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Posted: 10 years ago
Awwwsssmmm update
Loved it
Beautiful
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry kk for being late here.

You finally opened all the cards that were layed hidden except for one ofcourse.
Avni's outburst was very carefully handled.Nothing over board. I may sound a bit weird that I pitied Kiren for sum fraction of time. That does not mean that he is not to b blamed but then come on we r humans. He took the first step into the crime world so that his daughter can lead a healthylife but then his anger towards his wife took away all his understanding of right &wrong.
The gud thing in all this is that the two friends has cleared the fog of enemity between them more because if Arjun loses all his reasoning when coming face to face with Sikander then it's only Sameer who can handle the situation because no matter wat, the Chief do know & understands the thin line between personal &professional reasons.
I got a question Kk:
I remember in one of the update u mentioned Imran getting into this pharma industry that has sumthing personal reasons to it &I assumed ,due to lack of sufficient amount he couldn't save his father who was in need of medical help. Is it so or I m making my brain work overtime.😆
Another question pleej: The one who handed his entire business to Imran who later is Raza/Sikander, is there a reason for it or a back story to this?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really behind in this story😭 Promise to catch up in the weekend😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it..
you are really good at potraying characters and situations as well...
sam jun confrontation was amazing.. very well written 👏
arjun didnt want to take kiren's help
sam is right .. kiran is needed at this hour..
sam began questioning kiren..
omg.. etf ke last case me b siki involved tha
plz contd. soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
I have missed so much..will catch up soon..Sorry for delay..😔
Chap 17:
My God..!!! Dhamakedaar update..
Imran Raza..curious to know more about him.
Sik's men are killed..that's good.. and Anjali is safe.
The four at the same place..Kiran, Anjali, Arjun, Sam..that was epic..
Arjun remembered Kiran and also heard Anjali calling him papa..will Arjun tell Sam about his part with Kiran..?
Very well written..

Chap 18:
The way you have described Arjun's state was superb and brilliant..He knew now Sik is back again to harm his family..He even asked Sam to leave..
Sam is confused with Arjun's reaction
Anjali..poor girl..Her reaction to everything was not the way they expected..she remembered him and now he killed someone..my heart goes out for her..
About Kiran..I pity him..The frustration, helplessness in him was itching to come out which did..Glad he took a good decision about going against Sik..His talk with Sik was great.!
Arjun - Anjali scene was heart touching..
Avni got to know..
What will happen now..?? Hope this time Samjun together with Kiran nabs Sik..
Will comment on other parts soon.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chap 19:
Another dhasu update..!!
Will wait to know more about Raza.
Sam's part was very good in this..The way he handled everything regarding the safety of anjali and everyone, dealing with Arjun and bringing him to speak..
Everyone's reaction when Kiren entered was as expected.
And the confrontation, the way Arjun reacted, his state and even Kiren's part..it was brilliantly written..

Chap 20:
Anjali is going through which no kid could face and even understand..feel pity for her..
Arjun and Kiren's convo was superb..So Arjun don't want his help, but he will save Avni and Anjali.
Father-daughter moment was very emotional.
Now where did Arjun go.hope he doesn't do anything which will lead him to regret later.
Finally Sam got to know Sik exists..
Avni slapped him..well he deserved it..
The way you have portrayed Arjun's feelings and his mind state in these chapters is just brilliant and superb.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok firstly im really sorry that ive made an appearance now after all this time.. But kya karu busy thi babysitting and working
Secondly...WOW!!! Im speechless
Arjun's opening up to sam after all this time i was in tears like i could see this all unfold in front of me...
And omg i couldnt believe kiran was there when sikander killed roshni and injured arjun ufff mming my blood boil
And kiran and avni love eachother but hate eachother for the circumstances... To be honest i loved it when avni gave kiran a piece of her mind about time she cleared up the misconception kiran held of her
Cant wait for the next update xxx
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chap 21:
Speechless..not in a state to say anything..I cried.😭..sorry
Chap 22:
Imran's story was sketched well..
Indeed a painful update..
Sam and Arjun convo was superb..Finally there was no Rathod and Rawte but instead it was Sam Arjun..loved that part.!
Sometimes silence is the greatest punishment..and here, for Kiren, it is indeed one..he deserved it..!
Waiting for the war..
Thanks for pm..cont soon.
Finally done with all the chapters.
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
yay!! me first!! 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Awesome update di👏👏
loved it😃
kiren's revelations about siki.. all r shocked to know it.. n kiren feels guilty
everything was written very beautifully👏
the pair..anger..helplessness.. wonderful!!
loved raza n patil's bonding..really nice
siki fired his men for interfearing in patil's life..
bigger plans of siki.. the most terrific part!
Arjun's sudden outburst.. nothing new for others but Anjali.. she'll suffer so much
raza cares about Patil so much.. oh so now his men have kidnapped the girl..she's in trouble now!
police's involvement will make the things complicated for siki n easier for others😉
kiren smelt something fishy..
waiting for next update
do continu soon
thankx for pm😃
Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago

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