chapter

As taani and Rey r

Going to meet each other

Rey really.does miss

Taani soo much

But why is taanis

Frieds ignoring her????

Tnx for Pms

Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Chapter 1 was lovely
Friends ignoring her?? Wonder why 😕
D3 gang in London, this will be interesting
Will love to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

WOW AMZING

CHAPTER

LOVELY

START

UPDATE SOON N PM ME

TAKE CARE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Nive update
Rey in london n both feeling dat they r near to eachother
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
awsome concept...
love chap 1...
why everyone is ignoring taani...for some surprises must be...
waiting for taarey re-meet...
updt soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
chapter 2

next day In morring
tani asusall got up n talked to her krishna ji dn got ready n went for her BF ON DINNING TABLE tani came jeniran (karan n jeni)were already there
t-gud morring bhai(hugged him n he kissd her fore head)
ka-gm baccha
t-gm bhabi(went to her n hugged her)
j-gm pari
tani sat down all were having there bf now tani was highly angry as every morring they three use to talk n have fun while bf bt now no1 r talking n r ignoring her v much
t-(after having bf angryly) bye m going have a nice day
n went from there showing how angry she is after she went janiran talk
ka-she is v angry
j-i kw
ka-i think we shd talk to her
j-(irritately she nly kws how she mannagd him from yesturday nt allowing him to talk to tani showing spok she was holding)shut up k u wil ruin d whole plan
ka-(scared) i i was s jstt i mean i want to talk to her from yesturday i dnt talk to her proprly(sadly)
jani felt bad cing his sad face evn she was sad as she dnt talk to tani from yesturday
j-(holding his hand) i kw baby evn i want to talk to her bt if we talk to her we will ruin whole plan of rohan n he strckly said us to ignor her till today 12 u want to make her birthday special na so plz controll u kw na or we il ruin it na
ka-hmmm
j-vaise vo tumne jo dance team bulae thi na shadi ke liyea un ka ph aya tha vo log arahe hai
ka -oh kab
j-ajj 3:00 ko
ka-ohkk it was tanis wish to call an dance team n we dnt said her dat we calld them
j-ya it will be a suprise for her she will be so happy
ka-i kw i jst love to c her happy face
j-ya she is lyk our baby
ka-ya
dn they talk for some tym n dn went for their work here with gang every1 got up n got ready n went to have bf
sh:-so guys ready
all:-ya s
h:-i have got appointment at 3
sw:-ohkk dn we shd leave or else we would get late
r-ya n d add is far from here
kr-k dn lets leave
every1 left for obrio mansion here wid tani she was highly irritated as no1 was talking to her so she thought to go back home n she left at 2:00 she reachd d mansion she saw janiran were sitting in hall n disscusing some thing imp as they say tani they stop talking tani saw them wierdly bt den she realised she is angry onthem so wid out saying hi to them she stromed into her room showng dem how much angry she was jeniran saw her going to her room n got to kw she is rly v angry so dey went to their work after some time d3 gang came to obrio mansion n dey were assumed bt seeing d mansion it was like some prince live here it was rly v beautiful dey went inside n were impressed by interior of house dey sat in hall n servent went to call jeniran
sh-wow this awasome mansion
si-ya itz like some prince or princess live here
al-ya right(bt rey was to lost to hear them he was feeling some strang feeling after so many yrs he is feeling lyk tani is near him bt ignored as how can she come here n whn rey came inside home tani was working in her lappy whn wind startd flowing she felt happy she felt REY bt she ignored as how can he come here reys thought got diturbed by karan voice d3 gang saw him n got up one handsome man standing in front of them by looking at him any1 can gusse he is a business tycone n beside him standing a vv beautiful hot lady any1 can fall for her by see karan al d3 gal(-sh) started drooling over him n d3 boys(-reyam) startd drolling over jenifer
ka-hi guys plz have a sit
all(simling)-hi sir
r-sir we r d3 dance group
ka-ya i kw nice to meet u(both shook hands)
r-same he here
ka-meet my fiance jenifer
j-hi guys here
wid d3 gal
ri-gosh he is so goodlooking yaar
si-dude he is so handsome
ne-ya so hot
all(-sh)-ya
sh-guys will u plz shut up
d3 boys
vi-god yaar d gal is so hot
ni-ya mam so beautiful
bh n ar-ha yaar
reyam-guys plz shut up
all-hi mam
j-hye plz dnt call me mam n all it dnt suite me call me jeni swt n simple
sh-ohkk mam oh sori jeni
j-datz rly gud
ka-so guys u il get all d details by jeni after some days as dis 2 dayz we wil be busy hope u dnt mind
r-no sir bt our rehersal
ka-oh u can start dem by today in rh kaka wil show u bt u shd meet my sis as she will decide every think in dis marrage lyk whc dance on whc day hope u dnt mind
r-ya sure
j-ya he is rite every think shd go according to her esspicially in dis marrage coz she dnt want anythink wrong in her bhia marrage she is v possesive abt us
ka-ya she loves me so much
j-hye she love even me
k ka-k my love i kw dat she love us vvv much
j-rite evn we love her lyk our child
ka-wrong she is our bhacha(both r smiling like idiot think how much dey both love tani she is their angel)
n here in d3 gang
ri-aww so swt dey love his sis so much
sh-ya she must be some1 specail
kr-ya n she is so lucky to have such a swt bro hye na swayam
here whn der were talking abt sister swayam was lost in thoughts of tani every1 saw dat he is lost n got to kw he is thinking abt tani n felt bad
kr-swayam
sw(coming back to sense)-yaya
kr-nothing
sw-hmm
ka-wait i wil jst call my sis u meet her n dnt worry she is rly v swt n frdly u il lyk her
sw-sure sir
ka-jeni plz go n call pari
j-ohkk
n went frm der to call tani

thank u all so much for ur comments n like thet mean alot for me n
sorry guys i kw the update was not at all nice bt plz bear if u want u can throw tamarow n al bt no eggs plz coz i hate dat smell 😵 😆
Edited by Iman_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Quite interesting
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
nice update
T's birthday wow
kj loves T so much
loved it
waiting for TR meet
continue soon

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