MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ]

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Read your this ff in one go. [Amazing. I just loved it. Plz pm me the next part anf acept my buddy request.

thnk u so mch dear... Blessed 2 hv such readers.. M glad u ppl r liki mg it so much... Lv u.. Absolutely I wl pm u...

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Read all d parts in one go..u r a awsm writer..plz updt d nxt prt soon nd do pm me

dats absolutely my pleasure sweetheart... Lv u so much... God bless.. 😊

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Still confused??RD😡.. Go and say " I love u" to sanyu!!!
Amazing update😳

hahaha he wl say dear.. Ds is da confessn part.. 😆

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Originally posted by: urvisaini
Nice update
Suzi and sid are sweethearts
Loved the song
Waiting for the sid Rd conversation
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

yup dey r.. Thnk u so mch...

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Hello all.. I m amazed wd such a beautiful response 4m u guys... I cant describe my happiness in words.. Lv u every1... Realy really touched 4m da cmngs.. Keep lvng n keep supporing my frnds... Thnk u so mch muaaahhh... Here I am wd nxt chapter.. So here I go..

PART 34b - THE CONFESSION II

I was fuming in anger and came out from room. When I sat, sid came and captured a seat besides me.

"heyy bro", he tapped my back.
"can you leave, I wanna be alone", I digusted.

"so this trick works on eyeryone"
"what? Trick? Which trick?"

"jelousy. Her plan worked on me and you too"
"what plan? I am not getting you"

"the night she confessed her love to you, she called me and informed about the matter. She badly sobbing. I could not resist and gave her the idea of this trick. I felt pity on her and informed about my meeting and also I asked to help her. Next week, everything was infront you. Dude you both love each other. And that too so much. She has not anything from her life. I have seen her breaking down, her sorrows, her pain, her sobbing, her sacrifices, her hard work. She had only given to others, never taken anything from anyone. Not a single caressing word of love. Dont you think she has the right to get it? Dont you think her heart also pains when you say that you dont love him? She is an angel who spreads love all around her. She wants to be yours and you to ber her. Confess her buddy"

"but. I dont..."
"you dont realize that you love or not. Answer me few question. And you will get your answer"

"when you have problem, whom you want to solve it?"
"sanyukta"

"if you have sorrow or happiness, with whom you want to share?"
"sanyukta"

"if you want to cry whose shoulder you want?"
"sanyukta"

"if you really want to get love, care and affection, who it should be"
"sanyukta"

"now this is an old and filmy trick. Close your eyes and remember your happiest moments"

I closed my eyes and flashes of my smiles, tears everything came and in them, there was a single person "SANYUKTA". I opened my eyes and a tear drop escaped from my eyes.

"see you love her. Now just go and confess. When she applied this on me, I dragged divya inside a room and without any query kissed till we were breathless. Its your turn sporty"

I quickly dialled sanyukta's number and aborted it soon because I knew that she was angry on me. I called a waiter and wrote "meet me near pool, waiting" in a tissue paper and asked him to give it to the lady in black gown.

As he left, I faced sid to apologize. I forwarded my hand shook with him.

"thank bro, if you would not been there, I would have lost the only relation of my life"
"god never does injustice. Its high time now have her"

I hugged him by side and he tapped my back hugging me back.

"ok now let me leave now and listen kiss her infront of all. I would love to loose the challenge", he said moving back with a smile.
"bye", I replied him with a blush.

Meanwhile sanyu came and called me, when she was facing my back.

"who is this?", queried sanyu in confusion.

I turned around and she fumed in anger.

"why did you call me here? You want to get rid of me. Right?", she said crossing her arms.
"i am sorry. Please", I said making a baby face.

"hah. I dont care. If I would have done this, you would have never seen my face"
"so you are doing that now"

"whatever", she disgusted and was leaving.
"i love you sanyukta", my voice high.

She was facing me back. She stood still in that position for a few minutes and turned making an amazed face. Her mouth was a shaped perfect O.

I repeated "I LOVE YOU, I REALLY DO".

She was still staring me making her eyes wide.

"sanyukta, say something", I was not less than begging.

She came out of her world and pouted, "aaa..i dont believe you".

I smiled at her innocence as I knew what she was upto.

"so what can I do to bring your belief on this", I lipped out.
"two conditions, you have to go through two conditions", she demanded.

"oh god. Two. One I know. Whats the other one. God why these girls are so difficult to handle", I had a convo with my brain and god as I knew I needed them both in this situation.

"so ready?", she asked.
"nothing is impossible for RD", I said in a proud voice.

"ok 1st is you have to propose to me.and that too in a really different way. This is a condition which every girl wants. Right?"

I gulped and she continued..

"And next is you were guilty with our kiss right?"

I nodded.

"so kiss me in a way that I would believe that you are not guilty. So agree?", she raised her eye brows.
"yes", I replied like a helpless making a puppy face.

She left and I started fighting with myself.

"sid told only about this not about these confusing conditions. What would I do now. First I shall him regarding this"

I moved to his room asking the receptionist his room no. I dashed into his room and he was busy in a call.

"i will call you back baby", he said hanging up the phone.

"what happened dude? Why are you fuming"
"why did not you tell me about these conditions"

"what conditions? I am not getting you"
"dont tell me that she not informed you about this"

"noway, I have no idea about what conditions you are telling about. Okey tell me what are they"

I explained him those conditions and he sat on his bed in a jerk.

"oh god. I know her since childhood, she never looked too fast yaar. God these girls. Everyone is same"
"exactly I am saying this", I said signallig my hands and took a seat beside him.

"its not time to think on this. Just do what she said. For second one I said you and for the first one do that in which you are best and she loves that on you. Got it"

I smirked and left giving him a bone crushing hug. I knew what I had to do.

All sanyukta..(in party room)
"God.. One hour has passed. Where is he? Has he changed his mood", I fought with my mind gazing restlessly to the entrance.

Meanwhile I heard something and turned around towards the stage. There was rd standing with a headset microphone. The whole room was dark and he was under spot light. My happiness had no bounds and a blush grew up on my cheek. He started..

"may I have your attension ladies and gentleman. This is dedicated to the lady in black dress, who is the brightness of my life for whom I am standing infront of you smilingly. I LOVE YOU SANYUKTA. This is for you.

Ek shararat aankhon me
Ek jaadu hai baaton me
Labon ka kya kahun mere doston
Diwane hazaar hai iske jaahan me

Mere dard jisne liyen hein
Mere aansu jisne chhine hein
Meri zaruraton ko jisne samjha hai
Mujhse zyada mujhe usne pyar kiya hai

Kabhi sabse achhi dost hai wo
Kabhi maa se zyada khayal hai usko
Kabhi mere aansu le jaaye wo
Kya kahun kitna pyar mujhse usko

Uska bas charcha kya karun
Aao milwaaun tum sabse usko
Meri nindein uspe kurbaan karun
De dun saari zindagi meri usko"

Meri hi khatir bana hai tu
Mujhko jo haasil duaa hai tu

He now started singing. Yes he was singing infront of everyone only for me. I was smiling with a pink blush on my cheeks. I was all red in shy gazing the floor. Suddenly I gazed up and found the he was singing pointing towards me.

Tu rasta tu rehguzar Mere ishq ka hai pata
Tu justaju tu aarzoo Dil de raha hai sada - ( ( he said everything pointing his index finger towards me ) )

Aa bhi ja mere mehermaan
Aa bhi ja na reh juda
Aa bhi ja mere mehermaan
Aa bhi ja na reh juda
Aa bhi jaa.. - ( ( he signalled me go come go him and I reached the stage blindly follwing his words ) )

Be-intehaan yun chaahun tujhe main
Jo toot ke tu bikhre yahaan - ( ( he bent on both his knees and spread his arms wide ) )

Khatm naa hogi aisi mohabbat
Karne laga hoon main bepanaah - ( ( he took my hand in his and kissed it lightly ) )

Qatra bhi tera mile jo rag rag me meri basaaun
Tere pyar ko, deedar ko dil de raha hai sada

Aa bhi ja mere mehermaan
Aa bhi ja na reh juda
Aa bhi ja mere mehermaan
Aa bhi ja na reh juda
Aa bhi jaa...

He was looking just like a rockstar glittering like a star.

Aagosh mein yun bhar ke tujhe main - ( ( he hugged me ) )

Saare jahaan se kar doon juda - ( ( I hugged him back and he caressed my hairs ) )

Hai aks tera mere liye hi
Tera nishaan bhi mujhse judda - ( ( he clutched my hands and the next moment was my dream coming true. I was dancing with him ) )

Yeh bekhudi kaise thaamun
Mithta chala jaa raha hun - ( ( we were inches apart and gazing each other's eyes ) )

Ek pal tere deedar ko dil de raha hai sada - ( ( he stretched my arms and I turned around facing him back, completely attached to his chest. He placed his chin on my shoulders and I shut my eyes tightly)

Aa bhi ja mere meherman
Aa bhi ja na reh juda
Aa bhi ja mere mehermaan
Aa bhi ja mere mehermaan - ( ( all the time he rubbed his nose and lips on my neck ) )

Mehermaan mere mehermaan..
Na reh juda mere mehermaan..

He ended up revolving around me and I was just blushing blushing and blushing. Then he forwarded a bunch of red roses sitting in one knee.

"so female love of my life, would you give me the pleasure be the male love of your destiny", he said handing over me the bunch of roses.
"i would love to, my male love", I blushed and accepted the roses.

He stood up and grabbed my waist from left arm and with the right palm he clutched my palms. He put a ring on my ring finger on left palm.

"now officially, you are mine. Mrs. shekhawat beacause I accept you my lawafully wedded wife in the name of jesus", he said holding my hand.
"i too accept yo my lawfully wedded husband in the name of jesus. But the rituals are still remaining and your second condtion is still unfilled, mr.shekhawat. Also I did not know you have become christian", I replied with a blush.

Suddenly he left my palm and placed his palm on my neck.

"any religion, any caste, any crade which makes you mine will be mine and i am not guilty sweetheart because lions just hunt never think to grab it", he said claiming my lips.

His warmth was washing me out. I responded to it and crashed his lips for one more. His grip on my waist grew tighter and we were engrossed in the pleasure. Pleasure of getting each other, pleasure of being with each other pleasure of the climax of every pain and loneliness and most important pleasure on being complete.

How many times we had kisses, eventually I did not count but it broke when we heard a huge clapping sound around us and we realized we were at the centre of hall between the public.

To be continued...

So a long part finally... Nxt phase is love phase.. Romance and jelousy continues... Thnk u 4 reading... Lv u all.. Plz do cmnt as I crave 4 it...

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Edited by Nain5000 - 10 years ago