Ragna family- Ragna ff-ZINDGIDILSE-DESTINIED (ZDSD)- Note - Pg - 72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: appyK
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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: sugandhii
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Nyc update.. vithal surely proved best father 4 his Rajkumari..
The way he questions kamla about kalpi weeping awesome..
Father concern no..😉
Nd pakya kumbhkaran seriously.. he didn't even realized his kalpu was crying..
Hmm neetu n her so called drama i tell u..😡
N prem😡 he was thinking about his privacy..
Kamla n her intuition about her paakhi baby.. this is hint.. for kalpi beware paakhi baby is coming for snatching her aai 😕😆
Loving vithal concern n care 4 his Rajkumari😛

Thank u sugandhi..

yes vitthal will definitelt prove to be a best father.

glad u like it.

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mariee
I kindda like it !
But itll be more fun when the protagonists grow up ... so jaldi se unko bada kar do !
I read 3 & 4 together. & if u observe urself ... even u wud say that there was tons of improvement. Hope to see more improvement in ur coming updates as well !😃😃
Continue soon

MARUSHKAA

Thank u very much marushka,

thanks for the genuine reply,..but how to do bada my ragna😆..when i decide to write the ff i thought in third update i will give adult ragna..but silly me.,when i started to wrote it dont know what would happen to me that i cant able to stop writing each nd every movement..even the update i wrote did not take stand to stop ..forcefully i had to do gave an end to last three updates specially this latest..update

Mujhe update ke end ke bare mein jyada sochna padta h coz meri story over hi nai hoti...

nd about improvement reader like u can tell better about it..nd i m glad that u found improvement in my writting skill..

i will keep try for improvement

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ragnaareangel
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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Nice and sweet update, Ritu! Loved how Vithal cared for Kalpi. He couldn't see his princess crying. But in his tension forgot the simple fact that she must be hungry. Pakya sleeping like a kumbhkaran...lol. Neetu can't handle the pressure of her children and also Raghav. But Raghav is independent. Neetu decides to emotionally blackmail Kamala so that she comes back to work at Kapoor household. It works too. Vithal sad that he will miss his princess if Kamala takes Kalpi with her.
Can't wait for the kids to grow up... 😉

Thank u so much kiara,.

ur reply.make me read my update again but in short..

you point out each nd every fact smartly..

nd about grown up characters it will take time but i promise i will give some ragna scene in coming update.