MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ]

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: katheriene
Awesome update👏
Rd's proposal was beautiful👏
Loved sid& sanyu for their plan😊
Update soon

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that was amazing yar...
sooo romantic.
loved it to core.
u made me to say this, again---- u r an awesome writter

aww das a huge complement sweetheart.. 😊

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Originally posted by: archakan

awesome update ... really really loved this part... it was sooo romantic ... eagerly waiting for next part...pls update asap dear...

thnk u so mch...

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Originally posted by: karishmagsewani
Loved it yaar! It was so romantic! Sid being sanyukta's great friend, was a great support to sandhir! Loved his character!
Well, finally he confessed! And both conditions of sanyukta were fulfilled! Yay!
Loved this chapter! Randhir's confession was a big hit! Finally he realised his love for her, unconditionally!
Continue asap! Thanks for pm'ing!
Keep writing,
Lots of love,
Karishma. :* <3

yes evry1 shud get a frnd like sid... Thnk u so mch...

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Awesome update.. pls pm me next time

😊 so sry ya my uf was nr working... Thnx 2 sakshi... She did pm 4 me... So even I donno who has got pm n who nt..

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Hello all.. Sorry 4 making u wait so long... Thnk u so mch 4 tremendous response n extreme lv.. Here wd nxt chapter..

PART 35a - THE ROMANTIC NIGHT I

We heard the clapping sound and realized that we were in the public at the centre of stage. We gradually broke the kiss and gazed each other. I blushed and dug my head down as I was hell shy. He inched closer to me upto my ears and whispered.

"wish yourself a happy married life, soon to be Mrs. Sanyukta Randhir Singh Shekhawat officially because as this film gets a success, the next I would claim you as mine", he said with a smile.
"what if it fails", I chuckled playfully as I knew, he would succeed as he is the RD.

"if so, the marriage party would be more grand", he chipped and hugged me.

"so would be mr and mrs. shekhawat. Go ahead, car is waiting for you for a grand surprize", said sid entering with claps.

"what surprize?", queried rd with questionable looks.
"come on man. Its your first night of relationship. Its a date planned by your only friend sid", replied sid with a proud gesture.

We both gawked each other with our mouth wide opened and then moved our vision towards him.

"what? Why are you both staring me like this? I am not planted any bomb in your date area", he chuckeld.
"but sid date?", I glared.

"oho sweetheart chillax. I know you dont know what to do in a date. Rd must have been to a date. Right dude?"
"yeah many times. I had so mang gfs you know"

I fumed at him as I knew he was teasing me. I left the place making an angry face. It was a fake anger just to tease him. I knew he may had been to date with maximum number of girls but he was loyal. I took a place besides the pool still faking an anger.

All Randhir...

Khafa hein wo humse
Naki humari bachkaniyon se
Wo sher hein to hum bhi kam nahi
Jite hein dil humne mohabbat se

I smiled at her innocence, as I knew her anger was for moments. She would definitely melt after peering my face.

"so your duty starts young man. You newly made gf, I mean fiance is angry on you. Truely speaking, this is the universal duty of every bf. Go and console her, your good luck ahead is waiting for you", said sid with a smile and tapping my shoulder.

He wished me good luch and left giving a side hug. I caressed my forehead though my index finger, bit my lower lip with a smile and follwed my lady love. She was standing facing the pool. I went to her and inhaled her aura standing behind her. I circled my arms around her waist and dug my face on the crook of her neck. She wheezed heavily and wrapped her arms against mine.

"why have you come to me? You must be with your gfs, with whom actually you spent your date", she irked.
"from now my only date is you, love of my life. My would be wife", I replied softly kissing her neck.

"dont try to fool me from your convincing compositions. I don't want to spoil my surprize", she fumed and left jerking my arms.

"hmm I too don't want to spoil OUR surprize baby. But unknowingly I did :( ", I said myself grinning my teeth.

All sanyukta..

"Awww my sweetheart. How cute he is saying MY WIFE. I wish I could kiss him that time. But now darling, you played with me. Now its my turn. Get ready for payback, my would be husband", I said myself smiling while leaving.

I acquired the left side back seat as driver was already the in car. A few seconds later, rd too joined me on back seat. The car was driven and the environment inside the car was completely silent. I was sitting cross legged, placing my left palm on my thies and right one on the seat. He crawled his left palm to mine and placed his fingers over mine.

Meanwhile, the drived started the music system as he was adviced by sid. It was playing 'do dil mil rahe hein, magar chupke chupke'.

Rd wanted to clutch my hand but I slipped it out and crossed my arms before he could do so. I again hid my smile, made a face to him, gazed him from the cornor of my eyes with every possible rage in me. He made a :( sad face and moved his vision outside the window.

Aww he is so cute everytime making this puppy face, I wish to snap it out. I too gazed out and lost in our memories within the music. A smile took crept on my face and again I put a glance on him. He was still thinking, how to console me staring outside the window. I too remained quite and soon we reached the destination.

Like a humble gentleman, he fastened and opened the car door for me after getting down from it. With a great attitude, I forwarded leaving him behind.

He ran and came infront of me holding his ears. Aww I had never seen anything more cute than his face. But he teased me, I had to take revenge so I remained in my attitude.

"i apologize my princess for my silly mistake. Please forgive me", he said making a puppy face.
"only in one condition it will be accpeted", I chipped in my attitude.

"you can keep two three, the number you want but please talk to me. When you dont say, I fell like I have become deaf. When you dont allow me to touch yourself, I feel like I am sensationless. When you jerk me, I feel like my life wants to leave my body", his last sentence dropped a tear from his eye.

I could not resist anymore, my eyes broke the dam and tears started flowing. I roughly brought his face closer to me placing my palms on his back neck and pressing my lips over his. Our tears met, our pain became mutual. We were feeling each other. Eventually he cupped my face and wiped tears through his thumbs from the gaps between our faces.

It was a silent smooth soothing kiss, which was the second one of that night. He was softly placing kisses one by one. After few minutes, it stopped. We gazed each other. I wiped the remaining tears from his eyes.

"consume this till you hear my condition", I chukled.
"i am ready to weep all the condition, if you console like this", he grinned.

"okey. From now, you will never see, touch any other girl like that because from your eyes will capture only me, your fingers will sense my body. Most important, the sexiest part of your body that is your lips will only be mine. I will touch, kiss, suck and bite it. You also dont have permission to touch it", I declared.

He smiled and replied "when you are infront me, the part my vision fall on remains active, all others could not sense anything. My hands are iron blocks, which are attracted towards its magnet only, that's you. My lips crave to get touched, kissed, sucked and beated by you. I will it never to get parted from you".

It was difficult enough to hide my blush as I had become completely pink.

"aaa. . . Lets check out the surprize", I said to change the topic and decrease the awkwardness.

He understood the situation, smiled at it and forwarded his elbow towards me. I blushingly wrapped my around his and went inside.

The whole area was decorated by white LEDs in flower shapes. Rose petals were spread in such a way as if a bedsheet was covered with hundreds of bubbles flying all over. A heart shaped board was hung at the front wall displaying FOR THE NEW COUPLE. A table was placed at the centre of the area containing, a chapeign bottle in a ice bucket and cake lightened with a single candle. The whole scene was just looking like a dream come true. It was beautiful, romantic and calm.

We both were mesmerised by the beauty of the scene. Our face gloomed up and lips curved for a smile.

"i had never imagined, our first date would be so heavenly", he lipped out with a surprize.
"and I had never imagined that this idiotic sid can be a so romantic planner", I completed.

"must be the effect of divya then", he taunted.
"you right, he was really flirty and unromantic like you before meeting divya", I replied.

"so you think I am unromantic?", he eyed me.
"have you done anything romantic till now? Huh", I disgusted.

"alright then. Tonight you will know what is romance would be mrs. Shekhawat", he smirked.
"lets see you can impress me or not mr. Shekhawat"

"i am RD baby. Challenge is favourite game", he said with his sigmature smirk.
"really? Done", I said raising my eyebrows.

To be continued...

Thank u 4 reading.. Hope u ppl like it.. Lv u all.. Plz do cmnt frnds.. I wl keep entertaining u.. Muaaahhh..

Edited by Nain5000 - 10 years ago