Arz Kiya Hai..3 : updtd pg 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Allah knows!!! I meant the verses and translations to be sane...

But in came Sahir and Arzoo and sanity flew out my window pane...😆

Arz Kiya Hai...

(Avi Credit : .Shiva.)

"Ek khwaish , ek tamanna, ek Sahir ki Arzoo,

Tanhai ko ab hai ek, humsafar ki justajoo;

Chandni ki girafth mein kare, jo barish se guftagu,

Ae waqt tu ab dhoond la, woh Sahir ki Arzoo."

And now for the translation for the ones who may need it and nope it doesn't rhyme...

(A wish, a desire, and aspiration of the wakeful ,

The loneliness now has a quest of a soul mate;

In the hold of the moonlight, who converses with the rain,

Oh time now seek that Arzoo of Sahir.)

Note:

Sahir in the first line means the wakeful soul while Arzoo means aspiration and the same make the appearance in the last lines as our very own Sahir and Arzoo.


khwaish= wish ; tamanna= desire ;

Sahir=a wakeful person ; Arzoo= aspiration ;

Tanhai = loneliness ; humsafar = soulmate ; justajoo = quest

girafth = hold ; guftagu= conversations



Gist :

This is the underlying desire here is that Sahir gets his humsafar in Arzoo and they further embark on their journey on a moonlit night as rain drizzles down upon them...soaking them in the thing that spins the world around... LOVE.


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So whats the verdict???

For the ones who are 😃 or 😆 after the onslaught of the verses... treat yourselves to

"The Imartis"

And for those who are or 😡 after the urdu banter... I have something for you as well... a La Arzoo style...

"The Imlis"

As for me ...I'll have both irrespective of the outcome 😆...

Allah knows!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh my my look who is here omg mam i m so thrilled to see you here..i can't believe my eyes..omg omg what to do...🤗 aap aaye bahaar aayi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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okay now serious comments 😊 teri shyari ka jawaab ni..i want more..ek se kaam ni chalega 😡 she indeed his sahir ki arzoo,...jo har haal mein poori hogi ...and he is his arzoo's sahir because arzoo madam really needs to come out of her charas bone ki dream to achieve something 🤣 i love their names
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: silky_harshad

oh my my look who is here omg mam i m so thrilled to see you here..i can't believe my eyes..omg omg what to do...🤗 aap aaye bahaar aayi...



Pehle 🤗... Same here dear ... and about the not believing the eyes... Main hi hoon😆... ab believe karne ke liye tu Myra ke chashme udhaar legi ya Daadi ke...😆 ya fir intezaar kar ke kab Sahir glasses pehenega apne shayarana andaaz mein..

Hmmm... "Bahaar" haan... that triggers another verse... let me try something on it ...😉



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Posted: 11 years ago
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wooow what a talent! 👏
Thanks for the translation or else i understood only half of it. Sooo beautiful. may be you should send this to CVs so they use it 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sneha!!!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗
iss sher ko mera

Wah Wah!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waise...allah knows...
sahir ki aarzoo sounds too romantic
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Posted: 11 years ago
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silk stop dancing ..🤔
Sneha di ❤️.. finally u are here.. i knew i knew, i saw ur comment in his profile, and i knew an amazing writeup is awaiting us..
si tune sahir ko dekha, and plss mujhe bohot sarey poems chahiye uspey.. his depth, attitude, his silence, his turmoil, everything..

di u better dont get vanished..🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome shayri sneha... Plz write more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: silky_harshad

okay now serious comments 😊 teri shyari ka jawaab ni..i want more..ek se kaam ni chalega 😡 she indeed his sahir ki arzoo,...jo har haal mein poori hogi ...and he is his arzoo's sahir because arzoo madam really needs to come out of her charas bone ki dream to achieve something 🤣 i love their names


🤗Thanks sweets... Even I like their names... apt for the characterization.
And that "charas bona" make me go 😆

Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 11 years ago

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