Said Raman to Mani (POEM)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys, Here's something I wrote down ..I'd love to hear Raman say this to Mani - man to man convo! ..
Please let me know what you guys think!
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(Ra)MAN to MAN(I)

Said Raman to Mani
So it's you buddy
The friend my wife talks about all day
The dad who's kid doesn't know how to play

The weirdo who gifts my wife romantic books
The romeo who fell flat for my wife's looks
The business tycoon who sent me away
Because of a mere 3 minute delay ..

Punctuality came to you too late in life...
So late that you couldn't hook my wife
She's taken and you don't stand a chance
So don't even try to romance

I'll fight you tooth and nail ..
I'll down rasam like a cocktail
I may be crabby and rude
Life has been cruel dude!..

But Ishita has brought about such relief
That I'm turning over a new leaf
I love her like crazy, I now see
All along, only she was meant for me

So finally I tell you Mr. Mani
Forget about being Ishu's Rajni
Subbu left Ishu, you may have been at the head of the line ..
But f*ck off now, coz she's only mine

Pack your bags and head back to Turkey
Find your kids another mommy ..
Well, do whatever I don't care ..
Just a warning, stay out of my hair!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
ohhh how nyc ...this iz soo coool...i'm usually a silent reader here..but luv this poem so much ...Plz snd it to CVs
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one. Aap ko Mani ne poem liknepe majboor kar diya.I liked it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks all, for ur responses :) ...yea ..I really felt sad for raman today ..and I hope he tells mani off...and doesn't just let go of ishu!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome ,😊,fantastic,,👏wat a rhyming yar 👍🏼👏
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Amazing poetry! A true masterpiece!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
That's one RKB style poem. Love it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
That was hilarious...MAN to MAN😆...loved the line-mine line😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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woww!!!!! Its amazing...

how cutely its rhyming stil being soo meaning full 👏

👍🏼 super liked.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! This was superb. Everything about the poem in brilliant sync.👏

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