July 10 Update (India)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey DSKers,

Here's the update for July 10 ..... please do forgive me for any mistakes as this is my first time writing an update ...... and please do leave your comments and suggestions about how I can improve😳 ..... thanks

short-forms used: Anu=Anupama, Chet=Chetanya, Rids=Ridhima, Chet's Mom=Shardha (used them both so please don't be confused)

  • the episode starts with Anu standing at the door looking on sadly as Chet's mom and Rids leave for the mandir
  • as the car pulls out of the driveway, Chet is returning from his morning run ....... he see's his mom leaving with Rids who he thinks is actually Anu as her face is covered with the red dupatta ........ he wonders jokingly why Anu didn't even look back at him
  • Chet walks up to the house and is at the entrance to the driveway when he see's Anu standing at the door and is shocked ...... he runs up to Anu and asks her who the girl with the red dupatta was that he saw going with his mom ....... Anu answers: "wohi jisne maa ne apne bahu ke roop me pasand kiya hai" ...... when Chet tells her that she is his mother's pasand, she tells him that it isn't her and that his mother's pasand is Rids
  • Anu runs down the driveway and Chet runs behind her ...... Chet finally manages to stop Anu at the end of the driveway and there's an emotional scene between them in which Anu tells Chet that "Rids sahi kheti hai ..... main sirf auron ke liye abshaguni nahin hoon ..... main apne liye bhi manhoos hoon .... khud ke liye ashubh hoon" ..... Chet trys to console her
  • cut to Rid and Chet's mom - Rids and Chet's mom reach the mandir where Chet's mom tells Rids that if Devi Maa gives the honi-wali bahu her blessings today it is very shubh .... when the reach the top of the stairs they see that the dwar is closed and upon asking the pundit they come to know that the murti had become khandit yesterday and that the dhwar would stay closed until a new murti is installed and says to Shardha that her daughter-in-law would not be able to get any ashirwad today ..... Rids thinks to herself: "Shukhar hai warna Shardha aunty ghanto tak pooja karwati" ..... both Rids and Chet's mom leave
  • cut back to Chet and Anu - Chet tells Anu that he understands that his mother could have made a mistake but he doesn't understand why Anu is wearing a different dupatta and not the one his mother had given him to give her bahu ....... he asks her how Rids got it
  • through the flashback we find out that Rids came into Anu's room looking for a red dupatta to match a red suit she has and found the one that Chet had given Anu and took it without letting Anu protest .....
  • scene returns to present conversation between Anu and Chet and she tells him that she thought she would apologize to his mother for not being able to say no to her little sister about the dupatta but now she knows that his mothere had sent the dupatta for Rids - flashback scene of end of yesterday's episode where Rids comes from behind Anu and leaves with Chet's mom while Anu's dupatta is caught in the couch and how Chet's mom had specifically said that Rids, her bahu, was looking nice - back to present ..... Chet asks Anu not to cry as he can't see tears in her eyes and tells her that he'll remove his mother's misunderstanding and that he won't let their dreams break and hugs her
  • cut to Ved's house - Ved, his mom, and his fiancee (Juhi) are sitting in the living room with a jeweller looking at jewellery when Shardha and Maya come in ..... Juhi and Ved take ashirwad from both of them and all sit down to talk where Ved's mom informs them that the sangeet function is tomorrow ...... Maya tells Ved's mom that "her daughter and Shardha's son are getting married" at which Ved gets excited and says "Anu ki shaadi ho rahi hai" .... eveyone looks shocked and Shardha corrects him by saying that its not Anu but rather Rids .... Ved looks sad for Anu while Juhi looks delighted
  • cut to scene with Maya and her mom - they discuss how they stole Anu's happiness and put it into Rids lap ..... Maya's mom tells her that whatever she has done has been great but she should put the final part of the plan intor action a.s.a.p because Rid's past may hurt her future if she takes too long
  • cut to scen with Chet and his mother - Shardha tells him that she feels badly that she and Rids could not do the pooja ....... Chet tells her that it is a good thing that they couldn't do the pooja and that even Devi Maa doesn't want a girl who isn't her bahu to do the pooja ..... Shardha is confused and shocked ..... Chet tells her that it is Anu not Rids that is to become her bahu and that Anu is the girl he always talked to her about ..... Anu is his pasand not Rids ......... his mother refuses to accept Anu ...... Shardha tells him that she can't believe that he is arguing with her as he always said that her pasand would be his pasand but he says that she is right but Rids isn't his pasand in any way ..... Shardha tells him that she has seen both girls and although both are from the same house they are as different as the ground and the sky are ....... Chet agrees and says she is right but doesn't understand what she saw in Rids to consider her to be so great ......... Shardha tells him that her final decision is that he will marry Rids not Anu and tells him that she'll see who he chooses ..... his mother or Anu and the episode ends on this dialogue

Okay, well that's the end of the episode ..... please do let me know how I can improve my update - i.e., make it shorter/longer, more/less dialogues, same/different formatting, etc😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for the update, and good job, Navy1985! Very nice. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks so much Tasha!
and the update was perfect! keep up the great job! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for the update Navy 😳 (can I call you that?)
It was really wonderful.
I really don't see any changes you need to make. It was perfect. No spelling errors either 😆 😆
Having a bit of dialogue in the update is perfecly fine, in fact it makes it a better update, so please do continue with that (just don't put too many, how many you put today is fine).
Omg yaar, poor Anu. I feel so bad for that bechari. But anyway how long can Ridhima keep this facade up? The cat will be out of the bag soon enough! 😃

Yuks
Edited by queenyuks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I agree with u Yukti 😉
It was damn gud + in deepth in detail 😳 😛 😃 😊
I'm luk forward 4 ur updates 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: queenyuks

But anyway how long can Ridhima keep this facade up? The cat will be out of the bag soon enough! 😃

Yuks

u called Ridhima a cat

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Edited by charmed ones - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome job! no need for improvements buddy!!! 👏

Don't worry guys Chet and Anu will get married...as it is shown in the title song of the show! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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VERY nice update, tasha!!!!! its perfect just the way it is! continue... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome job!!! thanks for all the great details..it was perfect... 😃

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