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@ILuvPrachiDesai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

hey guys you know ive been thinking ekta should really give this story a shot. she could produce a short film with raya. we should really mail this script to her hehe :)

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@bpatil3

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: priyajan12
Hello everyone
M making my debut here
Malati di Naseem di jyothi di Sarah di awesome story yaar
Too ROFL!!!!

PS dheet is stubborn Saarah di

Now m starting

Ram aur Priya ke swar sunkar saare Kapoor Rajmahal ke vaasiyo ki neend toot jaati hai
Raja Amaranth Rani Krishna Kunwar Rishabh aur Rajkumaari Natasha jab Ram Ur Priya ke khwwaaab gaah mei pahuchte hai toh woh hairan reh jaaye hai ki itni raatri ke paschaat yeah dono gaa kyu rhe hai
Na jaane kyu unko gaate sun unko bhi us sangeet mehphil mei hissa lena ka Mann kartha hai
Phir poora Kapoor khandhan Ram Priya me kaksh mei baith kar gaana gaa rhe hote hai apna dil aur Jaan we
Aur yeah gaana that
Tu lagaile jab lipishtick
Heele la aala district
JeelA top laage loo
Ho jeela top laage looo
KamariyA Jo le laapa lau
Lollipop laage look
Gaate gaate sab ko yeah dhyaan nhi reheta hai ki kab praatahkaal ho jaata hai
Jab tak baawarchi khaane k mukhiya shri shri Bansi kaka padhaarte nhi hai
Kadachit shri shri Bansi kaka ke aagman we sabko yeah gyaat ho jaata hai ki suprabhat ho gyi hai

How was it
Hope my Hindi was good
Priya

Hi Priya welcome to paagal khana😆😆

aapki hindi bikul shuddh aur sampoorn hai😛😆

you carried the flow so well😆😆

saara rajmahal ko jaga diye raya ne😆😆

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: ILoveRamKapoor
hey guys you know ive been thinking ekta should really give this story a shot. she could produce a short film with raya. we should really mail this script to her hehe :)

Sarah u have to mail this to SAB tv wale😆😆 upfront they will throw the scripts n make it into millions pieces n throw it in the gutter😆😆

but idea accha hai 😆 hum jaise pgaloan ko hi samjh ayega😆 ey story.

DHEET means rigid

Edited by bpatil3 - 11 years ago

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dontinvademars

@ILuvPrachiDesai

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Sarah u have to mail this to SAB tv wale😆😆 upfront they will throw the scripts n make it into millions pieces n throw it in the gutter😆😆

but idea accha hai 😆 hum jaise pgaloan ko hi samjh ayega😆 ey story.

DHEET means rigid

this is pagalon waali comedy..humare jaaise producer director kahin to honge😆

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: ILoveRamKapoor

this is pagalon waali comedy..humare jaaise producer director kahin to honge😆

Haan hum se bhi bade pagal hai duniya me😆

haan producer aur director pagal hote hai issiliye story banti hai na😆 aur fir hum jaise pagal apni pagal panti shuru kardete hai😆

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peeyara

@peeyara

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: priyajan12
Hello everyone
M making my debut here
Malati di Naseem di jyothi di Sarah di awesome story yaar
Too ROFL!!!!

PS dheet is stubborn Saarah di

Now m starting

Ram aur Priya me swar sunkar saare Kapoor Rajmahal me vaasiyo ki neend toot jaati hai
Raja Amaranth Rani Krishna Kunwar Rishabh aur Rajkumaari Natasha jab Ram Ur Priya me khwwaaab gaah mei pahuchte hai toh woh hairan reh jaaye hai ki itni raatri ke paschaat yeah dono gaa kyu rhe hai
Na jaane kyu unko gaate sun unko bhi us sangeet mehphil mei hissa lens ka Mann kartha hai
Phir poora Kapoor khandhan Ram Priya me kaksh mei baith kar gaana gaa rhe hote hai apna dil aur Jaan we
Aur yeah gaana that
Tu lagaile jab lipishtick
Heele la aala district
JeelA top laage loo
Ho jeela top laage looo
KamariyA Jo le laapa lau
Lollipop laage look
Gaate gaate sab ko yeah dhyaan nhi reheta hai ki kab praatahkaal ho jaata hai
Jab tak baawarchi khaane k mukhiya shri shri Bansi kaka padhaarte nhi hai
Kadachit shri shri Bansi kaka ke aagman we sabko yeah gyaat ho jaata hai ki suprabhat ho gyi hai

How was it
Hope my Hindi was good
Priya