Arjun-Draupadi Kalyug FF- Shubh Punah Milan-Part 35(2/11) - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago
@yagya unres my post in page 26.. 😃
now going through the new update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

regarding Part 9..
simple superb..Yahgya agtain in paarth's hands.. blush blush..
also i soo loved Paarth n madhav's convo... cute!!
great work dear... 👏 😃


about part 10
yudi romancing!! 😲 😳 😉
ha ha!! thts a surprise for me... i tried to imagine rohit n mouni.. partially successful!! 😆 😉
cute dear..
also the banner is superb... it did hepl me to put up all those images!! 😉

Thanks a lot, Di!!! Rohit and Mouni are a difficult pair to imagine, indeed!!! The banner credits go to our FF creative unit, Di!!! I wanted Aryaputra Yudhishtir to be a bit romantic so i tried out something!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

@yagya unres my post in page 26.. 😃
now going through the new update!!

Checked it , Di!!! Thanks!!! Waiting for your comments on this one too!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great one dear!!

good work paarth... nudged yagya n uff arjun's name on her mehndi!! 👍🏼

panchali stealing hearts... i want a jealous paarth... who will scratch out eyes which look at his panchali!! 😳



btw is brihu gonna perform????

Edited by Krishnaa_Nair - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

Great one dear!!

good work paarth... nudged yagya n uff arjun's name on her mehndi!! 👍🏼

panchali stealing hearts... i want a jealous paarth... who will scratch out eyes which look at his panchali!! 😳



btw is brihu gonna perform????

Yeah, Di!!! Next update will have our dear Brihu dancing!!! Priya paarth is soon gonna be jealous, Di!!! Thanks a lot, Di!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni


Love you, sakhi!!! Your comments are too sweet yaar!!!! Haan Aryaputra buri baat hai aur bhratha aapki natkhat to yahan bhi hai!!!! I will do soon!!! Thanks a lot, sakhi!!!


You're welcome! 😃 Sangeet mein Govind ki teasing ko bhi include karna!
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You're welcome! 😃 Sangeet mein Govind ki teasing ko bhi include karna!

Avashya karoongi, sakhi!!!
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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

It is a custom, darling!!! I will do on Friday!!!

i m waiting for FridayFriday
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Part 12:

Everyone was enjoying a lot in the Mehendi as the performances continued. Aejun continued to tease Yagya about names in Mehendi.
" Arjun, tum bhi to yahan ho!!! To tum kiske naam likvaoge?"
" tumhe shigr pata chal jayega, yagya!" He said confidently and left while Yagya was enjoying a performance. Yagya badly wanted to clap for that amazing performance on "Udi" but Mehendi was stopping her. She was startled that Arjun was not irritating her and she turned to see no one there which made her wonder. Suddenly Music started,

Bichhoo mere naina badi zehereeli ankh maare
Kamsin kamariya saali ik thumke se lakh maare
Note hazaaron ke, khulle chhutta karaane aayi
Husn ki teeli se beedi chillam jalaane aayi
Aayi chikni chameli chhup ke akeli pawwa chadha ke aayi
Aayi chikni chameli chhup ke akeli pawwa chadha ke aayi..


The spot lights first focused on her eyes to highlight a mesmerizing wink. Next it moved on to the slender waist of her to make people gasp on the jhatka. Listening to the gasp, Yagya turned to see Arjun aka Brihu dancing. Her lips parted to form a O-shape. The dance continued and the stage was on fire due to heat of the beauty.

Jungle mein aaj mangal karungi
Bhookhe sheron se khelungi main
Makkhan jaisi hatheli pe angaare le lungi main
Haaye! gehre paani ki machhli hoon Raja
Ghaat Ghaat dariya mein ghoomi hoon main
Teri nazron ki lehron se haar ke doobi hoon main


Already magic was spreading on everyone and the rest of Pandavas and dear Kanha, the mastermind too joined it to steal the hearts, dressed as women to make even women envious.

Hoye.. jaanleva jalwa hai
Dekhne mein halwa hai
Pyaar se paros doongi toot le zaraa
Yeh toh trailer hai poori filam dikhane aayi
Husn ki teeli se beedi-chilam jalaane aayi


The grace in the muscular body which was hot to behold was making Yagya skip heartbeats and she started laughing joining others in it.

aayi chikni chameli chhup ke akeli pavva chadha ke aayi
ayi chikni chameli chhup ke akeli pauua chadha ke aayi..
Banjar basti mein aayi hai masti
Aisa namkeen chehra tera
Meri neeyat pe chadhke chhoote na hai rang gehra tera
Joban ye mera crajy hai raja
Saare pardo ko kaatungi main
Shaamein meri akeli hain aaja sang tere baatungi main
Haaye! baaton mein ishaara hai
Jisme khel saara hai
Tod ke tijoriyon ko loot le zara
Choom ke zakhmo pe thoda malham lagaane aayi
Husn ki teeli se beedi chillam jalaane aayi


People were blushing now due to the bold lyrics of the song and their extremely sensual dance. Even the bold Yagya, had hard time, controlling her blush.

aayi chikni... aayi.

Aayi chikni chameli chhup ke akeli pawwa chadha ke aayi
Aayi chikni chameli chhup ke akeli pawwa chadha ke aayi..


All tha Pandavas started whistling to mark the end of their extreme performance which infact increased the temperature of the place. Devika was already blushing and Kunti was pulling Kanha's ear for such a sensualistic idea. Nakul to Arjun,
" I bet if you eren't my bhai and were a girl, wouldn't have spared you after performance." Arjun playfully hit him on the shoulder and proceeded towards Yagya who was trying to control herself and said,
" not only you, Madam, even we can dance and be in the limelight!"
" Haan, Arjun!! But not as a boy but as a girl" and burst out laughing while running away from there making Arjun chase her.
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Translation:
my eyes are like scorpions, they give a very poisonous wink..
this damned slender waist kills lacs with a jerk,
it has come to get change for notes of thousands,
(she) has come to light cigarettes n pipes with the matchstick of beauty..
the beautiful Chameli has come all alone in the hiding and drunk on a quarter..
the beautiful Chameli has come all alone in the hiding and drunk on a quarter..
Censored yaar!!!

TBC
Hope you liked it!!! Thank you Krishnaa Di for the song selection!!
Please comment and like!!!
Edited by Yagyaseni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow di it is superb👏 is it the whole part ?or still coming up?

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