Asya- Saher..you are within us.. an OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Khan villa:

As we stood holding each other hands.. our badi ammi cried in the wheel chair... and then she stood on her feet ,moved towards us.. hugged us.. and showered our faces with kisses...as we held each other hand.. completing each other

She cried for her loss..our loss... and she poured her heart out..and the truth of our parents..broke us.. they were brutally murdered... by a psycho ...and our parents were extraordinary couple as they breathed their last in each other arms... how we wish they were just ordinary couple.. who lived with us.. and with whom we would have created happy memories...

We cried, as the tears refused dry...and as we looked badi ammi dried our tears... she is still the pillar of our support.. she showed the door.

Through which ammi entered our house as the rays of sun.. and then brightened their lives..

The couch.. on which she drooled over dhoni.. the hall, where ammi and abbu had their locks and falls..

The pathway...where abbu played catch me if u can with ammi for her wishlist..

The kitchen.. which was a disaster when abbu made pizza for me.. the oven.. where ammi baked a cake with abbu cd..


The dining table.. where abbu became the jahappanah and ammi her kaneez... where ammi nostop bickering became abbu habit...

Asad room:

There stood the guitar..where abbu sang the ooh jaane jaane for ammi...

And also the song which defined human life... Zindagi ki yahi..

The green couch... where they had their first romantic fall..

The window.. which was made as door for ammi secret entry...

The bed.. ammi shared the very first night with abbu...😳

The cupboard.. the secret partner in abbu love.. hiding ammi earring..

The bathroom.. where ammi saw her jahappanah Six packs... and also the master planner... Plan isse kehta hai Miss farooqie...The door.. through which ammi barged inside his room.. just like how she did into his heart...

Zoya room:

The bed.. where ammi cried over her nightmares... and abbu secretly visited in the nights.. to see his love sleep in peace.

The bathroom. .where they hugged each other.. for badi ammi to know they were in love...

The backyard.. where abbu dressed up to propose to our EC ammi...

The white fence in the garden.. where the held each others hand.. and silently confessed their love before the wedding night..

Last but not the least...

The bench.. in the garden.. were they kept their difference aside.. over a cup of coffee.. and confessed their innermost fears to each other... and becoming each other strength.


This house is their Taj mahal... just like how they got married infront of the Taj.. they were imperfectly perfect together... they had their highs and lows.. but they held each other hands.. till the last moment of their life..

Sanam to Asad.

I am so sorry abbu.. that I didn't fulfil my responsibility towards my younger sis... u left the world trusting that I will looking after her. Just like how u did for ammi... she is so much of ammi.. abbu.. the innocence.. the loud mouth.. her nakkree... I see ammi in her... but I promise anything in the future.. has to pass through me... she just had a life ammi... though we were here ,, she lead a life as an orphan... and faced the problems.. yet just like ammi.. with a smile in her face...I promise.. I am never letting her go... and will be there.. forever,..

And she hugged her sister to her heart.. in the arms of sanam..

Seher to zoya..

Mom.. I am home atlast... it felt like I am hugging abbu... u know what badi ammi says.. aapi is just like abbu.. ocd.. EC.. responsible.. and in the journey of life.. she forgot to smile.. .. but I am here.. I will show her the world.. and fill her life with love. Joy and happiness... bcoz she deserves... them... I will never let her go.. and will be there forever,,

Saher to asya.

We will avenge your death.. if we have to sacrifice our love for it.. we will do it... we will bring you justice... and we will cherish your little memories we have..

We will cry for your loss..now and then yet we will go on to lead a happy life.. bcoz all you wanted was as to be happy... if we are happy... then you will be happy.. after all you are within us.. guiding us... blessing us...

The invisible shadow.. always looking after us..

Note: a big shout out for gita and tamara... dear lovely ladies.. bcoz of the conversation I had with you.. I realized this is still the story of asya... the crazy couple I fell in love..

Whole drabble was inspired by a song from a Dhanush Starrer. .V.I.P..

Love to know ur feedbacks..

Karan Singh Grover & Surbhi Jyoti

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Az07 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Di you made me cry.
Yes still QH is asya's story. Justice for asya is the bg story.
Sanam & seher is there to show asya. Each & every scene of sanam & seher I will be relating it to asya.
Yes asya was imperfectly perfect for each other.
Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome and emotional
thanx for pm
plz pm me for other work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome...


And Kalyani you are absolutely right.This was and is still the story of Asya who made me fall in love with QH and the love for the show still continues and so do my love for Asya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was awesome 👏
It made me nostalgic😭
It feels nice when someone reminds us Asya
I & some of my frnds don't follow QH2 but love Asya like crazy
thanx 4 writing this🤗

& Asya pics were awesome d 1st one is fantastic👏
loved this part
The bench.. in the garden.. were they kept their difference aside.. over a cup of coffee.. and confessed their innermost fears to each other... and becoming each other strength.
Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful, written from heart and straightaway touched the heart.
Thanks a lot for this kals.

Res
Will Come back later. Kinda busy now for a detailed comment that this OS deserves.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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its very emotional yrrr.
i m crying now but the best part is that AsYa r still the life of the shw Sanam Seher totally represent AsYa...
plzzz pm me when u update other work...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Di u got me emotional!!
Our AsYa are still alive in Sanam and seher!!!
Loved it!!!
Love u more for this!!
reading it i was seeing the slideshow of AsYa going in front of me!!
Their falls,
their Nok-Jhok!!
Their eyelocks!!
Confessions!!
Coffee and sitting on their bench sharing their fears!!
Being each others strength!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arey i forgot!!!
I wanna hug you!!🤗...
Love you ❤️...
Navi still busy wid her work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow
That was beautiful!
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

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