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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: juthee_alam
Woww lovely update :)continue soon :)

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Good updates

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Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic
Nice Update dear!!! I want to know more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks a lot, sakhi!! Will do soon!!

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Originally posted by: nancyshroff
Good going

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: son_s
Good one. ..but a short update. .Please continue soon with a long romantic update; )

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: pariangu
Shbdo me na varnit ho tumhari nain chavi...wow so romantic..;-) awesome update n waiting for ur next update..

Finally someone complimented my piece of poetry on the Forum!!! Thanks a lot, sweetie!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: MeghAn_AnYaFan
Wow! That was an awesome update, Vini! Loving the way you are progressing with this story. The intensity between them is really high, hope to see Navya realizing her love for Anant soon!
Do cont. soon!! :)

Thanks alot, Aru!!! I am obliged to receive compliments from a writer like you!!!! Don't even think this FF is going to end any soon!!! Minimum of 7 more updates to finish it, i guess!!! The realization will happen soon!!!

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Part 18:

" We cannot do this!"

said Navya which made Anant's heart skip beats. He was shocked that Navya was actually rejecting him again even after being her husband. He took out courage to ask her, fearing what her answer would be and his reaction to the answer,

"But why Navya? I mean what's wrong? We are married and in every way what we are doing is correct"

" The problem is I don't consider you, the person who married me forcibly, the one who is almost forcing me now, as my husband! You don't even understand the value of marriage, AnantJi! But you know how to use your husband rights on me! Is this right? Ask yourself" she said with a new found courage as she felt whatever is happening is very wrong and she cannot let this happen.

Anant's anger knew no bounds listening to her answer for his question. He grabbed her shoulders and twirled her to pin her to the wall and said,

" Don't say that Navya! I am not what you are thinking! I never even thought that you will think about all this in this way! I.." he was about to continue what he said but the male ego in him was not letting him confess what he was feeling and what was trying to come out since ages. He left her and said,

" Get out of this room, Navya!" Navya stood rooted to the place listening to the things he said and was trying to register them. Seeing her not moving, he dragged her and pushed her out of the room and locked him self up. Navya was shocked with her husband's unpredictable behaviour. She went down and outside, unknown of the destination and the climatic situations around her. It seemed as the climate stood as the symbol of the inner turmoil she was facing in her mind right now. She was feeling that how could he assume her reactions to his actions and carry out them. Did he forget that she had a right to free decisions? Did he forget that she was free to think what ever she wants and do what ever she wants? Is he the only person with feelings, according to him? Her mind was in state of storm and her heart was wrenching in pain while her soul felt destroyed as she felt being used by him, everytime.

On the other hand, Anant's mental situation was no better. She actually compared him to his father, who tortured his mom and was cause of her death? Was he actually like that? Questions in their minds were not taking a break but they didn't know that answer to all their mental turmoils and sorrow, misunderstanding and misbehavior was only, " Love" which for them to confess was like saying, ":I love you, enemy"

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Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago